Changeset 59108487

Timestamp:

04/20/2006 11:56:22 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Dan Nichilson <dnicholson@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

a5bf03b

Parents:

df7d5d36

Message:

Fixed typos and wordings in tin

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@5896 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• basicnet/mailnews/tin.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

basicnet/mailnews/tin.xml

@@ -35 +35 @@
 
     <para><application>TIN</application> is a threaded NNTP and spool based
-    console console-mode UseNet newsreader. It supports threading, scoring,
+    console-mode UseNet newsreader. It supports threading, scoring,
     different charsets, and many other useful things. It has also support for
     different languages.</para>
@@ -115 +115 @@
 
     <para><parameter>--enable-nntp-only</parameter>: Reading news from a local
-    spool is disabled with this switch.  Don't use this is you have installed
-    INN and want to use its' spool.</para>
+    spool is disabled with this switch.  Don't use this if you have installed
+    INN and want to use its spool.</para>
 
     <para><parameter>--disable-printing</parameter>: This switch disables
-    printing since <application>TIN</application> cant send non-ASCII text to
-    the printer correctly. Remove this switch if you can tolerate this
+    printing since <application>TIN</application> cannot send non-ASCII text
+    to the printer correctly. Remove this switch if you can tolerate this
     limitation.</para>
 
@@ -163 +163 @@
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
-      <para>Now, as a normal user, subscribe to some newsgroups, specify the
-      news server, and run <command>tin</command>:</para>
+      <para>Now, as an unprivileged user, subscribe to some newsgroups,
+      specify the news server, and run <command>tin</command>:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cat &gt;&gt; ~/.newsrc &lt;&lt; "EOF"
@@ -183 +183 @@
       <segtitle>Installed Programs</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>