Changeset 70b65ddf


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Timestamp:
05/31/2004 10:41:23 PM (17 years ago)
Author:
Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>
Branches:
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Parents:
83ea068
Message:

Grammar updates

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@2246 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

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general/sysutils
Files:
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  • general/sysutils/cpio/cpio-exp.xml

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    22<title>Command explanations</title>
    33
    4 <para><parameter>--libexec=/tmp/cpio</parameter>: This command installs
    5 <command>rmt</command> to <filename class="directory">/tmp/cpio</filename> so that
    6 it can be removed. The <command>rmt</command> executable is already installed by
    7 <application>tar</application> package in <acronym>LFS</acronym>.</para>
     4<para><parameter>--libexec=/tmp/cpio</parameter>: This command installs the
     5<command>rmt</command> to <filename class="directory">/tmp/cpio</filename> so
     6that it can be removed. The <command>rmt</command> executable is already
     7installed by <application>tar</application> package in
     8<acronym>LFS</acronym>.</para>
    89
    910<para><parameter>--bindir=/bin</parameter>: This command installs
    10 <command>cpio</command> to <filename class="directory">/bin</filename> instead of
    11 <filename class="directory">/usr/bin</filename> as per <acronym>FHS</acronym> guidelines.</para>
     11<command>cpio</command> to <filename class="directory">/bin</filename> instead
     12of <filename class="directory">/usr/bin</filename> as per
     13<acronym>FHS</acronym> guidelines.</para>
    1214
    1315</sect2>
  • general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-config.xml

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    1717
    1818<para><command>fcron</command> scripts are written using <command>fcrontab</command>.
    19 Refer to the man page for fcrontab for proper parameters for your
    20 situation.</para>
     19Refer to the fcrontab man page for proper parameters to address your situation.</para>
    2120
    22 <para>Install <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/fcron</filename>
     21<para>Install ithe <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/fcron</filename>
    2322init script from the <xref linkend="intro-important-bootscripts"/> package.</para>
    2423                                                                                                               
  • general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-exp.xml

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    22<title>Command explanations</title>
    33
    4 <para><option>--without-sendmail</option>: <application>Fcron</application>
    5 does not require an <acronym>MTA</acronym> to run but will use one, if it is
    6 installed, to email you the results of the <command>fcron</command> script. If
    7 you wish to utilize this feature change the switch to
    8 <parameter>--with-sendmail=<replaceable>[path to your MTA]</replaceable>
    9 </parameter>.</para>
     4<para><option>--without-sendmail</option>: <application>Fcron</application>
     5will use an iinstalled <acronym>MTA</acronym> to email you the results of the
     6<command>fcron</command> script. If you wish to utilize this feature, change
     7the switch to <parameter>--with-sendmail=<replaceable>[path to your
     8MTA]</replaceable> </parameter>.</para>
    109
    1110<para><parameter>--with-answer-all=no</parameter>: After the files are
    12 installed, the make install script enters into a configuration routine.
    13 The first test will be whether to install a boot script in the <filename
    14 class="directory">/etc/rc.d/init.d</filename> directory with the
    15 appropriate symbolic links in run levels 2, 3, 4, and 5. The second is to
    16 stop any current fcron processes and start a new one. Since this is
    17 probably your first install and we want a boot script based upon the
    18 <acronym>BLFS</acronym> template we answer 'n' to both tests.</para>
     11installed, the <command>make install</command> script enters into a
     12configuration routine.  The first test will be whether to install a boot script
     13in the <filename class="directory">/etc/rc.d/init.d</filename> directory with
     14the appropriate symbolic links in run levels 2, 3, 4, and 5. The second is to
     15stop any current fcron processes and start a new one. Since this is probably
     16your first install and we want a boot script based upon the
     17<acronym>BLFS</acronym> template, we answer 'n' to both tests.</para>
    1918
    2019<para><parameter>--with-dsssl-dir=/usr/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl-stylesheets-&docbook-dsssl-version;
    2120</parameter>: This switch can be added if you have installed
    22 <application>OpenJade</application> and
    23 dsssl-stylesheets to generate the documentation from the DocBook source
    24 files.</para>
     21<application>OpenJade</application> and dsssl-stylesheets to generate the
     22documentation from the DocBook source files.</para>
    2523
    2624</sect2>
  • general/sysutils/pkgconfig/pkgconfig-intro.xml

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    33
    44<para>The <application>pkgconfig</application> package contains
    5 tools for passing the include path and/or library path to the compiler during
    6 the make script.</para>
     5tools for passing the include path and/or library paths to build tools during
     6the make file execution.</para>
    77
    88<sect3><title>Package information</title>
  • general/sysutils/which.xml

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    33<title>which-&which-version; and alternatives</title>
    44
    5 <para>The presence / absence of the which program in the main <acronym>LFS
     5<para>The presence or absence of the which program in the main <acronym>LFS
    66</acronym> book is probably one of the most contentious issues we have on the
    7 mailing lists.  It has resulted in at least one flame war in the recent past.
     7mailing lists.  It has resulted in at least one flame war in the past.
    88To hopefully put an end to this once and for all, we here present two of
    99the options for equipping your system with "which". The question of which "which"
     
    2626chmod 755 /usr/bin/which
    2727chown root:root /usr/bin/which</command></userinput></screen>
    28 <para>This should generally work OK and is probably the easiest solution
    29 for boxes which don't need a good user environment to work in.</para>
     28<para>This should work OK and is probably the easiest solution
     29for most cases, but is not the most comprehensive implementation.</para>
    3030</sect2>
    3131
  • general/sysutils/zip/zip-desc.xml

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    2222<sect3><title>zipnote</title>
    2323<para><command>zipnote</command> reads or writes comments stored in a
    24 <filename>ZIP</filename> file .</para></sect3>
     24<filename>ZIP</filename> file.</para></sect3>
    2525
    2626<sect3><title>zipsplit</title>
  • general/sysutils/zip/zip-exp.xml

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    77<filename>Makefile</filename>
    88and builds the executables for a linux system.  The alternatives to
    9 'generic_gcc' can be seen with a 'make list' command.</para>
     9'generic_gcc' can be seen with a <command>make list</command> command.</para>
    1010
    1111</sect2>
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