Changeset 4afc2603 for introduction/important/unpacking.xml

Timestamp:

12/29/2005 01:24:51 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

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Children:

5254d12

Parents:

17be8c3

Message:

Changes to the Introduction section; standardized the file structure layout, standardized the id tags (except bootscripts) and some minor textual modifications

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@5496 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• introduction/important/unpacking.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

introduction/important/unpacking.xml

@@ -6 +6 @@
 ]>
 
-<sect1 id="intro-important-unpacking">
+<sect1 id="unpacking">
   <?dbhtml filename="unpacking.html"?>
 
@@ -16 +16 @@
   <title>Notes on Building Software</title>
 
-  <para>Those people who have built an LFS system will be aware
+  <para>Those people who have built an LFS system may be aware
   of the general principles of downloading and unpacking software.  We will
   however repeat some of that information here for those new to building
@@ -34 +34 @@
   <para>We can not emphasize strongly enough that you should start from a
   <emphasis>clean source tree</emphasis> each time. This means that if
-  you have had an error, it's usually best to delete the source tree and
+  you have had an error during configuration or compilation, it's usually
+  best to delete the source tree and
   re-unpack it <emphasis>before</emphasis> trying again. This obviously
   doesn't apply if you're an advanced user used to hacking
@@ -143 +144 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-        <para><emphasis>Required</emphasis> means
-            that the target package cannot be correctly built without
-            the dependency having first been installed.</para>
+        <para><emphasis>Required</emphasis> means that the target package
+        cannot be correctly built without the dependency having first been
+        installed.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para><emphasis>Recommended</emphasis> means that BLFS strongly suggests this package is
-           installed first for a clean and trouble-free build, that won't have
-           issues either during the build process, or at run-time.</para>
+        <para><emphasis>Recommended</emphasis> means that BLFS strongly
+        suggests this package is installed first for a clean and trouble-free
+        build, that won't have issues either during the build process, or at
+        run-time.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para><emphasis>Optional</emphasis> means that this package might be installed for added
-           functionality.  Often BLFS will qualify the dependency to explain the
-           added functionality that will result.</para>
+        <para><emphasis>Optional</emphasis> means that this package might be
+        installed for added functionality. Often BLFS will describe the
+        dependency to explain the added functionality that will result.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>