Index: basicnet/mailnews/fetchmail/fetchmail-config.xml
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--- basicnet/mailnews/fetchmail/fetchmail-config.xml	(revision 2cbfd78a5ffed8b1819898217fbb022dc2598452)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/fetchmail/fetchmail-config.xml	(revision 563bc92bf8ea44d6d21feceae1b443842d64d062)
@@ -8,19 +8,22 @@
 <sect3><title>Configuration Information</title>
 
-<screen>set logfile /var/log/fetchmail.log
+<screen><userinput><command>cat &gt; ~/.fetchmailrc &lt;&lt; "EOF"</command> 
+set logfile /var/log/fetchmail.log
 set no bouncemail
 set postmaster root
 
 poll SERVERNAME :
-    user "username" pass "password";
-    mda "/usr/bin/procmail -f %F -d %T";</screen>
+    user username pass password;
+    mda "/usr/bin/procmail -f %F -d %T";
+<command>EOF</command>
 
+<command>chmod 0600 ~/.fetchmailrc</command></userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Is an example configuration that should suffice for most people.  You 
+<para>This is an example configuration that should suffice for most people.  You 
 can add as many users and servers as you need using the same syntax.</para>
 
 <para><command>man fetchmail</command>: Look for the section near
-the bottom named <emphasis role="strong">CONFIGURATION EXAMPLES</emphasis> it 
-gives some quick examples too. There are countless other config options once 
+the bottom named <emphasis role="strong">CONFIGURATION EXAMPLES</emphasis>. It 
+gives some quick examples. There are countless other config options once 
 you get used to it.</para>
 
Index: basicnet/mailnews/fetchmail/fetchmail-desc.xml
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--- basicnet/mailnews/fetchmail/fetchmail-desc.xml	(revision 2cbfd78a5ffed8b1819898217fbb022dc2598452)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/fetchmail/fetchmail-desc.xml	(revision 563bc92bf8ea44d6d21feceae1b443842d64d062)
@@ -14,11 +14,14 @@
 </para></sect3>
 
-<sect3><title>fetchmailconf</title>
+<sect3>
+<title>fetchmailconf</title>
+
 <para>This program provides a <application>Tk</application>
-<acronym>GUI</acronym> interface to your
-<filename>~/.fetchmailrc</filename> making it 
-much easier to configure.  However you will require,
-<application>Python</application>, and it must 
-have the Tkinker module available.</para></sect3>
+<acronym>GUI</acronym> interface to your <filename>~/.fetchmailrc</filename>
+file making it much easier to configure.  However, you will require
+<application>Python</application>, and it must have the Tkinker module
+available.</para>
+
+</sect3>
 
 </sect2>
Index: basicnet/mailnews/fetchmail/fetchmail-intro.xml
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--- basicnet/mailnews/fetchmail/fetchmail-intro.xml	(revision 2cbfd78a5ffed8b1819898217fbb022dc2598452)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/fetchmail/fetchmail-intro.xml	(revision 563bc92bf8ea44d6d21feceae1b443842d64d062)
@@ -2,9 +2,8 @@
 <title>Introduction to <application>Fetchmail</application></title>
 
-<para>The <application>Fetchmail</application> package contains the
-a mail retrieval program. &quot;It
-retrieves mail from remote mail servers and forwards it to your local
-(client) machine's delivery system, so it can then be read by
-normal mail user agents.&quot; </para>
+<para>The <application>Fetchmail</application> package contains a mail
+retrieval program. &quot;It retrieves mail from remote mail servers and
+forwards it to your local (client) machine's delivery system, so it can then be
+read by normal mail user agents.&quot; </para>
 
 <sect3><title>Package information</title>
@@ -22,10 +21,14 @@
 
 <sect3><title><application>Fetchmail</application> dependencies</title>
+
 <sect4><title>Required</title>
-<para><xref linkend="openssl"/> and a local MDA (<xref
-linkend="procmail"/>) </para></sect4>
+
+<para><xref linkend="openssl"/> and a local MDA (<xref linkend="procmail"/>)
+</para>
+</sect4>
 
 <sect4><title>Optional</title>
-<para><xref linkend="Python"/></para></sect4>
+<para><xref linkend="Python"/> and <xref linkend="tk"/>.</para>
+</sect4>
 </sect3>
 
Index: basicnet/mailnews/mailnews.xml
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--- basicnet/mailnews/mailnews.xml	(revision 2cbfd78a5ffed8b1819898217fbb022dc2598452)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/mailnews.xml	(revision 563bc92bf8ea44d6d21feceae1b443842d64d062)
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 <title>Mail/News Clients</title>
 
-<para>Mail Clients help us retrieve (Fetchmail), sort (Procmail), read and 
+<para>Mail Clients help you retrieve (Fetchmail), sort (Procmail), read and 
 compose responses (Nail, Mutt, Pine, Kmail, Balsa, Evolution, Mozilla) to
 email.</para>
 
-<para>News clients also help us retrieve, sort, read and compose
+<para>News clients also help you retrieve, sort, read and compose
 responses, but these messages travel through USENET (a worldwide
 bulletin board system) using the Network News Transfer Protocol
Index: basicnet/mailnews/other.xml
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--- basicnet/mailnews/other.xml	(revision 2cbfd78a5ffed8b1819898217fbb022dc2598452)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/other.xml	(revision 563bc92bf8ea44d6d21feceae1b443842d64d062)
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
 <title>Other Mail and News programs</title>
 
-<para><xref linkend="pan"/> is an <acronym>GTK</acronym>2 based newsreader 
+<para><xref linkend="pan"/> is a <acronym>GTK</acronym>2 based newsreader 
 program.</para>
 
@@ -11,5 +11,5 @@
 <para>KMail is a Qt based mail client from <xref linkend="kdepim"/>.</para>
 
-<para><xref linkend="balsa"/> is an <acronym>GTK</acronym>2 based mail client.
+<para><xref linkend="balsa"/> is a <acronym>GTK</acronym>2 based mail client.
 </para>
 
@@ -20,5 +20,5 @@
 <application>Mozilla</application> code base.</para>
 
-<para><xref linkend="evolution"/> includes an <acronym>GTK</acronym>2
+<para><xref linkend="evolution"/> includes a <acronym>GTK</acronym>2
 based mail client.</para> 
 
Index: basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-config.xml
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--- basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-config.xml	(revision 2cbfd78a5ffed8b1819898217fbb022dc2598452)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-config.xml	(revision 563bc92bf8ea44d6d21feceae1b443842d64d062)
@@ -22,5 +22,5 @@
 command:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput><command>NNTPSERVER=news.linuxfromscratch.org \
+<screen><userinput><command>NNTPSERVER=<replaceable>news.linuxfromscratch.org</replaceable> \
     slrn -f ~/.jnewsrc --create</command></userinput></screen>
 
Index: basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-exp.xml
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--- basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-exp.xml	(revision 2cbfd78a5ffed8b1819898217fbb022dc2598452)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/slrn/slrn-exp.xml	(revision 563bc92bf8ea44d6d21feceae1b443842d64d062)
@@ -1,8 +1,4 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Command explanations</title>
-
-<para><command>./configure --prefix=/usr</command>: Specify
-<filename class="directory">/usr</filename> to install to instead of
-<filename class="directory">/usr/local</filename>.</para>
 
 <para><command>./configure --with-slrnpull</command>: Build the slrnpull executable.</para>
