Changeset 65df9fca for server/other/cvsserver

Timestamp:

06/03/2004 02:41:04 AM (20 years ago)

Author:

Larry Lawrence <larry@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, v5_1, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

2cbfd78a

Parents:

23d784b

Message:

grammar corrections

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@2252 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

server/other/cvsserver

Files:

• cvsserver-exp.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• cvsserver-inst.xml (modified) (7 diffs)

server/other/cvsserver/cvsserver-exp.xml

@@ -2 +2 @@
 <title>Command explanations</title>
 
-<para><command>mkdir /cvsroot</command>: Create the <acronym>CVS</acronym> 
+<para><command>mkdir /home/cvsroot</command>: Create the <acronym>CVS</acronym> 
 repository directory.</para>
 
-<para><command>chmod 1777 /cvsroot</command>: Sticky bit permissions for 
+<para><command>chmod 1777 /home/cvsroot</command>: Set sticky bit permissions for 
 <envar>CVSROOT</envar>.</para>
 
-<para><command>export CVSROOT=/cvsroot</command>: Specify new <envar>CVSROOT
+<para><command>export CVSROOT=/home/cvsroot</command>: Specify new <envar>CVSROOT
 </envar> for all <command>cvs</command> commands.</para>
 
@@ -17 +17 @@
 releasetag</command>: All source code modules must be imported
 into the <acronym>CVS</acronym> repository before use, with the
-<command>cvs import</command> command.  the <userinput>-m</userinput> 
+<command>cvs import</command> command.  The <userinput>-m</userinput> 
 flags specifies an initial descriptive entry for the new module.
-the "cvstest" parameter is the name used for the module in all
-subsequent <command>cvs</command> commands.  the "vendortag" and "releasetag" 
+The "cvstest" parameter is the name used for the module in all
+subsequent <command>cvs</command> commands.  The "vendortag" and "releasetag" 
 parameters are used to further identify each <acronym>CVS</acronym> module and 
 are mandatory whether used or not.</para>
@@ -28 +28 @@
 create one if not found.</para>
 
-<para><command>echo anonymous: &gt; /cvsroot/CVSROOT/passwd
+<para><command>echo anonymous: &gt; /home/cvsroot/CVSROOT/passwd
 </command>: Add the anonymous user to the <acronym>CVS</acronym> passwd file, 
 which is unused for anything else in this configuration.</para>
 
-<para><command>echo anonymous &gt; /cvsroot/CVSROOT/readers</command>: Add the 
+<para><command>echo anonymous &gt; /home/cvsroot/CVSROOT/readers</command>: Add the 
 anonymous user to the <acronym>CVS</acronym> readers file, a list of
 users who have read only access to the repository.</para>

server/other/cvsserver/cvsserver-inst.xml

@@ -2 +2 @@
 <title>Setting up a <acronym>CVS</acronym> server.</title>
 
-<para>We will discuss setting up a <acronym>CVS</acronym> server using OpenSSH 
+<para>A <acronym>CVS</acronym> server will be set up using OpenSSH 
 as the remote access method.  Other access methods, including :pserver: and
 :server: will not be used for write access to the <acronym>CVS</acronym> 
@@ -10 +10 @@
 :pserver: can be found at the end of this section.</para>
 
-<para>Configuration of our <acronym>CVS</acronym> server consists of four 
+<para>Configuration of the <acronym>CVS</acronym> server consists of four 
 steps:</para>
 
 <sect3><title>1. Create a repository.</title>
 <para>Create a new <acronym>CVS</acronym> repository with the following 
-commands, logged in as root:</para>
-<screen><userinput><command>mkdir /cvsroot &amp;&amp;
-chmod 1777 /cvsroot &amp;&amp;
-export CVSROOT=/cvsroot &amp;&amp;
+commands:</para>
+<screen><userinput><command>mkdir /home/cvsroot &amp;&amp;
+chmod 1777 /home/cvsroot &amp;&amp;
+export CVSROOT=/home//cvsroot &amp;&amp;
 cvs init</command></userinput></screen></sect3>
 
@@ -26 +26 @@
 <acronym>CVS</acronym> repository:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput><command>export CVSROOT=/cvsroot &amp;&amp;
-cd sourcedir &amp;&amp;
-cvs import -m "repository test" cvstest vendortag releasetag</command></userinput></screen></sect3>
+<screen><userinput><command>export CVSROOT=/home/cvsroot &amp;&amp;
+cd <replaceable>[sourcedir]</replaceable> &amp;&amp;
+cvs import -m <replaceable>["repository test"] [cvstest] [vendortag] [releasetag]</replaceable></command></userinput></screen></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>3. Verify local repository access.</title>
@@ -57 +57 @@
 
 <screen><userinput><command>(grep anonymous /etc/passwd || useradd anonymous -s /bin/false) &amp;&amp;
-echo anonymous: &gt; /cvsroot/CVSROOT/passwd &amp;&amp;
-echo anonymous &gt; /cvsroot/CVSROOT/readers</command></userinput></screen>
+echo anonymous: &gt; /home/cvsroot/CVSROOT/passwd &amp;&amp;
+echo anonymous &gt; /home/cvsroot/CVSROOT/readers</command></userinput></screen>
 
 <para>If you use <command>inetd</command>, the following command will add the 
@@ -64 +64 @@
 
 <screen><userinput><command>echo "2401  stream  tcp  nowait  root  /usr/bin/cvs cvs -f \
-        --allow-root=/cvsroot pserver" &gt;&gt; /etc/inetd.conf</command></userinput></screen>
+        --allow-root=/home/cvsroot pserver" &gt;&gt; /etc/inetd.conf</command></userinput></screen>
 
 <para>Issue a <command>killall -HUP inetd</command> to reread the changed
@@ -82 +82 @@
           passenv     = PATH
           server      = /usr/bin/cvs
-         server_args = -f --allow-root=/cvsroot pserver
+         server_args = -f --allow-root=/home/cvsroot pserver
      }
 <command>EOF</command></userinput></screen>
@@ -91 +91 @@
 on another machine that can reach the <acronym>CVS</acronym> server via 
 network.  No account on the <acronym>CVS</acronym> repository is needed.  To 
-test anonymous access to the <acronym>CVS</acronym> repository log in to 
+test anonymous access to the <acronym>CVS</acronym> repository, log in to 
 another machine as an unprivileged user and execute the following command:
 </para>
 
-<screen><userinput><command>cvs -d:pserver:anonymous@<replaceable>[servername]</replaceable>:/cvsroot co cvstest</command></userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput><command>cvs -d:pserver:anonymous@<replaceable>[servername]</replaceable>:/home/cvsroot co cvstest</command></userinput></screen>
 <note><para>Replace <replaceable>[servername]</replaceable> with the <acronym>IP</acronym> address or 
 hostname of the <acronym>CVS</acronym> server</para></note>