Index: basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-config.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-config.xml	(revision 1fe6fcffff18428a3ffde552cd68b28c5255c4bb)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-config.xml	(revision 028a29563f6c85580a4b5ffc031f98a001fa15a3)
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 <sect2>
-<title>Configuring slrn</title>
+<title>Configuring <application>slrn</application></title>
 
 <sect3><title>Config files</title>
@@ -10,10 +10,10 @@
 <sect3><title>Configuration Information</title>
 
-<para>The first time slrn is run, the
+<para>The first time <command>slrn</command> is run, the
 <filename>$HOME/.jnewsrc</filename> file must be
-created.Create the <filename>$HOME/.jnewsrc</filename> file with the following
+created. Create the <filename>$HOME/.jnewsrc</filename> file with the following
 command:</para>
 
-<para><screen><userinput> slrn -f $HOME/.jnewsrc --create</userinput></screen></para>
+<para><screen><userinput><command>slrn -f $HOME/.jnewsrc --create</command></userinput></screen></para>
 
 </sect3>
Index: basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-desc.xml	(revision 1fe6fcffff18428a3ffde552cd68b28c5255c4bb)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-desc.xml	(revision 028a29563f6c85580a4b5ffc031f98a001fa15a3)
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Contents</title>
-<para>The slrn package contains 
-<userinput>slrn</userinput> and
-<userinput>slrnpull</userinput>.</para>
+<para>The <application>slrn</application> package contains 
+<command>slrn</command> and
+<command>slrnpull</command>.</para>
 </sect2>
 
@@ -9,9 +9,9 @@
 
 <sect3><title>slrn</title>
-<para>slrn is the slang-based news reader.</para></sect3>
+<para><command>slrn</command> is the slang-based news reader.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>slrnpull</title>
-<para>slrnpull is used to pull a small news feed from an NNTP server
-for offline reading.</para></sect3>
+<para><command>slrnpull</command> is used to pull a small news feed from
+an <acronym>NNTP</acronym> server for offline reading.</para></sect3>
 
 </sect2>
Index: basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-exp.xml	(revision 1fe6fcffff18428a3ffde552cd68b28c5255c4bb)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-exp.xml	(revision 028a29563f6c85580a4b5ffc031f98a001fa15a3)
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <title>Command explanations</title>
 
-<para><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr</userinput> : Specify
+<para><command>./configure --prefix=/usr</command> : Specify
 <filename>/usr</filename> to install to instead of <filename>/usr/local</filename>.</para>
 
-<para><userinput>./configure --with-slrnpull</userinput> : Build the slrnpull executable.</para>
+<para><command>./configure --with-slrnpull</command> : Build the slrnpull executable.</para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-inst.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-inst.xml	(revision 1fe6fcffff18428a3ffde552cd68b28c5255c4bb)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-inst.xml	(revision 028a29563f6c85580a4b5ffc031f98a001fa15a3)
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 <sect2>
-<title>Installation of slrn</title>
+<title>Installation of <application>slrn</application></title>
 
-<para>Install slrn by running the following commands:</para>
+<para>Install <application>slrn</application> by running the following commands:</para>
 
-<para><screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --with-slrnpull &amp;&amp;
+<para><screen><userinput><command>./configure --prefix=/usr --with-slrnpull &amp;&amp;
 make LDFLAGS="-ldl" &amp;&amp;
-make install</userinput></screen></para>
+make install</command></userinput></screen></para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-intro.xml	(revision 1fe6fcffff18428a3ffde552cd68b28c5255c4bb)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-intro.xml	(revision 028a29563f6c85580a4b5ffc031f98a001fa15a3)
@@ -1,19 +1,23 @@
 <sect2>
-<title>Introduction to slrn</title>
+<title>Introduction to <application>slrn</application></title>
 
-<screen>Download location (HTTP):       <ulink url="&slrn-download-http;"/>
-Download location (FTP):        <ulink url="&slrn-download-ftp;"/>
-Version used:                   &slrn-version;
-Package size:                   &slrn-size;
-Estimated Disk space required:  &slrn-buildsize;</screen>
-
-<para>slrn is a slang-based newsreader, capable of reading local news
-spools as well as groups from an NNTP server.  Small local news spools
+<para><application>slrn</application> is a slang-based news reader, capable of reading local news
+spools as well as groups from an <acronym>NNTP</acronym> server.  Small local news spools
 can also be created with the use of the slrnpull program included in
 the slrn distribution.</para>
 
-<screen>slrn depends on:
-<xref linkend="slang"/> and an MTA, found in <xref
-linkend="server-mail"/>.</screen>
+<sect3><title>Package information</title>
+<itemizedlist spacing='compact'>
+<listitem><para>Download (HTTP): <ulink url="&slrn-download-http;"/></para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>Download (FTP): <ulink url="&slrn-download-ftp;"/></para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>Download size: &slrn-size;</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>Estimated Disk space required: &slrn-buildsize;</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>Estimated build time: &slrn-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
+</sect3>
+
+<sect3><title><application>slrn</application> dependencies</title>
+<sect4><title>Required</title>
+<para><xref linkend="slang"/> and <acronym>MTA</acronym> (See <xref linkend="server-mail"/>)</para></sect4>
+</sect3>
 
 
Index: basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn.ent
===================================================================
--- basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn.ent	(revision 1fe6fcffff18428a3ffde552cd68b28c5255c4bb)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn.ent	(revision 028a29563f6c85580a4b5ffc031f98a001fa15a3)
@@ -10,2 +10,3 @@
 <!ENTITY slrn-download-ftp "ftp://ftp.fu-berlin.de/pub/unix/news/slrn/slrn-0.9.7.4.tar.gz">
 <!ENTITY slrn-size "850 KB">
+<!ENTITY slrn-time "">
Index: introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	(revision 1fe6fcffff18428a3ffde552cd68b28c5255c4bb)
+++ introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	(revision 028a29563f6c85580a4b5ffc031f98a001fa15a3)
@@ -10,4 +10,7 @@
 
 <itemizedlist>
+
+<listitem><para>August 3rd, 2003 [larry]: basicnet: modified intro to
+slrn.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>August 3rd, 2003 [larry]: basicnet: updated to
Index: server/mail/mail.xml
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--- server/mail/mail.xml	(revision 1fe6fcffff18428a3ffde552cd68b28c5255c4bb)
+++ server/mail/mail.xml	(revision 028a29563f6c85580a4b5ffc031f98a001fa15a3)
@@ -3,10 +3,11 @@
 <title>Mail Server Software</title>
 
-<para>MTAs are the programs which transport mail from one machine to the
-other.  The traditional MTA is <emphasis>sendmail</emphasis> however
-there are several other choices.</para>
+<para><acronym>MTA</acronym>s are the programs which transport mail from one machine to the
+other.  The traditional <acronym>MTA</acronym> is <command>sendmail</command> 
+however there are several other choices.</para>
 
-<para>As well as SMTP servers there is a POP server (qpopper). An IMAP
-server (Courier-IMAP) is available for inclusion in the next version.</para>
+<para>As well as <acronym>SMTP</acronym> servers there is a
+<acronym>POP</acronym> server (qpopper). An <acronym>IMAP</acronym>
+server (Courier-<acronym>IMAP</acronym>) is available for inclusion in the next version.</para>
 
 &postfix;
@@ -15,4 +16,4 @@
 &exim;
 &qpopper;
-<!--&courier-->
+&courier;
 </chapter>
