Index: gnome/otherlibs/bonobo14/bonobo14-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/bonobo14/bonobo14-exp.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ gnome/otherlibs/bonobo14/bonobo14-exp.xml	(revision 52a46b3a46a6053176d195953f7c37175e9615bf)
@@ -4,5 +4,6 @@
 <para><parameter>--prefix=/opt/gnome</parameter>: Install 
 <application>Bonobo</application> in the
-<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> 1.4 area.</para>
+<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> 1.4 directory
+structure.</para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: gnome/otherlibs/bonobo14/bonobo14-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/bonobo14/bonobo14-intro.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ gnome/otherlibs/bonobo14/bonobo14-intro.xml	(revision 52a46b3a46a6053176d195953f7c37175e9615bf)
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
 <para>The <application>Bonobo</application> package contains a set of language 
 and system independent <acronym>CORBA</acronym> interfaces for creating 
-reusable components, controls and creating compound documents.</para>
+reusable components, controls and compound documents.</para>
 
 <sect3><title>Package information</title>
Index: gnome/otherlibs/gal/gal1-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/gal/gal1-desc.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ gnome/otherlibs/gal/gal1-desc.xml	(revision 52a46b3a46a6053176d195953f7c37175e9615bf)
@@ -3,6 +3,6 @@
 
 <para>The <application><acronym>GAL</acronym></application> package contains library routines 
-refactored from <application>Evolution</application> and <application>Gnumeric
-</application>.</para>
+pulled from the <application>Evolution</application> and <application>Gnumeric
+</application> projects and repackaged as a generic library.</para>
 </sect2>
 
Index: gnome/otherlibs/gal/gal1-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/gal/gal1-exp.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ gnome/otherlibs/gal/gal1-exp.xml	(revision 52a46b3a46a6053176d195953f7c37175e9615bf)
@@ -4,5 +4,7 @@
 <para><parameter>--prefix=/opt/gnome</parameter>: Install
 <application><acronym>GAL</acronym>
-</application> in the <application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> 1.4 area.</para>
+</application> in the
+<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> 1.4 directory
+structure.</para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: gnome/otherlibs/gal/gal1-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/gal/gal1-intro.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ gnome/otherlibs/gal/gal1-intro.xml	(revision 52a46b3a46a6053176d195953f7c37175e9615bf)
@@ -3,6 +3,5 @@
 
 <para>The <application><acronym>GAL</acronym></application> package contains library functions 
-that came from <application>Gnumeric</application> and <application>Evolution
-</application>. <acronym>GAL</acronym> is short for
+that came from <application>Gnumeric</application> and <application>Evolution</application>. <acronym>GAL</acronym> is short for
 <application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> Application Libs.</para>
 
Index: gnome/otherlibs/gdk/gdk-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/gdk/gdk-intro.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ gnome/otherlibs/gdk/gdk-intro.xml	(revision 52a46b3a46a6053176d195953f7c37175e9615bf)
@@ -20,5 +20,5 @@
 <sect3><title><application><acronym>GDK</acronym> Pixel Buffer</application> dependencies</title>
 <sect4><title>Required</title>
-<para><xref linkend="GTK"/>, <xref linkend="libpng"/>, <xref
+<para><xref linkend="GTK"/>, <xref
 linkend="libjpeg"/> and <xref linkend="libtiff"/></para></sect4>
 <sect4><title>Optional</title>
Index: gnome/otherlibs/gnome-libs/gnome-libs-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/gnome-libs/gnome-libs-desc.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ gnome/otherlibs/gnome-libs/gnome-libs-desc.xml	(revision 52a46b3a46a6053176d195953f7c37175e9615bf)
@@ -29,5 +29,5 @@
 <sect3><title>libart_lgpl</title>
 <para><filename class="libraryfile">libart_lgpl</filename> library is the
-<acronym>LGPL</acronym>'d component of libart.</para></sect3>
+<acronym>LGPL</acronym> component of libart.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>libgtk-xmhtml</title>
Index: gnome/otherlibs/gnome-vfs/gnome-vfs1-config.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/gnome-vfs/gnome-vfs1-config.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ 	(revision )
@@ -1,12 +1,0 @@
-<sect2>
-<title>Configuring <application><acronym>GNOME</acronym> Virtual File
-System</application></title>
-
-<sect3><title>Configuration Information</title>
-
-&library-config;
-
-</sect3>
-
-</sect2>
-
Index: gnome/otherlibs/gnome-vfs1.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/gnome-vfs1.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ gnome/otherlibs/gnome-vfs1.xml	(revision 52a46b3a46a6053176d195953f7c37175e9615bf)
@@ -5,5 +5,4 @@
 &gnome-vfs1-intro;
 &gnome-vfs1-inst;
-&gnome-vfs1-config;
 &gnome-vfs1-desc;
 
Index: gnome/otherlibs/gtkhtml/gtkhtml1-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/gtkhtml/gtkhtml1-exp.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ gnome/otherlibs/gtkhtml/gtkhtml1-exp.xml	(revision 52a46b3a46a6053176d195953f7c37175e9615bf)
@@ -4,5 +4,6 @@
 <para><parameter>--prefix=/opt/gnome</parameter>: Install
 <application><acronym>GTK</acronym> <acronym>HTML</acronym></application> in the
-<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> 1.4 area.</para>
+<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> 1.4 directory
+structure.</para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: gnome/otherlibs/guppi/guppi-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/guppi/guppi-exp.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ gnome/otherlibs/guppi/guppi-exp.xml	(revision 52a46b3a46a6053176d195953f7c37175e9615bf)
@@ -3,5 +3,7 @@
 
 <para><parameter>--prefix=/opt/gnome</parameter>: Install <application>Guppi
-</application> in the <application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> 1.4 area.</para>
+</application> in the
+<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> 1.4 directory
+structure.</para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: gnome/otherlibs/libcapplet/libcapplet-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/libcapplet/libcapplet-exp.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ gnome/otherlibs/libcapplet/libcapplet-exp.xml	(revision 52a46b3a46a6053176d195953f7c37175e9615bf)
@@ -4,5 +4,6 @@
 <para><parameter>--prefix=/opt/gnome</parameter>: Install
 <application>libcapplet</application> in the
-<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> 1.4 area.</para>
+<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> 1.4 directory
+structure.</para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: gnome/otherlibs/libghttp/libghttp-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/libghttp/libghttp-exp.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ gnome/otherlibs/libghttp/libghttp-exp.xml	(revision 52a46b3a46a6053176d195953f7c37175e9615bf)
@@ -4,5 +4,6 @@
 <para><parameter>--prefix=/opt/gnome</parameter>: Install
 <application>libghttp</application> in the
-<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> 1.4 area.</para>
+<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> 1.4 directory
+structure.</para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: gnome/otherlibs/orbit/orbit-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/orbit/orbit-desc.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ gnome/otherlibs/orbit/orbit-desc.xml	(revision 52a46b3a46a6053176d195953f7c37175e9615bf)
@@ -26,5 +26,6 @@
 
 <sect3><title>libORBitutil</title>
-<para><filename class="libraryfile">libORBitutil</filename> library contain the convenience routines for ORBit.</para></sect3>
+<para><filename class="libraryfile">libORBitutil</filename> library
+contains the convenience routines for ORBit.</para></sect3>
 
 
Index: gnome/otherlibs/soup/soup-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/otherlibs/soup/soup-exp.xml	(revision 31180e0f23d50c2ec80fdbdea3d9bdebaae38afb)
+++ gnome/otherlibs/soup/soup-exp.xml	(revision 52a46b3a46a6053176d195953f7c37175e9615bf)
@@ -4,5 +4,6 @@
 <para><parameter>--prefix=/opt/gnome</parameter>: Install
 <application>Soup</application> in the
-<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> 1.4 area.</para>
+<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> 1.4 directory
+structure.</para>
 
 <para><parameter>--enable-apache=no</parameter>: This command can be added
