Changeset c66cbd7

Timestamp:

06/16/2005 08:11:26 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

Branches:

6.1, 6.1.1

Children:

c184525

Parents:

4ccba55

Message:

More chapter 7 typo and markup fixes (merged from trunk r6026

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/6.1/BOOK@6027 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• chapter01/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter07/bootscripts.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter07/hosts.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• chapter07/udev.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -85 +85 @@
 </listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>June 16th, 2005 [matthew]: Another round of typo and markup
+fixes in chapter 7, as reported by Randy McMurchy.</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>June 16th, 2005 [matthew]: Typo and markup fixes in
 chapter 7, as reported by Randy McMurchy.</para></listitem>

chapter07/bootscripts.xml

@@ -226 +226 @@
 <term><command>udev</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>Sets up udev and create the devices nodes in <filename
+<para>Sets up udev and create the device nodes in <filename
 class="directory">/dev</filename></para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts udev-bootscripts"><primary sortas="d-udev">udev</primary></indexterm>

chapter07/hosts.xml

@@ -18 +18 @@
 <secondary>/etc/hosts</secondary></indexterm>
 
-<para>If a network card is to be configured, decide on the IP-address,
+<para>If a network card is to be configured, decide on the IP address,
 FQDN, and possible aliases for use in the
 <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file. The syntax is:</para>
@@ -24 +24 @@
 <screen>&lt;IP address&gt; myhost.example.org aliases</screen>
 
-<para>Unless the computer is to be visible to the Internet (e.g.,
+<para>Unless the computer is to be visible to the Internet (i.e.,
 there is a registered domain and a valid block of assigned IP
 addresses&mdash;most users do not have this), make sure that the IP
@@ -32 +32 @@
 <screen>        Class Networks
         A     10.0.0.0
-        B     172.16.0.0 through 172.31.0.0
-        C     192.168.0.0 through 192.168.255.0</screen>
+        B     172.16.0.0 through 172.31.0.255
+        C     192.168.0.0 through 192.168.255.255</screen>
 
 <para>A valid IP address could be 192.168.1.1. A valid FQDN for this

chapter07/udev.xml

@@ -166 +166 @@
 
 <para>There are a few known problems when it comes to automatically creating
-devices nodes:</para>
+device nodes:</para>
 
 <para>1) A kernel driver may not export its data to <systemitem