Changeset bc195e53

Timestamp:

04/28/2001 11:34:25 AM (23 years ago)

Author:

Marc Heerdink <gimli@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v3_0, v3_1, v3_2, v3_3, v4_0, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

1708b01

Parents:

edc3f31

Message:

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git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@549 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

preface

Files:

• organpart1.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• whonotread.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• whoread.xml (modified) (1 diff)

preface/organpart1.xml

@@ -5 +5 @@
 Part One gives general information about this book (versions, where
 to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and how to get in touch with us).
-It also explains a few important aspects a user really wants and needs to
+It also explains a few important aspects you really want and need to
 read before starting to build an LFS system.
 </para>

preface/whonotread.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 
 <para>
-Users who don't want to build an entire Linux system from scratch
+People who don't want to build an entire Linux system from scratch
 probably don't want to read this book. If you, however, want to learn
 more about what happens behind the scenes, in particular what happens

preface/whoread.xml

@@ -8 +8 @@
 happens behind the scenes. Perhaps you are fed up with distributions
 which are often bloated or perhaps you don't want to rely on pre-compiled
-binaries due to security concerns. There are many reasons why a user may 
+binaries due to security concerns. There are many reasons why someone may 
 want a custom built system. If you are one of them, this book is meant
 for you.