Changeset 6ae4193

Timestamp:

03/06/2008 07:05:45 PM (16 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

10ca4fa

Parents:

61d5269

Message:

Fixed minor typos

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@7204 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

postlfs

Files:

• editors/vim.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• shells/zsh.xml (modified) (1 diff)

postlfs/editors/vim.xml

@@ -87 +87 @@
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Optional</bridgehead>
-    <para role="optional"><xref linkend="gtk2"/> OR
-    <xref linkend="lesstif"/> OR
+    <para role="optional"><xref linkend="gtk2"/> or
+    <xref linkend="lesstif"/> or
     <xref linkend="GTK"/>,
     <xref linkend="python"/>,
     <xref linkend="tcl"/>,
-    <xref linkend="ruby"/>,
-    <xref linkend="gpm"/> and
+    <xref linkend="ruby"/>, and
+    <xref linkend="gpm"/></para>
+    <!-- mentioned below as a runtime dependency
     <xref linkend="rsync"/> (to update the runtime files) 
-    </para>
+    -->
 
     <para condition="html" role="usernotes">User Notes:
@@ -157 +158 @@
 <screen role="root"><userinput>ln -snfv ../vim/vim71/doc /usr/share/doc/vim-&vim-version;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>If you wish to update the runtime files issue the
-    following command (requires <application>rsync</application>):</para>
+    <para>If you wish to update the runtime files, issue the
+    following command (requires <xref linkend="rsync"/>):</para>
       
-<screen><userinput>
-rsync -avzcP --delete --exclude="/dos/" --exclude="/spell/" ftp.nluug.nl::Vim/runtime/ ./runtime/
-</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput>rsync -avzcP --delete --exclude="/dos/" --exclude="/spell/" ftp.nluug.nl::Vim/runtime/ ./runtime/</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
 
-<screen role="root"><userinput>make -C src installruntime
-</userinput></screen>
+<screen role="root"><userinput>make -C src installruntime</userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>

postlfs/shells/zsh.xml

@@ -42 +42 @@
       release.  The BLFS staff has determined that it provides a stable
       program which works properly with multibyte locales (e.g., UTF-8).
-      To find the current stable release refer to the
+      To find the current stable release, refer to the
       <ulink url="http://www.zsh.org/">ZSH home page</ulink> and compile
       <application>ZSH</application> with the same instructions.</para>