Changeset 36802ea for pst/ps

Timestamp:

09/27/2023 04:52:14 PM (7 months ago)

Author:

Douglas R. Reno <renodr@…>

Branches:

12.1, ken/TL2024, ken/tuningfonts, lazarus, plabs/newcss, python3.11, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, trunk, xry111/llvm18

Children:

63b3f5fe

Parents:

2477f72

Message:

epdfview: minor tweaks to text on the page

File:

• pst/ps/epdfview.xml (modified) (6 diffs)

pst/ps/epdfview.xml

@@ -30 +30 @@
       <application>ePDFView</application> program. Although the github repository
       <ulink url="https://github.com/Flow-It/epdfview_old.git"/>  names it as
-      'old' it is indeed the gtk3 fork. It is a lightweight replacement for
+      'old', it is the gtk3 fork. It is a lightweight replacement for
       <application>Evince</application> as it does not rely upon
       <application>GNOME</application> libraries and is more capable than
@@ -82 +82 @@
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Recommended</bridgehead>
     <para role="Recommended">
-      <xref linkend="cups"/> (to access print queues)
-      <xref linkend="desktop-file-utils"/> and
+      <xref linkend="cups"/> (to access print queues),
+      <xref linkend="desktop-file-utils"/>, and
       <xref linkend="hicolor-icon-theme"/> (both for the icons this installs)
     </para>
@@ -90 +90 @@
     <para role="optional">
       The home page of the project's repository mentions that there are optional
-      dependencies, enabled by switches, for building the documentation and testsuite,
+      dependencies, which are enabled by switches. These are for building the
+      documentation and running the test suite,
       <xref linkend="doxygen"/> and
       <ulink url='https://freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/cppunit/'>Cppunit</ulink>.
-      Unfortunately <application>doxygen</application> only installs a skeletal
-      page about itself, not any package documentation, and the test code does not
-      compile with tecent versions of C++.
+      Note that <application>doxygen</application> only installs a skeletal
+      page about itself, which contains no package documentation, and the test
+      code does not compile with recent versions of C++.
     </para>
   </sect2>
@@ -134 +135 @@
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
     <para>
-      <command>-Denable-printing=true</command>: build the code to link to the
+      <command>-Denable-printing=true</command>: builds the code to link to the
       <application>cups</application> print queue(s). Omit this if you have not
       installed <application>cups</application>.
@@ -144 +145 @@
 
       <para>
-        ePDFView-gtk3 has several toggles for optional features, most are
-        'off' by default, including the toolbar, and if it has been closed with
-         the menu disabled the program can start with all options not visible
-         until the relevant function-key toggles are pressed.           
+        ePDFView-gtk3 has several keyboard hotkeys for optional features. Most
+        of them are 'off' by default, including the toolbar, and if it has been
+        closed with the menu disabled, the program can start with all options
+        not being visible until the relevant function keys are pressed.
         <itemizedlist>
           <listitem>
@@ -159 +160 @@
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
-            <para>[F9] - toggle show-index.</para>
-          </listitem>
-          <listitem>
-            <para>[F11] - toggle fullscreen.</para>
+            <para>[F9] - toggle show-index</para>
+          </listitem>
+          <listitem>
+            <para>[F11] - toggle fullscreen</para>
           </listitem>
         </itemizedlist>