Changeset 0feefc9f

Timestamp:

08/16/2023 07:18:24 PM (9 months ago)

Author:

Douglas R. Reno <renodr@…>

Branches:

12.0, 12.1, ken/TL2024, ken/tuningfonts, lazarus, plabs/newcss, python3.11, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, trunk, xry111/llvm18

Children:

a680e6e7

Parents:

fc9dd6eb

Message:

pm-utils: minor reword of the warning about using it on systemd.

Location:

general/sysutils

Files:

• pciutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• pm-utils.xml (modified) (1 diff)

general/sysutils/pciutils.xml

@@ -257 +257 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          is library that allows applications to access the PCI
+          is a library that allows applications to access the PCI
           subsystem
         </para>

general/sysutils/pm-utils.xml

@@ -34 +34 @@
     <note revision='systemd'>
       <para>
-        On a system using <application>Systemd</application> as the init
-        system, <application>Systemd</application> already provides these
-        functionalities so this package is likely unneeded and it may
-        conflict with <application>Systemd</application>.  Read the
-        document for <filename>suspend.target</filename> and
+        On a system using <application>systemd</application> as the init
+        system, <application>systemd</application> already provides this
+        functionality. As a result, this package is probably not needed, and it
+        may conflict with <application>systemd</application>.  Read the
+        documentation for <filename>suspend.target</filename> and
         <filename>hibernate.target</filename> in the man page
-        <filename>systemd.special(7)</filename> for details.
+        <filename>systemd.special(7)</filename> for more details.
       </para>
     </note>