Changeset 32d0e29 for postlfs/config

Timestamp:

04/09/2008 03:40:36 PM (16 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

8ae8a12a

Parents:

46a27c2

Message:

Fixed typos and minor rewording in various package instructions

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@7370 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• postlfs/config/autofs.xml (modified) (10 diffs)

postlfs/config/autofs.xml

@@ -6 +6 @@
   <!ENTITY autofs-patch-dir     "http://ftp.kernel.org/pub/linux/daemons/autofs/v5">
   <!ENTITY autofs-download-http "http://ftp.kernel.org/pub/linux/daemons/autofs/v5/autofs-&autofs-version;.tar.bz2">
-  <!ENTITY autofs-download-ftp "ftp://ftp.kernel.org/pub/linux/daemons/autofs/v5/autofs-&autofs-version;.tar.bz2">
+  <!ENTITY autofs-download-ftp  "ftp://ftp.kernel.org/pub/linux/daemons/autofs/v5/autofs-&autofs-version;.tar.bz2">
   <!ENTITY autofs-md5sum        "27839fe6fa8105b2b7d31bc922fd7cf6">
   <!ENTITY autofs-size          "221 KB">
-  <!ENTITY autofs-buildsize     "8.9 MB">
+  <!ENTITY autofs-buildsize     "9 MB">
   <!ENTITY autofs-time          "less than 0.1 SBU">
 ]>
 
-<sect1 id="autofs" xreflabel="autofs-&autofs-version;">
+<sect1 id="autofs" xreflabel="Autofs-&autofs-version;">
   <?dbhtml filename="autofs.html"?>
 
@@ -30 +30 @@
     <title>Introduction to Autofs</title>
 
-    <para>The <application>autofs</application> package contains userspace
+    <para>The <application>Autofs</application> package contains userspace
     tools that work with the kernel to mount and un-mount removable file
     systems. The primary use is to mount external network file systems like
-    nfs (see <xref linkend="nfs-utils"/>) or Samba (see <xref linkend="samba3"/>)
+    NFS (see <xref linkend="nfs-utils"/>) or Samba (see <xref linkend="samba3"/>)
     on demand.</para>
     
@@ -65 +65 @@
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect3">Additional Downloads</bridgehead>
-        <para>Recommended Patches: There are frequent patches issued
-        for <application>autofs</application>.  To get the current patches, 
-        start in the same directory as the main tar file and run:</para>
+
+    <para>Recommended Patches: There are frequent patches issued
+    for <application>Autofs</application>.  To get the current patches, 
+    start in the same directory as the main tar file and run:</para>
         
 <screen><userinput>wget &autofs-patch-dir;/patch_order-&autofs-version; &amp;&amp;
-sed 's;autofs;&autofs-patch-dir;/autofs;' patch_order-&autofs-version; &gt; wget-list &amp;&amp;
+sed 's;autofs;&autofs-patch-dir;/autofs;' \
+    patch_order-&autofs-version; &gt; wget-list &amp;&amp;
 wget -i wget-list</userinput></screen>
     
@@ -102 +104 @@
     <title>Installation of Autofs</title>
 
-    <para>Install <application>autofs</application> by running the following
+    <para>Install <application>Autofs</application> by running the following
     commands:</para>
 
@@ -124 +126 @@
 
     <para><command>for f in `cat ../patch_order-&autofs-version;`; do
-      patch -Np1 -i ../$f;  done</command>: This command applies all the 
-      patches fetched earlier in the correct order.</para>
+    patch -Np1 -i ../$f;  done</command>: This command applies all the 
+    patches fetched earlier in the correct order.</para>
 
     <para><command>ln -sf  ../init.d/autofs 
@@ -167 +169 @@
       <para>The installation process creates <filename>auto.master</filename>,
       <filename>auto.misc</filename>,  <filename>auto.smb</filename>, and
-      <filename>auto.net</filename>. You will replace the
-      <filename>auto.master</filename> with the following commands:</para>
+      <filename>auto.net</filename>. Replace the
+      <filename>auto.master</filename> file with the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>mv /etc/auto.master /etc/auto.master.bak &amp;&amp;
@@ -188 +190 @@
       <para>that will mount a cdrom as <filename>/media/auto/cd</filename> if
       that directory is accessed.  The <option>--ghost</option> option tells
-      the automounter to create "ghost" versions (i.e. empty directories) of
-      all the mount points listed in the configuration file regardless of
-      whether any of the file systems is actually mounted or not. This is very
-      convenient and highly recommended, because it will show you the available
-      auto-mountable file systems as existing directories, even when their file
-      systems aren't currently mounted. Without the <option>--ghost</option>
-      option, you'll have to remember the names of the directories. As soon as
-      you try to access one of them, the directory will be created and the file
-      system will be mounted. When the file system gets unmounted again, the
-      directory is destroyed too, unless the <option>--ghost</option> option
-      was given.</para>
+      the automounter to create <quote>ghost</quote> versions (i.e. empty
+      directories) of all the mount points listed in the configuration file
+      regardless whether any of the file systems are actually mounted or not.
+      This is very convenient and highly recommended, because it will show you
+      the available auto-mountable file systems as existing directories, even
+      when their file systems aren't currently mounted. Without the
+      <option>--ghost</option> option, you'll have to remember the names of the
+      directories. As soon as you try to access one of them, the directory will
+      be created and the file system will be mounted. When the file system gets
+      unmounted again, the directory is destroyed too, unless the
+      <option>--ghost</option> option was given.</para>
 
       <note>
-
         <para>An alternative method would be to specify another automount
-        location such as <filename>/var/lib/auto/cdrom</filename> and create a
-        symbolic link from <filename>/media/cdrom</filename> to the automount
-        location.</para>
-      
+        location such as <filename
+        class='directory'>/var/lib/auto/cdrom</filename> and create a
+        symbolic link from <filename class='directory'>/media/cdrom</filename>
+        to the automount location.</para>
       </note>
 
@@ -226 +227 @@
       are covered on the next page.</para>
 
-      <para>This package could also be used to mount SMB shares, that feature
-      is not configured in these instructions.  For additional configuration
-      information, see the man pages for auto.master(5).  There
+      <para>This package could also be used to mount SMB shares, however that
+      feature is not configured in these instructions.  For additional
+      configuration information, see the man pages for auto.master(5).  There
       are also web resources such as this <ulink
       url='http://gentoo-wiki.com/HOWTO_Auto_mount_filesystems_(AUTOFS)#Config_files'>AUTOFS 
-      HOWTO</ulink>
-      availble.</para>
+      HOWTO</ulink> available.</para>
 
     </sect3>
+
 <!--
     <sect3  id="autofs-init">
@@ -258 +259 @@
     </sect3>
 -->
+
   </sect2>
 
@@ -300 +302 @@
 
 </sect1>
-