Changeset 601a838 for general

Timestamp:

08/22/2012 10:30:35 PM (12 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

7368969

Parents:

c35030e

Message:

Fixed typos and added missing XML tags

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@10541 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

general

Files:

• genlib/pth.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• prog/git.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• prog/guile.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• prog/other-tools.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• sysutils/autofs.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• sysutils/lm_sensors.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• sysutils/udev-extras.xml (modified) (1 diff)

general/genlib/pth.xml

@@ -81 +81 @@
 
 <screen><userinput>sed -i 's#$(LOBJS): Makefile#$(LOBJS): pth_p.h Makefile#' Makefile.in &amp;&amp;
-./configure --prefix=/usr --disable-static --mandir=/usr/share/man &amp;&amp;
+./configure --prefix=/usr           \
+            --disable-static        \
+            --mandir=/usr/share/man &amp;&amp;
 make</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -98 +100 @@
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
 
-    <para><command>sed -i 's#$(LOBJS) ...</command>: This sed fixes a race
-    condition in the Makefile. It allows you to run <command>make</command> with
-    multiple jobs (eg, <command>make -j4</command>) <!-- how ironic that a
-    package for using multiple threads has this bug in its Makefile-->.</para>
+    <para><command>sed -i 's#$(LOBJS) ...</command>: This <command>sed</command>
+    fixes a race condition in the <filename>Makefile</filename>. It allows you
+    to run <command>make</command> with multiple jobs (e.g., <command>make -j4</command>)
+    <!-- how ironic that a package for using multiple threads has this bug in
+    its Makefile -->.</para>
 
     <para><option>--disable-static</option>: This option stops it compiling a
@@ -107 +110 @@
 
     <para><option>--mandir=/usr/share/man</option>: This option puts the man
-    pages in /usr/share/man and not /usr/man.</para>
+    pages in <filename class="directory">/usr/share/man</filename> and not
+    <filename class="directory">/usr/man</filename>.</para>
   </sect2>
 

general/prog/git.xml

@@ -234 +234 @@
 
       <para>If you want to use <command>git svn</command> you will need to
-      install <xref linkend="subversion"/> and its perl bindings.</para>
+      install <xref linkend="subversion"/> and its Perl bindings.</para>
 
       <para>To be able to use git to pull from a https source you need first

general/prog/guile.xml

@@ -233 +233 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a wrapper program installed along with <command>guile</command>
+            is a wrapper program installed along with <command>guile</command>,
             which knows where a particular module is installed and calls it,
             passing its arguments to the program.

general/prog/other-tools.xml

@@ -1940 +1940 @@
 
         <para><application>gtk2-perl</application> is the collective name for
-        a set of perl bindings for <application>GTK+</application> 2.x and
+        a set of Perl bindings for <application>GTK+</application> 2.x and
         various related libraries. These modules make it easy to write
         <application>GTK</application> and <application>GNOME</application>
-        applications using a natural, perlish, object-oriented syntax.</para>
+        applications using a natural, Perlish, object-oriented syntax.</para>
 
         <itemizedlist spacing="compact">

general/sysutils/autofs.xml

@@ -251 +251 @@
       <title>Boot Script</title>
 
-      <para> <application>autofs</application> installs it's own boot script,
+      <para> <application>autofs</application> installs its own boot script,
       but it has no capability for logging or visual conformance with other
       BLFS scripts.</para>

general/sysutils/lm_sensors.xml

@@ -310 +310 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a perl script to convert lm-sensors version 2 configuration files
+            is a Perl script to convert lm-sensors version 2 configuration files
             to work with version 3.
           </para>
@@ -323 +323 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a perl script that will walk you through the process of scanning
+            is a Perl script that will walk you through the process of scanning
             your system for various hardware monitoring chips, or sensors,
             supported by libsensors(3), or more generally by the lm_sensors

general/sysutils/udev-extras.xml

@@ -119 +119 @@
 <screen><userinput>make -f udev-lfs-186/Makefile.lfs keymap</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>To install <command>keymap</command> and it's assiciated files, 
-    run, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
+    <para>To install <command>keymap</command> and its associated files, 
+    issue the following command as the
+    <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make -f udev-lfs-186/Makefile.lfs install-keymap</userinput></screen>