Changeset 601a838 for networking

Timestamp:

08/22/2012 10:30:35 PM (12 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

7368969

Parents:

c35030e

Message:

Fixed typos and added missing XML tags

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@10541 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

networking

Files:

• connect/ppp.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• netutils/networkmanager.xml (modified) (1 diff)

networking/connect/ppp.xml

@@ -115 +115 @@
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
 
-    <para><command>rm include/linux/if_pppol2tp.h</command>: ppp-2.4.5 contains
-    an out of date copy of the kernel header linux/if_pppol2tp.h. This needs to
+    <para><command>rm include/linux/if_pppol2tp.h</command>:
+    <application>PPP-&ppp-version;</application> contains an out of date copy
+    of the kernel header <filename>linux/if_pppol2tp.h</filename>. This needs to
     be removed to <emphasis>force</emphasis> it to use the one installed in
-    /usr. If you don't remove this file the build will still succeed (thanks to
-    a poorly written Makefile) but it will fail to compile the openl2tp.so,
-    pppol2tp.so and rp-pppoe.so plugins:</para>
+    <filename class="directory">/usr</filename>. If you don't remove this file
+    the build will still succeed (thanks to a poorly written
+    <filename>Makefile</filename>) but it will fail to compile the
+    <filename class="libraryfile">openl2tp.so</filename>,
+    <filename class="libraryfile">pppol2tp.so</filename>,
+    and <filename class="libraryfile">rp-pppoe.so</filename> plugins:</para>
 
     <para><command>install -d /etc/ppp/peers</command>: This command creates
@@ -194 +198 @@
 
       <para>If you don't run your own caching DNS server (like
-      <xref linkend="bind"/>) pppd can ask your ISP for its domain name
-      servers and put them in /etc/ppp/resolv.conf. If you want to use their
-      domain name servers:</para>
+      <xref linkend="bind"/>) <command>pppd</command> can ask your ISP for its
+      domain name servers and put them in <filename>/etc/ppp/resolv.conf</filename>.
+      If you want to use their domain name servers:</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>mv /etc/resolv.conf{,.orig}

networking/netutils/networkmanager.xml

@@ -37 +37 @@
       3G, or Bluetooth, NetworkManager allows you to quickly move from one network
       to another: once a network has been configured and joined once, it can be
-      detected and re-joined automatically the next time its available.
+      detected and re-joined automatically the next time it's available.
     </para>