Index: xsoft/other/transmission.xml
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--- xsoft/other/transmission.xml	(revision 69e716244c4b896c333f2a7e941b6a0ab92b43eb)
+++ xsoft/other/transmission.xml	(revision 33c5fdb8c748fa4ca8171fb853e6246189f40287)
@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@
   <!ENTITY transmission-download-http "https://github.com/transmission/transmission/releases/download/&transmission-version;/transmission-&transmission-version;.tar.xz">
   <!ENTITY transmission-download-ftp  " ">
-  <!ENTITY transmission-md5sum        "1d92edb61c82422211dbc751f4657489">
-  <!ENTITY transmission-size          "9.6 MB">
-  <!ENTITY transmission-buildsize     "347 MB (with GTK and QT5 gui interfaces)">
-  <!ENTITY transmission-time          "1.4 SBU (with GTK gui interfaces; using parallelism=4) 5 SBU with both GTK and QT5">
+  <!ENTITY transmission-md5sum        "a9985ff897d060d40b80e763263ffaf9">
+  <!ENTITY transmission-size          "9.3 MB">
+  <!ENTITY transmission-buildsize     "229 MB (with both GUI interfaces)">
+  <!ENTITY transmission-time          "2.3 SBU (with both GUI interfaces; using parallelism=4)">
 ]>
 
@@ -133,5 +133,5 @@
 
     <para>
-      As transmission.png seems to be missing, create it from the svg::
+      Next, create transmission.png from the SVG file:
     </para>
 
@@ -147,5 +147,5 @@
     <para>
       <option>-DENABLE_QT=OFF</option>: This switch disables building
-      the <application>Qt5</application> client. The default is to build it
+      the <application>Qt5</application> interface. The default is to build it
       if &qt5-deps; is installed.
     </para>
@@ -153,5 +153,5 @@
     <para>
       <option>-DENABLE_GTK=OFF</option>: This switch disables building
-      the GTK+-3 cli client. The default is to build it
+      the GTK+-3 interface. The default is to build it if
       <xref linkend="gtkmm3"/> is installed.
     </para>
@@ -164,7 +164,8 @@
 
     <para>
-      <option>-DREBUILD_WEB=ON</option>: This switch forces rebuilding of
-      the web client. Needs <xref linkend="nodejs"/> and a network connection.
-      The default is to not rebuild.
+      <option>-DREBUILD_WEB=ON</option>: This switch forces rebuilding
+      the web client. This option needs <xref linkend="nodejs"/> to be
+      installed as well as an internet connection. The default is to not
+      rebuild the client.
     </para>
   </sect2>
@@ -180,7 +181,12 @@
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>
-          transmission-cli, transmission-create, transmission-daemon,
-          transmission-edit, transmission-gtk or transmission-qt,
-          transmission-remote, and transmission-show
+          transmission-cli,
+          transmission-create,
+          transmission-daemon,
+          transmission-edit,
+          transmission-gtk,
+          transmission-qt,
+          transmission-remote, and
+          transmission-show
         </seg>
         <seg>
@@ -188,5 +194,5 @@
         </seg>
         <seg>
-          /usr/share/transmission (contains the web client, optional) and
+          /usr/share/transmission (contains the web client) and
           /usr/share/doc/transmission-&transmission-version;
         </seg>
@@ -203,5 +209,5 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a lightweight, command-line BitTorrent client with scripting
+            is a lightweight, command line BitTorrent client with scripting
             capabilities
           </para>
@@ -229,5 +235,5 @@
           <para>
             is a daemon-based Transmission session that can be controlled via
-            RPC commands from transmission's web interface or
+            RPC commands from Transmission's web interface or
             <command>transmission-remote</command>
           </para>
@@ -242,5 +248,5 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a command-line utility to modify .torrent files' announce URLs
+            is a command line tool to modify .torrent files' announce URLs
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="transmission transmission-edit">
@@ -266,5 +272,5 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a Qt bittorrent client
+            is a Qt-based bittorrent client
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="transmission transmission-qt">
