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@@ -9 +9 @@
   <?dbhtml filename="organization.html"?>
 
+  <sect1info>
+    <date>$Date$</date>
+  </sect1info>
 
   <title>Organization</title>
 
   <para>
-    This book is divided into the following fourteen parts.
+    This book is divided into the following parts.
   </para>
 
@@ -19 +22 @@
 
   <para>
-    This part contains essential information which is needed to
-    understand the rest of the book.
+    This part contains information which is essential to
+    the rest of the book.
   </para>
 
@@ -28 +31 @@
   <para>
     Here we introduce basic configuration and security issues.  We also
-    discuss a range of text editors, file systems, and shells which aren't covered
+    discuss a range of editors, file systems, and shells which aren't covered
     in the main LFS book.
   </para>
@@ -35 +38 @@
 
   <para>
-    In this section we cover libraries which are often needed throughout
-    the book, as well as system utilities.  Information on programming
+    In this section we cover libraries which are often needed by the rest
+    of the book as well as system utilities.  Information on Programming
     (including recompiling <application>GCC</application> to support its full
     range of languages) concludes this part.
@@ -44 +47 @@
 
   <para>
-    Here we explain how to connect to a network when you aren't using the
-    simple static IP setup presented in the main LFS book. Networking libraries
+    Here we cover how to connect to a network when you aren't using the
+    simple static IP setup given in the main LFS book. Networking libraries
     and command-line networking tools are also covered here.
   </para>
@@ -52 +55 @@
 
   <para>
-    Here we show you how to set up mail and other servers (such as
+    Here we deal with setting up mail and other servers (such as
     <application>FTP</application>, <application>Apache</application>, etc.).
   </para>
@@ -60 +63 @@
   <para>
     This part explains how to set up a basic <application>X Window
-    System</application>, along with some generic
+    System</application> installation along with some generic
     <application>X</application> libraries and Window managers.
   </para>
@@ -67 +70 @@
 
   <para>
-    This part is for those who want to use the <application>K Desktop
-    Environment</application>, or parts of it.
+    For those who want to use the <application>K Desktop
+    Environment</application> or some parts of it, this part covers it.
   </para>
 
@@ -92 +95 @@
   </para>
 
-  <bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part XI - More X Software</bridgehead>
+  <bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part XI - X Software</bridgehead>
 
   <para>
     Office programs and graphical web browsers are important to most people.
-    They, and some generic <application>X</application> software, can be
+    They, along with some generic <application>X</application> software can be
     found in this part of the book.
   </para>
@@ -103 +106 @@
 
   <para>
-    Here we cover multimedia libraries and drivers, along with some
-    audio, video, and CD-writing programs.
+    Here we cover setting multimedia libraries and drivers along with some
+    audio, video and CD-writing programs.
   </para>
 
@@ -111 +114 @@
 
   <para>
-    This part covers document handling, from applications like
-    <application>Ghostscript</application>, <application>CUPS</application>, and
-    <application>DocBook</application>, all the way to
+    The PST part of the book covers document handling with applications like
+    <application>Ghostscript</application>, <application>CUPS</application> and
+    <application>DocBook</application> to installing
     <application>texlive</application>.
   </para>
@@ -120 +123 @@
 
   <para>
-    The Appendices present information which doesn't belong in the body of
-    book; they are included as reference material. The glossary of acronyms
-    is a handy feature.
+    The Appendices cover information which doesn't belong in the main
+    book; they are mainly there as a reference.
   </para>