Changeset 1af021dc for connect/dhcp/dhcp.xml

Timestamp:

06/01/2004 01:50:18 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Larry Lawrence <larry@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, v5_1, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

62e9283

Parents:

aa6dadf8

Message:

grammer changes

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@2248 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• connect/dhcp/dhcp.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

connect/dhcp/dhcp.xml

@@ -4 +4 @@
 
 <para><acronym>DHCP</acronym> stands for Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol.  
-It is a protocol which is used by many sites to automatically provide
+It is a protocol used by many sites to automatically provide
 information such as <acronym>IP</acronym> addresses, subnet masks and routing 
 information to computers.  If your network uses <acronym>DHCP</acronym>, you 
@@ -10 +10 @@
 <acronym>DHCP</acronym> is also used by some cable modems.</para>
 
-<para>We currently provide installation instructions for two
+<para><acronym>BLFS</acronym> currently provides installation instructions for two
 <acronym>DHCP</acronym> clients, <command>dhclient</command> (from the
 <application>dhcp</application> package) and <command>dhcpcd</command>.
-We present both sets of installation instructions which also discuss how 
+<acronym>BLFS</acronym> presents both sets of installation instructions
+and discuss how 
 to create an appropriate service script to work with the 
 <command>network</command> bootscript and the <acronym>DHCP</acronym>