Index: content/web/apache/apache-config.xml
===================================================================
--- content/web/apache/apache-config.xml	(revision 00bb024cb22697ed8dbb02a2295282188162bc8e)
+++ content/web/apache/apache-config.xml	(revision 65df9fca7b49a35cec75c260931e9af291f3ede4)
@@ -22,5 +22,5 @@
 server.</para>
 
-<para>Install <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/apache</filename>
+<para>Install the <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/apache</filename>
 init script included in the <xref linkend="intro-important-bootscripts"/> package.</para>
                                                                                                                 
Index: content/web/apache/apache-desc.xml
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--- content/web/apache/apache-desc.xml	(revision 00bb024cb22697ed8dbb02a2295282188162bc8e)
+++ content/web/apache/apache-desc.xml	(revision 65df9fca7b49a35cec75c260931e9af291f3ede4)
@@ -42,5 +42,5 @@
 <sect3><title>dbmmanage</title>
 <para><command>dbmmanage</command> is used to create and update the
-<filename>DBM</filename> format files used to store usernames and password  
+<filename>DBM</filename> format files used to store usernames and passwords  
 for basic authentication of <acronym>HTTP</acronym>
 users.</para></sect3>
@@ -48,10 +48,10 @@
 <sect3><title>htdigest</title>
 <para><command>htdigest</command> is used to create and update the
-flat-files used to store usernames, realm and password for digest 
+flat-files used to store usernames, realms and passwords for digest 
 authentication of <acronym>HTTP</acronym> users.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>htpasswd</title>
 <para><command>htpasswd</command> is used to create and update the
-flat-files used to store usernames and password for basic authentication of 
+flat-files used to store usernames and passwords for basic authentication of 
 <acronym>HTTP</acronym> users.</para></sect3>
 
Index: content/web/proftpd/proftpd-config.xml
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--- content/web/proftpd/proftpd-config.xml	(revision 00bb024cb22697ed8dbb02a2295282188162bc8e)
+++ content/web/proftpd/proftpd-config.xml	(revision 65df9fca7b49a35cec75c260931e9af291f3ede4)
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>proftpd init.d script</title>
-<para>Install <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/proftpd</filename>
+<para>Install the <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/proftpd</filename>
 init script included in the <xref linkend="intro-important-bootscripts"/> package.</para>
                                                                                                                 
Index: content/web/proftpd/proftpd-desc.xml
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--- content/web/proftpd/proftpd-desc.xml	(revision 00bb024cb22697ed8dbb02a2295282188162bc8e)
+++ content/web/proftpd/proftpd-desc.xml	(revision 65df9fca7b49a35cec75c260931e9af291f3ede4)
@@ -12,5 +12,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>ftpcount</title>
-<para><command>ftpcount</command> shows current number of connections.</para></sect3>
+<para><command>ftpcount</command> shows the current number of connections.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>ftpshut</title>
Index: content/web/proftpd/proftpd-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- content/web/proftpd/proftpd-exp.xml	(revision 00bb024cb22697ed8dbb02a2295282188162bc8e)
+++ content/web/proftpd/proftpd-exp.xml	(revision 65df9fca7b49a35cec75c260931e9af291f3ede4)
@@ -4,8 +4,4 @@
 <para><parameter>install_user=proftpd install_group=proftpd</parameter>:
 Specify the user and group identity for ProFTPD.</para>
-
-<para><parameter>--prefix=/usr</parameter>:
-This installs ProFTPD in <filename class="directory">/usr</filename>
-instead of <filename class="directory">/usr/local</filename>.</para>
 
 <para><parameter>--sysconfdir=/etc</parameter>:
Index: content/web/web.xml
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--- content/web/web.xml	(revision 00bb024cb22697ed8dbb02a2295282188162bc8e)
+++ content/web/web.xml	(revision 65df9fca7b49a35cec75c260931e9af291f3ede4)
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
 
 <para>This chapter includes applications that respond to requests
-originating from the Internet.  Specifically covered are
+originating from <acronym>LAN</acronym>, intranet and internet clients.  Specifically covered are
 <acronym>HTTP</acronym> requests and <acronym>FTP</acronym>
 requests.</para>
