Changeset 0d754e01

Timestamp:

12/19/2021 05:01:05 PM (2 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, lazarus, lxqt, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, trunk, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

ad20138

Parents:

e58a16e

Message:

Minor grammar updates

Location:

general/prog

Files:

• ojdk-conf.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• openjdk.xml (modified) (6 diffs)

general/prog/ojdk-conf.xml

@@ -72 +72 @@
 
     <para>
-      For allowing <command>mandb</command> to include the OpenJDK man pages
+      To use <command>mandb</command> to include the OpenJDK man pages
       in its database, issue, as the <systemitem class="username">root
       </systemitem> user:

general/prog/openjdk.xml

@@ -67 +67 @@
         thorough, open source test suite using the
         <application>JTreg</application> test harness. The testing instructions
-        below allow to test the just built JDK for reasonable compatibility
+        below allow testing the just built JDK for reasonable compatibility
         with the proprietary Oracle JDK. However, in order for an independent
         implementation to claim compatibility, it must pass a proprietary
         <application>JCK/TCK</application> test suite. No claims of
-        compatibility, even partial compatibility, may be made without passing
+        compatibility, or even partial compatibility, may be made without passing
         an approved test suite.
       </para>
@@ -91 +91 @@
         regularly tested against the TCK by the members listed on the site
         above. In addition to the community license above, an educational,
-        non-commercial license for the TCK can be obtained from <ulink
+        non-commercial license for the TCK can be obtained <ulink
         url="http://www.oracle.com/technetwork/java/index-137188.html">
         here</ulink>.
@@ -169 +169 @@
       An existing binary (<xref linkend="java"/> or an earlier built
       version of this package. The instructions below assume that
-      you are using <xref linkend="ojdk-conf"/>),
+      you are using <xref linkend="ojdk-conf"/>,
       <xref linkend="alsa-lib"/>,
       <xref linkend="cpio"/>,
@@ -235 +235 @@
         installations do not need <envar>JAVA_HOME</envar> and
         <envar>CLASSPATH</envar> is not used here. Furthermore, OpenJDK
-        developers recommend to unset <envar>JAVA_HOME</envar>.
+        developers recommend unsetting <envar>JAVA_HOME</envar>.
       </para>
 
@@ -247 +247 @@
 
     <para>
-      Configure and build the package with the following commands
-      (--with-milestone value can be modified to fit user preferences):
+      Configure and build the package with the following commands:
     </para>
 
@@ -330 +329 @@
 
     <para>
-      If desired, you may create .desktop files to add entries
+      If desired, you can create .desktop files to add entries
       in the menu for <command>java</command>
       and <command>jconsole</command>. The needed icons have already been