Changeset 331041e3 for lxqt

Timestamp:

07/18/2023 02:07:08 AM (11 months ago)

Author:

Douglas R. Reno <renodr@…>

Branches:

12.0, 12.1, ken/TL2024, ken/tuningfonts, lazarus, lxqt, plabs/newcss, python3.11, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, trunk, xry111/llvm18

Children:

059c05c

Parents:

aac49d9

Message:

lxqt-session: some minor text modifications

File:

• lxqt/desktop/lxqt-session.xml (modified) (8 diffs)

lxqt/desktop/lxqt-session.xml

@@ -116 +116 @@
     <para>
       <command>sed -e '/TryExec/s|=|='/usr'/bin/|' -i xsessions/lxqt.desktop.in</command>:
-      If using a display manager, the full path of the <quote>TryExec</quote>
-      directive has to be given so that the <application>LXQt</application>
-      desktop will appear in the sessions list.
+      If you are using a display manager, the full path of the
+      <quote>TryExec</quote> directive has to be given so that the
+      <application>LXQt</application> desktop will appear in the sessions list.
     </para>
   </sect2>
@@ -127 +127 @@
     <para>
       Window Managers other than <xref linkend="openbox"/> may be used, e.g.
-      <xref linkend="xfwm4"/>. Notice that <xref linkend="icewm"/> is not a
-      good replacement. <application>Fluxbox</application> does work, although
-      in this context (with <xref linkend="lxqt-config"/>) <xref
+      <xref linkend="xfwm4"/>. Please note that <xref linkend="icewm"/> is not a
+      good substitute. <application>Fluxbox</application> does work, although
+      in this context (with <xref linkend="lxqt-config"/>), <xref
       linkend="openbox"/> is better.  The configuration file
       <filename>/usr/share/lxqt/windowmanagers.conf</filename> comes with many
@@ -136 +136 @@
       ones not included in
       <filename>/usr/share/lxqt/windowmanagers.conf</filename>, you can use the
-      <command>lxqt-config-session</command> "search" button, e.g. for <xref
+      <command>lxqt-config-session</command>'s "search" button, e.g. for <xref
       linkend="fluxbox"/>, navigating through the file system until you can
       choose <command>fluxbox</command>. <!--Alternatively, if you wish the Window
@@ -163 +163 @@
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>
-          lxqt-config-session, lxqt-leave, lxqt-session, and startlxqt
+          lxqt-config-session,
+          lxqt-leave,
+          lxqt-session, and
+          startlxqt
         </seg>
         <seg>
@@ -184 +187 @@
           <para>
             is a GUI configuration tool for <command>lxqt-session</command>
-            settings.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="lxqt-session lxqt-config-session-prog">
@@ -196 +198 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a graphical dialog to terminate the session.
+            is a graphical dialog to terminate the session
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="lxqt-session lxqt-leave-prog">
@@ -208 +210 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a lightweight X session manager.
+            is a lightweight X session manager
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="lxqt-session lxqt-session-prog">
@@ -221 +223 @@
           <para>
             is used to start the desktop session for
-            <application>LXQt</application>.
+            <application>LXQt</application>
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="lxqt-session startlxqt">