Changeset 52c44ebf

Timestamp:

07/12/2005 06:16:54 AM (19 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

dc913a5a

Parents:

38ec4bf

Message:

Added verbose switches and grammar fixes to the PCI Utilities instructions

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@4717 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Files:

• general.ent (modified) (2 diffs)
• general/sysutils/pciutils.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• introduction/welcome/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)

general.ent

@@ -1 @@
-<!ENTITY day          "11">
+<!ENTITY day          "12">
 <!ENTITY month        "07">
 <!ENTITY year         "2005">
@@ -6 +6 @@
 <!ENTITY pubdate      "&year;-&month;-&day;"> <!-- metadata req. by TLDP -->
 <!ENTITY blfs-version "svn">                  <!-- svn|[release #] -->
-<!ENTITY lfs-version  "testing">          <!-- version|stable|testing|unstable|development] -->
+<!ENTITY lfs-version  "stable">          <!-- version|stable|testing|unstable|development] -->
 <!ENTITY last-commit  "$Date$"> <!-- Automatic update -->
 

general/sysutils/pciutils.xml

@@ -75 +75 @@
 <screen role="root"><userinput>make PREFIX=/usr install</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Some packages require the pci static library. To install the library and
-        the headers, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
+    <para>Some packages require the PCI static library. To install the library
+    and headers, issue the following commands as the
+    <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
 
-<screen role="root"><userinput>install -d /usr/include/pci &amp;&amp;
-install -m 644 lib/libpci.a /usr/lib &amp;&amp;
-install -m 644 lib/*.h /usr/include/pci</userinput></screen>
+<screen role="root"><userinput>install -v -m755 -d /usr/include/pci &amp;&amp;
+install -v -m 644 lib/libpci.a /usr/lib &amp;&amp;
+install -v -m 644 lib/*.h /usr/include/pci</userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -95 +96 @@
         <seg>lspci, setpci and update-pciids</seg>
         <seg>libpci.a</seg>
-        <seg>None</seg>
+        <seg>/usr/include/pci</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>
@@ -139 +140 @@
       <term><filename role='library'>libpci.a</filename></term>
       <listitem>
-        <para> is the static library that allow applications to access PCI subsystem.</para>
+        <para> is the static library that allows applications to access the PCI
+        subsystem.</para>
         <indexterm zone="pciutils libpci">
           <primary sortas="c-libpci">libpci.a</primary>

introduction/welcome/changelog.xml

@@ -26 +26 @@
 
     <listitem>
-      <para>July 11th, 2005 [tushar]: Install static library and header in pciutils.</para>
+      <para>July 11th, 2005 [tushar]: Install static library and header in
+      PCI Utilities.</para>
     </listitem>