Index: appendices/dependencies.xml
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--- appendices/dependencies.xml	(revision f283e24fc2f1e2ee093a53e652185e2c902bd5bb)
+++ appendices/dependencies.xml	(revision 0ea8a70130a4b448a4fe56b322c320f3574a15e0)
@@ -62,5 +62,5 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Coreutils, Sed, Tar, Vim</seg>
+          <seg>Coreutils, Sed, Tar, and Vim</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -98,5 +98,5 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Acl, Libcap</seg>
+          <seg>Acl and Libcap</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -162,5 +162,5 @@
         <seglistitem>
           <seg>Binutils, Bison, Bzip2, DejaGNU, Diffutils, Expect, Findutils,
-          Flex, GCC, Gettext, Gzip, Libtool, and Tar.</seg>
+          Flex, GCC, Gettext, Gzip, Libtool, and Tar</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -261,6 +261,6 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, File, Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep,
-         Make, Perl, Sed, Texinfo and Zlib</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, File, Gawk, GCC, Glibc,
+         Grep, Make, Perl, Sed, Texinfo and Zlib</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -421,5 +421,5 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Bash, Diffutils, Findutils, Man-DB, and Eudev</seg>
+          <seg>Bash, Diffutils, Eudev, Findutils, and Man-DB</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -521,5 +521,5 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Diffutils, Perl</seg>
+          <seg>Perl</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -665,5 +665,5 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Procps-ng,Psmisc</seg>
+          <seg>Procps-ng and Psmisc</seg>
         </seglistitem>
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@@ -801,5 +801,5 @@
         <seglistitem>
          <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Gettext, Glibc, GMP, Grep, Make,
-         MPFR, Patch, Readline, Sed and Texinfo</seg>
+         MPFR, Patch, Readline, Sed, and Texinfo</seg>
         </seglistitem>
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@@ -863,5 +863,5 @@
         <seglistitem>
           <seg><ulink url="http://gcc.gnu.org/wiki/Graphite">CLooG-PPL</ulink>,
-               <ulink url="http://gcc.gnu.org/wiki/GNAT">GNAT</ulink> and
+               <ulink url="http://gcc.gnu.org/wiki/GNAT">GNAT</ulink>, and
                <ulink url="http://gcc.gnu.org/wiki/Graphite">PPL</ulink></seg>
         </seglistitem>
@@ -875,5 +875,6 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, GCC, Grep, Make, and Sed</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, GCC, Grep, Make, 
+         and Sed</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -982,22 +983,22 @@
 
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-
-      <segmentedlist>
-        <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
-
-        <seglistitem>
-          <seg>MPFR, GCC</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep,
+         M4, Make, Sed, and Texinfo</seg>
+        </seglistitem>
+      </segmentedlist>
+
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+        <segtitle>&testsuites;</segtitle>
+
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+        </seglistitem>
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+
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+        <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
+
+        <seglistitem>
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         </seglistitem>
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-
-      <segmentedlist>
-        <segtitle>&testsuites;</segtitle>
-
-        <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Diffutils, Expect</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Glibc, and Make</seg>
+        </seglistitem>
+      </segmentedlist>
+
+      <segmentedlist>
+        <segtitle>&testsuites;</segtitle>
+
+        <seglistitem>
+          <seg>Diffutils and Expect</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -1170,5 +1171,5 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Diffutils, Less</seg>
+          <seg>Diffutils and Less</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
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          <seg>Bash, Binutils, Bison, Coreutils, Flex, GCC, Gettext, Glibc,
-         Gzip, Make, Sed, Xz-Utils, Zlib</seg>
+         Gzip, Make, Sed, Xz-Utils, and Zlib</seg>
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       </segmentedlist>
@@ -1447,5 +1448,6 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Attr, Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Glibc, Perl, Make, and Sed</seg>
+         <seg>Attr, Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Glibc, Perl, Make,
+         and Sed</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -1562,5 +1564,5 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Autoconf, Automake, Findutils</seg>
+          <seg>Autoconf, Automake, and Findutils</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -1589,6 +1591,6 @@
 
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-         <seg>Bash, Bc, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Findutils, GCC, Glibc, Grep,
-         Gzip, Kmod, Make, Ncurses, OpenSSL, Perl, and Sed</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Bc, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Findutils, GCC, Glibc,
+         Grep, Gzip, Kmod, Make, Ncurses, OpenSSL, Perl, and Sed</seg>
         </seglistitem>
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          <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep, GMP,
-         Make, MPFR, Sed and Texinfo</seg>
+         Make, MPFR, Sed, and Texinfo</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
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          <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep, GMP,
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-
-      <segmentedlist>
-        <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
-
-        <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Gawk, GCC</seg>
+         Make, Sed, and Texinfo</seg>
+        </seglistitem>
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+
+      <segmentedlist>
+        <segtitle>&testsuites;</segtitle>
+
+        <seglistitem>
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+        </seglistitem>
+      </segmentedlist>
+
+      <segmentedlist>
+        <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
+
+        <seglistitem>
+          <seg>Gawk and GCC</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -1892,6 +1894,6 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Bash, GRUB, Inetutils, Less, Procps-ng, Psmisc, Readline, Texinfo,
-          Util-linux, and Vim</seg>
+          <seg>Bash, GRUB, Inetutils, Less, Procps-ng, Psmisc, Readline,
+          Texinfo, Util-linux, and Vim</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -1912,5 +1914,5 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Binutils, Coreutils, Gcc, Python</seg>
+         <seg>Binutils, Coreutils, Gcc, and Python</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -1947,5 +1949,5 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Binutils, Coreutils, Gcc, Make, Perl</seg>
+         <seg>Binutils, Coreutils, Gcc, Make, and Perl</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
@@ -2089,5 +2091,5 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep, Make</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep, and Make</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
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         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Gettext, Glibc, Grep, Make, Ncurses,
-         and Sed</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Gettext, Glibc, Grep, Make,
+         Ncurses, and Sed</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
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         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Bash, Gawk</seg>
+          <seg>Bash and Gawk</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
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         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Acl, Attr, Cracklib, PAM</seg>
+          <seg>Acl, Attr, Cracklib, and PAM</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
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         <seglistitem>
-         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Findutils, Gawk, GCC,
-         Gettext, Glibc, Grep, Make, Ncurses, Sed, Eudev, and Zlib</seg>
+         <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Eudev, Findutils, Gawk, GCC,
+         Gettext, Glibc, Grep, Make, Ncurses, Sed, and Zlib</seg>
         </seglistitem>
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-      <segmentedlist>
-        <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
-
-        <seglistitem>
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+        </seglistitem>
+      </segmentedlist>
+
+      <segmentedlist>
+        <segtitle>&testsuites;</segtitle>
+
+        <seglistitem>
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+
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+
+        <seglistitem>
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