Index: appendices/glossary.xml
===================================================================
--- appendices/glossary.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ appendices/glossary.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -152,4 +152,7 @@
 <glossdef><para><acronym>GTK</acronym>+ Drawing Kit</para></glossdef></glossentry>
 
+<glossentry id="gGID"><glossterm><acronym>GID</acronym></glossterm>
+<glossdef><para>Group IDentity</para></glossdef></glossentry>
+
 <glossentry id="gGIF"><glossterm><acronym>GIF</acronym></glossterm>
 <glossdef><para>Graphics Interchange Format</para></glossdef></glossentry>
@@ -422,4 +425,7 @@
 <glossdef><para>Secure Sockets Layer</para></glossdef></glossentry>
 
+<glossentry id="gSUID"><glossterm><acronym>SUID</acronym></glossterm>
+<glossdef><para>Set User IDentity</para></glossdef></glossentry>
+
 <glossentry id="gSVG"><glossterm><acronym>SVG</acronym></glossterm>
 <glossdef><para>Scalable Vector Graphics</para></glossdef></glossentry>
@@ -443,4 +449,7 @@
 <glossdef><para>Universal Disk Format</para></glossdef></glossentry>
 
+<glossentry id="gUID"><glossterm><acronym>UID</acronym></glossterm>
+<glossdef><para>User IDentity</para></glossdef></glossentry>
+
 <glossentry id="gUDP"><glossterm><acronym>UDP</acronym></glossterm>
 <glossdef><para>User Datagram Protocol</para></glossdef></glossentry>
Index: appendices/symlinks/rc0.xml
===================================================================
--- appendices/symlinks/rc0.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ appendices/symlinks/rc0.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -144,5 +144,5 @@
 <entry>xinetd</entry>
 <entry><filename>../init.d/xinetd</filename></entry>
-<entry>Stop internet services daemon: <xref linkend="xinetd"/></entry>
+<entry>Stop Internet services daemon: <xref linkend="xinetd"/></entry>
 </row>
 
Index: appendices/symlinks/rc1.xml
===================================================================
--- appendices/symlinks/rc1.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ appendices/symlinks/rc1.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -116,5 +116,5 @@
 <entry>xinetd</entry>
 <entry><filename>../init.d/xinetd</filename></entry>
-<entry>Stop internet services daemon: <xref linkend="xinetd"/></entry>
+<entry>Stop Internet services daemon: <xref linkend="xinetd"/></entry>
 </row>
 
Index: appendices/symlinks/rc2.xml
===================================================================
--- appendices/symlinks/rc2.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ appendices/symlinks/rc2.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -102,5 +102,5 @@
 <entry>xinetd</entry>
 <entry><filename>../init.d/xinetd</filename></entry>
-<entry>Stop internet services daemon: <xref linkend="xinetd"/></entry>
+<entry>Stop Internet services daemon: <xref linkend="xinetd"/></entry>
 </row>
 
Index: appendices/symlinks/rc3.xml
===================================================================
--- appendices/symlinks/rc3.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ appendices/symlinks/rc3.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -67,5 +67,5 @@
 <entry>xinetd</entry>
 <entry><filename>../init.d/xinetd</filename></entry>
-<entry>Load internet services daemon: <xref linkend="xinetd"/></entry>
+<entry>Load Internet services daemon: <xref linkend="xinetd"/></entry>
 </row>
 
Index: appendices/symlinks/rc4.xml
===================================================================
--- appendices/symlinks/rc4.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ appendices/symlinks/rc4.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -67,5 +67,5 @@
 <entry>xinetd</entry>
 <entry><filename>../init.d/xinetd</filename></entry>
-<entry>Load internet services daemon: <xref linkend="xinetd"/></entry>
+<entry>Load Internet services daemon: <xref linkend="xinetd"/></entry>
 </row>
 
Index: appendices/symlinks/rc5.xml
===================================================================
--- appendices/symlinks/rc5.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ appendices/symlinks/rc5.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -60,5 +60,5 @@
 <entry>xinetd</entry>
 <entry><filename>../init.d/xinetd</filename></entry>
-<entry>Load internet services daemon: <xref linkend="xinetd"/></entry>
+<entry>Load Internet services daemon: <xref linkend="xinetd"/></entry>
 </row>
 
Index: appendices/symlinks/rc6.xml
===================================================================
--- appendices/symlinks/rc6.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ appendices/symlinks/rc6.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -137,5 +137,5 @@
 <entry>xinetd</entry>
 <entry><filename>../init.d/xinetd</filename></entry>
-<entry>Stop internet services daemon: <xref linkend="xinetd"/></entry>
+<entry>Stop Internet services daemon: <xref linkend="xinetd"/></entry>
 </row>
 
Index: basicnet/djb/daemontools/daemontools-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/djb/daemontools/daemontools-desc.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ basicnet/djb/daemontools/daemontools-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -73,10 +73,10 @@
 <sect3><title>setuidgid</title>
 <para><command>setuidgid</command> runs a specified program under a given 
-account's uid and gid.</para></sect3>
+account's <acronym>UID</acronym> and <acronym>GID</acronym>.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>envuidgid</title>
 <para><command>envuidgid</command> performs the same function as setuidgid, 
 but sets environment variables <envar>UID</envar> and <envar>GID</envar> equal 
-to the uid and gid of the account specified.</para></sect3>
+to the <acronym>UID</acronym> and <acronym>GID</acronym> of the account specified.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>envdir</title>
Index: basicnet/netlibs/curl/curl-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netlibs/curl/curl-intro.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ basicnet/netlibs/curl/curl-intro.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -7,5 +7,5 @@
 For example, <command>curl http://curl.haxx.se/download/curl-&curl-version;.tar.gz &gt;
 curl-&curl-version;.tar.gz</command> would download this program's 
-tarball to the current directory. This ability to both download and 
+<acronym>TAR</acronym> ball to the current directory. This ability to both download and 
 redirect files can be incorporated into other programs to support 
 functions like streaming media.</para>
Index: basicnet/netprogs/cvs/cvs-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netprogs/cvs/cvs-desc.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/cvs/cvs-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -20,5 +20,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>rcs2log</title>
-<para><acronym>RCS</acronym> to ChangeLog generator.</para></sect3>
+<para><acronym>RCS</acronym> to Change Log generator.</para></sect3>
 
 </sect2>
Index: basicnet/netprogs/inetutils/inetutils-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netprogs/inetutils/inetutils-desc.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/inetutils/inetutils-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -47,5 +47,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>inetd</title>
-<para><command>inetd</command> is a internet super-server.</para></sect3>
+<para><command>inetd</command> is a Internet super-server.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>rexecd</title>
Index: basicnet/netprogs/tcpwrappers/tcpwrappers-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netprogs/tcpwrappers/tcpwrappers-desc.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/tcpwrappers/tcpwrappers-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -11,5 +11,5 @@
 <sect3><title>tcpd</title>
 <para><command>tcpd</command> is the main access control daemon for all 
-internet services, which <command>inetd</command> or
+Internet services, which <command>inetd</command> or
 <command>xinetd</command> will run instead of running the
 requested service daemon.</para></sect3>
Index: basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute-exp.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute-exp.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
 <para><command>make install</command>: Installs <command>traceroute</command> 
-setuid root in the <filename>/usr/sbin</filename> directory. This makes it 
+with <acronym>UID</acronym> set to  root in the <filename>/usr/sbin</filename> directory. This makes it 
 possible for all users to execute <command>traceroute</command>. For absolute 
-security, turn off the setuid bit in <command>traceroute</command>'s file 
+security, turn off the <acronym>SUID</acronym> bit in <command>traceroute</command>'s file 
 permissions with the command: 
 <screen><command>chmod 0755 /usr/sbin/traceroute</command></screen></para>
@@ -16,11 +16,13 @@
 <para>The risk is that if a security problem such as a buffer overflow were 
 ever found in the <application>Traceroute</application> code, a regular user 
-on your system could gain root access if the program is setuid root. Removing 
-the setuid permission of course also makes it impossible for users other than 
+on your system could gain root access if the program is
+<acronym>SUID</acronym> root. Removing 
+the <acronym>SUID</acronym> permission of course also makes it impossible for users other than 
 root to utilize <command>traceroute</command>, so decide what's right for your 
 individual situation.</para>
 
 <para>Now, to be completely <acronym>FHS</acronym> compliant, as is our aim, if 
-you do leave the <command>traceroute</command> binary setuid root, then you 
+you do leave the <command>traceroute</command> binary
+<acronym>SUID</acronym> root, then you 
 should move <filename>traceroute</filename> to <filename>/usr/bin</filename> 
 with the following command: 
Index: connect/connect.xml
===================================================================
--- connect/connect.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ connect/connect.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -6,5 +6,5 @@
 by connecting to a <acronym>LAN</acronym> with a static
 <acronym>IP</acronym>.  There are other methods used to connect to
-<acronym>LAN</acronym>'s and other networks (such as the internet).  We cover 
+<acronym>LAN</acronym>'s and other networks (such as the Internet).  We cover 
 the most popular methods in this chapter.</para></partintro>
 
Index: content/web/apache/apache-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- content/web/apache/apache-desc.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ content/web/apache/apache-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -30,5 +30,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>apachectl</title>
-<para><command>apachectl</command> is a frontend to the
+<para><command>apachectl</command> is a front end to the
 <application>Apache</application> <acronym>HTTP</acronym> 
 server which is designed to help the administrator control the
Index: general/graphlib/svgalib/svgalib-inst.xml
===================================================================
--- general/graphlib/svgalib/svgalib-inst.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ general/graphlib/svgalib/svgalib-inst.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
 <note><para>You must compile and install as root. If you don't nothing bad
 will happen during compilation, but certain tools won't be able to
-become setuid root which is required for proper operation. However,
+become <acronym>SUID</acronym> root which is required for proper operation. However,
 this raises a risk of exposing your system to any holes in those
 tools that might be used to gain root access so use with caution.</para></note>
Index: general/prog/gcc/gcc-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- general/prog/gcc/gcc-exp.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ general/prog/gcc/gcc-exp.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -16,5 +16,5 @@
 <application>Ada</application> build. This step
 may be skipped if you don't want to compile the
-<application>Ada</application> frontend.</para>
+<application>Ada</application> front end.</para>
 
 <para><parameter>CC=/usr/bin/gcc</parameter>: This command works around the
Index: introduction/important/unpacking.xml
===================================================================
--- introduction/important/unpacking.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ introduction/important/unpacking.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -13,5 +13,5 @@
 installation instructions.</para>
 
-<para>While you can keep the source tarballs anywhere you like, we
+<para>While you can keep the source <acronym>TAR</acronym> balls anywhere you like, we
 assume that you have unpacked them and unzipped any required patches
 into <filename>/usr/src</filename>.</para>
Index: introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <sect1 id="intro-welcome-changelog" role="dsssl">
 <?dbhtml filename="changelog.html" dir="introduction"?>
-<title>Changelog</title>
-
-<para>Please note that the changelog only lists which editor was
+<title>Change Log</title>
+
+<para>Please note that the change log only lists which editor was
 responsible for putting the changes into <acronym>CVS</acronym>; please read 
 the <xref linkend="intro-welcome-credits"/> page in Chapter 1 for details on 
Index: multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-desc.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -19,5 +19,5 @@
 <screen><command>mplayer -fs blfs.avi
 mplayer -vo fbdev -fb /dev/fb0 -dvd 1 -aid 128 -sub en -framedrop
-mplayer -fs -vcd 1; # works both for VCDs and SVCDs
+mplayer -fs vcd://1    # works both for VCDs and SVCDs
 mplayer http://www.students.uni-marburg.de/~Klossa/hapkidofight_lo.mpg</command></screen>
 
Index: postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -14,5 +14,5 @@
 
 <para>Heeding the warning, the rescue disk created here has no
-dependency on the host system's resources, other than basic boot-ability
+dependency on the host system's resources, other than basic bootability
 and hardware soundness.  At a minimum, the most common sorts of failures
 requiring a rescue boot disk should be addressed by the contents of the
@@ -74,5 +74,5 @@
 compiled with same compiler used to make the kernel.</para>
 
-<para>The rescue-image must include support for the file system of your
+<para>The rescue image must include support for the file system of your
 choice (we presume ext2/3 here), ramdisk and initial ramdisk (initrd).
 Disable everything that you can in the kernel configuration. You should
Index: postlfs/config/config.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/config/config.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ postlfs/config/config.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -13,5 +13,5 @@
 these files can be found in the <filename>/etc</filename> hierarchy.
 There are often graphical configuration programs available for different
-subsystems but most are simply pretty frontends to the process
+subsystems but most are simply pretty front ends to the process
 of editing the file.  The advantage of text-only configuration is that
 you can edit parameters using your favorite text editor, whether that
Index: postlfs/editors/emacs/emacs-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/editors/emacs/emacs-desc.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ postlfs/editors/emacs/emacs-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -41,6 +41,6 @@
 
 <sect3><title>grep-changelog</title>
-<para><command>grep-changelog</command> prints entries in ChangeLogs matching various
-criteria.</para></sect3>
+<para><command>grep-changelog</command> prints entries in Change Logs matching 
+various criteria.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>rcs-checkin</title>
Index: postlfs/security/firewalling/busybox.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/security/firewalling/busybox.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ postlfs/security/firewalling/busybox.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -6,5 +6,5 @@
 Examples of this can be when you want to admin your box from another host 
 on your intranet or use it as a proxy or a name server. Note: Outlining a true 
-concept howto protect a server that offers services on the internet 
+concept of how to protect a server that offers services on the Internet 
 goes far beyond the scope of this document, 
 see <xref linkend="postlfs-security-fw-disclaimer"/>.</para>
@@ -16,5 +16,5 @@
 <xref linkend="postlfs-security-fw-masqRouter"/> for some more details.</para>
 
-<para>If the services you'd like to offer do not need to access the internet 
+<para>If the services you'd like to offer do not need to access the Internet 
 themselves, like internal-only samba- or name-servers, it's quite
 simple and should still be acceptable from a security standpoint.
Index: postlfs/security/firewalling/intro.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/security/firewalling/intro.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ postlfs/security/firewalling/intro.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 <sect2 id="postlfs-security-fw-intro" xreflabel="Firewalling Introduction">
-<title>Introduction to Firewalling</title>
+<title>Introduction to Firewall Creation</title>
 
 <para>The general purpose of a firewall is to protect a network 
@@ -16,5 +16,5 @@
 may wish to choose which services are accessible by certain machines, 
 you may wish to limit which machines or applications are allowed 
-to have internet access, or you may simply  not trust some of your 
+to have Internet access, or you may simply  not trust some of your 
 apps or users.
 In these situations you might  benefit by using a firewall.</para>
@@ -39,12 +39,12 @@
 <para>This is a setup or program, for Windows commercially sold by 
 companies such as Symantec, of which they claim or pretend that it
-secures a home or desktop-pc with internet access. This topic is 
+secures a home or desktop-pc with Internet access. This topic is 
 highly relevant for users who do not know the ways their computers 
-might be accessed via the internet and how to disable these, 
+might be accessed via the Internet and how to disable these, 
 especially if they are always online and if they are connected via 
 broadband links.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title><xref linkend="postlfs-security-fw-masqRouter"/></title>
-<para>This is a box placed between the internet and an intranet. 
+<para>This is a box placed between the Internet and an intranet. 
 To minimize the risk of compromising the firewall itself it
 should generally have only one role, that of protecting the intranet.
@@ -52,5 +52,5 @@
 and eventually IP masquerading (rewriting IP-headers 
 of the packets it routes from clients with private IP-addresses onto 
-the internet so that they seem to come from the firewall 
+the Internet so that they seem to come from the firewall 
 itself) are commonly considered harmless.</para></sect3>
 
Index: postlfs/security/firewalling/masqrouter.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/security/firewalling/masqrouter.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ postlfs/security/firewalling/masqrouter.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
 <para>A true Firewall has two interfaces, one connected to an intranet,
 in this example, <emphasis role="strong">eth0</emphasis>, and one
-connected to the internet, here, <emphasis role="strong">ppp0</emphasis>. 
+connected to the Internet, here, <emphasis role="strong">ppp0</emphasis>. 
 To provide the maximum security against the box itself being broken into,
 make sure that there are no servers running on it, especially not
@@ -92,5 +92,5 @@
 <replaceable>ppp+</replaceable> to the name of the interface which you are
 using.  If you are using the same interface type to connect to both your
-intranet and the internet, you need to use the actual name of the
+intranet and the Internet, you need to use the actual name of the
 interface such as <emphasis role="strong">eth0</emphasis>, 
 on both interfaces.</para>
Index: postlfs/security/firewalling/persfw.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/security/firewalling/persfw.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ postlfs/security/firewalling/persfw.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
 
 <para>A Personal Firewall is supposed to let you access the all services
-offered on the internet, but keep your box secure and your data private.</para>
+offered on the Internet, but keep your box secure and your data private.</para>
 
 <para>Below is a slightly modified version of Rusty Russell's
@@ -51,5 +51,5 @@
 <para>His script is quite simple, it drops all traffic coming in into your 
 computer that wasn't initiated from your box, but as long as you are simply 
-surfing the internet you are unlikely to exceed its limits.</para> 
+surfing the Internet you are unlikely to exceed its limits.</para> 
 
 <para>If you frequently encounter certain delays at accessing ftp-servers,
Index: postlfs/security/security.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/security/security.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ postlfs/security/security.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -16,6 +16,6 @@
 <para>Prevention of breaches, like a trojan, are assisted by applications like 
 <application>GnuPG</application>, specifically the ability to confirm signed 
-packages, which prevents modification of the tarball after the packager creates 
-it.</para>
+packages, which prevents modification of the <acronym>TAR</acronym> ball after 
+the packager creates it.</para>
 
 <para> Finally, we touch on detection with a package that stores "signatures" 
Index: pst/ps/a2ps/a2ps-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/ps/a2ps/a2ps-desc.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ pst/ps/a2ps/a2ps-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -2,6 +2,6 @@
 <title>Contents</title>
 
-<para>a2ps is a filter program. The <application>a2ps</application> package 
-consists of the program <command>a2ps</command> and filter data.</para>
+<para>The <application>a2ps</application> package 
+contains <command>a2ps</command> and filter data.</para>
 </sect2>
 
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
 <sect3><title>a2ps</title>
 
-<para><command>a2ps</command> is a filter program that converts nearly
-everything to PostScript.</para>
+<para><command>a2ps</command> is a filter, utilized primarily by
+printing scripts, that converts standard input or supported files 
+to PostScript.</para>
 
 </sect3>
Index: pst/ps/a2ps/a2ps-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/ps/a2ps/a2ps-exp.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ pst/ps/a2ps/a2ps-exp.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@
 cd .. &amp;&amp;</command></screen>
 These commands eliminate the compiling and installing of the
-<application>emacs</application> script files.  If you have substituted 
-<application>emacs</application> for <application>vi</application> as your 
+<application>Emacs</application> script files.  If you have substituted 
+<application>Emacs</application> for <application>Vi</application> as your 
 primary editor, you would want to skip these instructions.</para>
 
@@ -14,14 +14,15 @@
 sed -e 's|/usr/local/share/ghostscript|/usr/share/ghostscript|g' \
     configure.orig > configure</command></screen>
-This command modifies the configure script to search for Ghostscript fonts
+This command modifies the configure script to search for
+<application>Ghostscript</application> fonts
 at the location where they were installed by the <acronym>BLFS</acronym>
 instructions.</para>
 
 <para><parameter>--sysconfdir=/etc/a2ps</parameter>: Configuration data
-goes to <filename>/etc/a2ps</filename> instead of 
-<filename>/usr/etc</filename>.</para>
+goes to <filename class="directory">/etc/a2ps</filename> instead of 
+<filename class="directory">/usr/etc</filename>.</para>
 
 <para><parameter>--with-medium=letter</parameter>: This switch changes
-the default paper format of A4 to letter. Locations that utilize A4
+the default paper format of A4 to letter. Installations that utilize A4
 would eliminate this switch.</para> 
 
Index: pst/ps/a2ps/a2ps-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/ps/a2ps/a2ps-intro.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ pst/ps/a2ps/a2ps-intro.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -2,7 +2,8 @@
 <title>Introduction to <application>a2ps</application></title>
 
-<para><application>a2ps</application> is a utility used mostly in the 
-background to convert almost every input format into PostScript output, hence 
-the name "a2ps" which stands for "all to PostScript".</para>
+<para><application>a2ps</application> is a filter utilitized mainly in the 
+background and primarily by printing scripts to convert almost
+every input format into PostScript output. The application's name expands 
+appropriately to "all to PostScript".</para>
 
 <sect3><title>Package information</title>
Index: pst/ps/enscript/enscript-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/ps/enscript/enscript-desc.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ pst/ps/enscript/enscript-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -2,5 +2,5 @@
 <title>Contents</title>
 
-<para>The <application>enscript</application> package consists of the program
+<para>The <application>enscript</application> package contains 
 <command>enscript</command> and filter data.
 </para>
@@ -10,5 +10,6 @@
 <sect3><title>enscript</title>
 
-<para><command>enscript</command> is a filter program that converts
+<para><command>enscript</command> is a filter, used primarily by
+printing scripts, that converts
 <acronym>ASCII</acronym> files to PostScript.</para>
 
Index: pst/scanning/gocr/gocr-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/scanning/gocr/gocr-desc.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ pst/scanning/gocr/gocr-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -14,5 +14,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>gtk-ocr</title>
-<para><command>gtk-ocr</command> is the <acronym>GTK</acronym> frontend for
+<para><command>gtk-ocr</command> is the <acronym>GTK</acronym> front end for
 <command>gocr</command>.</para></sect3>
 
Index: pst/scanning/gocr/gocr-inst.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/scanning/gocr/gocr-inst.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ pst/scanning/gocr/gocr-inst.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -8,5 +8,5 @@
 make install</command></userinput></screen>
 
-<para>To install the <acronym>GTK</acronym> frontend, use the following commands:</para>
+<para>To install the <acronym>GTK</acronym> front end, use the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>cd frontend/gnome &amp;&amp;
Index: pst/scanning/gocr/gocr-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/scanning/gocr/gocr-intro.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ pst/scanning/gocr/gocr-intro.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -8,5 +8,5 @@
 
 <para><application>GOCR</application> can used as a console utility, but 
-there is an <acronym>GTK</acronym> frontend in the source package, also.</para>
+there is an <acronym>GTK</acronym> front end in the source package, also.</para>
 
 <sect3><title>Package information</title>
@@ -25,5 +25,5 @@
 <sect3><title><application>GOCR</application> dependencies</title>
 <sect4><title>Optional</title>
-<para><xref linkend="pst-typesetting-tex"/> or fig2dev (for examples), <xref linkend="xfree86"/> and <xref linkend="GTK"/> (for frontend only)</para></sect4>
+<para><xref linkend="pst-typesetting-tex"/> or fig2dev (for examples), <xref linkend="xfree86"/> and <xref linkend="GTK"/> (for front end only)</para></sect4>
 </sect3>
 
Index: pst/scanning/sane/sane-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/scanning/sane/sane-desc.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ pst/scanning/sane/sane-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -2,10 +2,10 @@
 <title>Contents</title>
 
-<sect3><title>Backends:</title>
+<sect3><title>Back ends:</title>
 <para>See <ulink url="http://www.mostang.com/sane/sane-supported-devices.html"/>
 for a list of available backends.</para>
 </sect3>
 
-<sect3><title>Frontends:</title>
+<sect3><title>Front ends:</title>
 <para><command>scanimage</command>: Command line interface for 
 scanning.</para>
Index: pst/scanning/sane/sane-inst.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/scanning/sane/sane-inst.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ pst/scanning/sane/sane-inst.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 </sect3>
 
-<sect3><title>Installation of <application><acronym>SANE</acronym></application> frontends</title>
+<sect3><title>Installation of <application><acronym>SANE</acronym></application> front ends</title>
 
-<para>To install <application><acronym>SANE</acronym></application> frontends, use the following 
+<para>To install <application><acronym>SANE</acronym></application> front ends, use the following 
 commands:</para>
 
Index: pst/scanning/sane/sane-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/scanning/sane/sane-intro.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ pst/scanning/sane/sane-intro.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -9,6 +9,6 @@
 with its own protocol, so the vendor drivers can't be used.</para>
                                                                                 
-<para><acronym>SANE</acronym> is split into backends and frontends. The 
-backends are drivers for the supported scanners. The frontends are user 
+<para><acronym>SANE</acronym> is split into back ends and front ends. The 
+back ends are drivers for the supported scanners. The front ends are user 
 interfaces to access the backends.</para>
 
@@ -21,8 +21,8 @@
 <listitem><para>Download (FTP): <ulink
 url="&sane-fe-download-ftp;"/></para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>Download size: &sane-be-size; (Backends), &sane-fe-size;
-(Frontends)</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>Download size: &sane-be-size; (Back ends), &sane-fe-size;
+(Front ends)</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Estimated Disk space required:
-&sane-be-buildsize; (Backends), &sane-fe-buildsize; (Frontends)</para></listitem>
+&sane-be-buildsize; (Back ends), &sane-fe-buildsize; (Front ends)</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Estimated build time:
 &sane-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
Index: pst/scanning/xsane/xsane-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/scanning/xsane/xsane-intro.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ pst/scanning/xsane/xsane-intro.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -2,5 +2,5 @@
 <title>Introduction to <application>XSane</application></title>
 
-<para><application>XSane</application> is another frontend for 
+<para><application>XSane</application> is another front end for 
 <xref linkend="sane"/>. It has additional features to improve the image 
 quality compared to xscanimage.</para>
Index: pst/typesetting/tex/tex-inst.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/typesetting/tex/tex-inst.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ pst/typesetting/tex/tex-inst.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -16,5 +16,5 @@
       | (umask 0; cd /usr/share/texmf; tar xvf -)</command></userinput></screen>
 
-<para>If the optional texmf source code tarball was downloaded, untar
+<para>If the optional texmf source code <acronym>TAR</acronym> ball was downloaded, untar
 it now:</para>
 <screen><userinput><command>gzip -dc ../tetex-texmfsrc-&tex-version;.tar.gz \
Index: pst/typesetting/tex/tex-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/typesetting/tex/tex-intro.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ pst/typesetting/tex/tex-intro.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -3,6 +3,7 @@
 
 <para><application>TeX</application> is a typesetting package, able to create 
-documents in a variety of formats.  The optional texmfsrc tarball contains 
-source code for packages that are contained in the texmf tarball, including
+documents in a variety of formats.  The optional texmfsrc
+<acronym>TAR</acronym> ball contains source code for packages that are 
+contained in the texmf <acronym>TAR</acronym> ball, including
 the docstrip sources.</para>
 
Index: server/other/xinetd/xinetd-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- server/other/xinetd/xinetd-desc.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ server/other/xinetd/xinetd-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -10,5 +10,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>xinetd</title>
-<para><command>xinetd</command> is the internet services daemon.</para></sect3>
+<para><command>xinetd</command> is the Internet services daemon.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>itox</title>
Index: x/wm/xfce/xfce-inst.xml
===================================================================
--- x/wm/xfce/xfce-inst.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ x/wm/xfce/xfce-inst.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -2,5 +2,6 @@
 <title>Installation of <application>XFce</application></title>
 
-<para><application>XFce</application> now distributes as a tarball of
+<para><application>XFce</application> now distributes as a
+<acronym>TAR</acronym> ball of
 base packages and module packages. These instructions will only cover
 the bare minimum to run the application.  The remaining modules would
Index: xsoft/other/other.xml
===================================================================
--- xsoft/other/other.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ xsoft/other/other.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -3,6 +3,6 @@
 <title>Other X-based Internet Programs</title>
 
-<para>The internet isn't just about browsing.  Here are more graphical
-applications that utilize other areas of the internet.</para>
+<para>The Internet isn't just about browsing.  Here are more graphical
+applications that utilize other areas of the Internet.</para>
 
 &pan;
Index: xsoft/suites/openoffice/openoffice-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- xsoft/suites/openoffice/openoffice-intro.xml	(revision 5fd03d209311d05cde14e9b8e03e5d88960fa491)
+++ xsoft/suites/openoffice/openoffice-intro.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
@@ -41,5 +41,5 @@
 <listitem><para>Required patch if <xref linkend="Linux_PAM"/> is not installed: <ulink
 url="&patch-root;/openoffice-&openoffice-version;-no-pam.patch"/></para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>The source tarball only contains English language help. A localized help
+<listitem><para>The source <acronym>TAR</acronym> ball only contains English language help. A localized help
 content file may be available at <ulink
 url="http://ftp.services.openoffice.org/pub/OpenOffice.org/contrib/helpcontent/"/>.</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
