Changeset 4d3e5f1


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Timestamp:
09/25/2009 10:52:41 AM (15 years ago)
Author:
Chris Staub <chris@…>
Branches:
10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal
Children:
de2551f
Parents:
9cc3fde
Message:

Grammar fixes

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@8037 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

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  • basicnet/connect/connect.xml

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    2626  DHCP, you will need a DHCP client in order to connect to it.</para>
    2727
    28   <para>PPP stands for Point-to-Point Protocol. It is data link protocol
     28  <para>PPP stands for Point-to-Point Protocol. It is a data link protocol
    2929  commonly used for establishing authenticated IP connections over
    3030  a phone line with a modem, or over radio waves with a cellular phone. There

  • book/whoread.xml

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    2828
    2929  <para>Since Release 5.0, the BLFS book version matches the LFS book version.
    30   This book may be incompatible with a previous or latter release of the LFS
     30  This book may be incompatible with a previous or later release of the LFS
    3131  book.</para>
    3232

  • introduction/important/building-notes.xml

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    8181    <para>Finally, you sometimes need to be able to unpack patches which are
    8282    generally not in <filename class='extension'>.tar</filename> format. The
    83     best way to do this is to copy the patch file to parent of the 'build'
     83    best way to do this is to copy the patch file to the parent of the 'build'
    8484    directory and then run one of the following commands depending on whether
    8585    the file is a <filename class='extension'>.gz</filename> or <filename

  • postlfs/security/tripwire.xml

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    153153      <para>After your policy file has been edited to your satisfaction you may
    154154      begin the configuration steps (perform as the <systemitem
    155       class='username'>root</systemitem>):</para>
     155      class='username'>root</systemitem>) user:</para>
    156156
    157157<screen role="root"><userinput>twadmin --create-polfile --site-keyfile /etc/tripwire/site.key \
    … …  
    203203<screen role="root"><userinput>tripwire --update --twrfile /var/lib/tripwire/report/<replaceable>&lt;report-name.twr&gt;</replaceable></userinput></screen>
    204204
    205       <para>You will be placed into <application>vim</application> with a copy
     205      <para>You will be placed into <application>Vim</application> with a copy
    206206      of the report in front of you. If all the changes were good, then just
    207207      type <command>:wq</command> and after entering your local key, the database
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