Index: general/sysutils/cpio/cpio-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- general/sysutils/cpio/cpio-exp.xml	(revision 83ea068c62f127f8473980bbc1c53f57a49b5974)
+++ general/sysutils/cpio/cpio-exp.xml	(revision 70b65ddffb75ed8d719396594c7fd1f676a110a6)
@@ -2,12 +2,14 @@
 <title>Command explanations</title>
 
-<para><parameter>--libexec=/tmp/cpio</parameter>: This command installs
-<command>rmt</command> to <filename class="directory">/tmp/cpio</filename> so that
-it can be removed. The <command>rmt</command> executable is already installed by
-<application>tar</application> package in <acronym>LFS</acronym>.</para>
+<para><parameter>--libexec=/tmp/cpio</parameter>: This command installs the
+<command>rmt</command> to <filename class="directory">/tmp/cpio</filename> so
+that it can be removed. The <command>rmt</command> executable is already
+installed by <application>tar</application> package in
+<acronym>LFS</acronym>.</para>
 
 <para><parameter>--bindir=/bin</parameter>: This command installs
-<command>cpio</command> to <filename class="directory">/bin</filename> instead of
-<filename class="directory">/usr/bin</filename> as per <acronym>FHS</acronym> guidelines.</para>
+<command>cpio</command> to <filename class="directory">/bin</filename> instead
+of <filename class="directory">/usr/bin</filename> as per
+<acronym>FHS</acronym> guidelines.</para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-config.xml
===================================================================
--- general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-config.xml	(revision 83ea068c62f127f8473980bbc1c53f57a49b5974)
+++ general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-config.xml	(revision 70b65ddffb75ed8d719396594c7fd1f676a110a6)
@@ -17,8 +17,7 @@
 
 <para><command>fcron</command> scripts are written using <command>fcrontab</command>.
-Refer to the man page for fcrontab for proper parameters for your 
-situation.</para>
+Refer to the fcrontab man page for proper parameters to address your situation.</para>
 
-<para>Install <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/fcron</filename>
+<para>Install ithe <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/fcron</filename>
 init script from the <xref linkend="intro-important-bootscripts"/> package.</para>
                                                                                                                 
Index: general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-exp.xml	(revision 83ea068c62f127f8473980bbc1c53f57a49b5974)
+++ general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-exp.xml	(revision 70b65ddffb75ed8d719396594c7fd1f676a110a6)
@@ -2,25 +2,23 @@
 <title>Command explanations</title>
 
-<para><option>--without-sendmail</option>: <application>Fcron</application> 
-does not require an <acronym>MTA</acronym> to run but will use one, if it is 
-installed, to email you the results of the <command>fcron</command> script. If 
-you wish to utilize this feature change the switch to 
-<parameter>--with-sendmail=<replaceable>[path to your MTA]</replaceable>
-</parameter>.</para>
+<para><option>--without-sendmail</option>: <application>Fcron</application>
+will use an iinstalled <acronym>MTA</acronym> to email you the results of the
+<command>fcron</command> script. If you wish to utilize this feature, change
+the switch to <parameter>--with-sendmail=<replaceable>[path to your
+MTA]</replaceable> </parameter>.</para>
 
 <para><parameter>--with-answer-all=no</parameter>: After the files are
-installed, the make install script enters into a configuration routine.
-The first test will be whether to install a boot script in the <filename
-class="directory">/etc/rc.d/init.d</filename> directory with the 
-appropriate symbolic links in run levels 2, 3, 4, and 5. The second is to 
-stop any current fcron processes and start a new one. Since this is
-probably your first install and we want a boot script based upon the
-<acronym>BLFS</acronym> template we answer 'n' to both tests.</para>
+installed, the <command>make install</command> script enters into a
+configuration routine.  The first test will be whether to install a boot script
+in the <filename class="directory">/etc/rc.d/init.d</filename> directory with
+the appropriate symbolic links in run levels 2, 3, 4, and 5. The second is to
+stop any current fcron processes and start a new one. Since this is probably
+your first install and we want a boot script based upon the
+<acronym>BLFS</acronym> template, we answer 'n' to both tests.</para>
 
 <para><parameter>--with-dsssl-dir=/usr/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl-stylesheets-&docbook-dsssl-version;
 </parameter>: This switch can be added if you have installed
-<application>OpenJade</application> and
-dsssl-stylesheets to generate the documentation from the DocBook source
-files.</para>
+<application>OpenJade</application> and dsssl-stylesheets to generate the
+documentation from the DocBook source files.</para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: general/sysutils/pkgconfig/pkgconfig-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- general/sysutils/pkgconfig/pkgconfig-intro.xml	(revision 83ea068c62f127f8473980bbc1c53f57a49b5974)
+++ general/sysutils/pkgconfig/pkgconfig-intro.xml	(revision 70b65ddffb75ed8d719396594c7fd1f676a110a6)
@@ -3,6 +3,6 @@
 
 <para>The <application>pkgconfig</application> package contains
-tools for passing the include path and/or library path to the compiler during 
-the make script.</para>
+tools for passing the include path and/or library paths to build tools during 
+the make file execution.</para>
 
 <sect3><title>Package information</title>
Index: general/sysutils/which.xml
===================================================================
--- general/sysutils/which.xml	(revision 83ea068c62f127f8473980bbc1c53f57a49b5974)
+++ general/sysutils/which.xml	(revision 70b65ddffb75ed8d719396594c7fd1f676a110a6)
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 <title>which-&which-version; and alternatives</title>
 
-<para>The presence / absence of the which program in the main <acronym>LFS
+<para>The presence or absence of the which program in the main <acronym>LFS
 </acronym> book is probably one of the most contentious issues we have on the 
-mailing lists.  It has resulted in at least one flame war in the recent past.
+mailing lists.  It has resulted in at least one flame war in the past.
 To hopefully put an end to this once and for all, we here present two of
 the options for equipping your system with "which". The question of which "which"
@@ -26,6 +26,6 @@
 chmod 755 /usr/bin/which
 chown root:root /usr/bin/which</command></userinput></screen>
-<para>This should generally work OK and is probably the easiest solution
-for boxes which don't need a good user environment to work in.</para>
+<para>This should work OK and is probably the easiest solution
+for most cases, but is not the most comprehensive implementation.</para>
 </sect2>
 
Index: general/sysutils/zip/zip-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- general/sysutils/zip/zip-desc.xml	(revision 83ea068c62f127f8473980bbc1c53f57a49b5974)
+++ general/sysutils/zip/zip-desc.xml	(revision 70b65ddffb75ed8d719396594c7fd1f676a110a6)
@@ -22,5 +22,5 @@
 <sect3><title>zipnote</title>
 <para><command>zipnote</command> reads or writes comments stored in a
-<filename>ZIP</filename> file .</para></sect3>
+<filename>ZIP</filename> file.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>zipsplit</title>
Index: general/sysutils/zip/zip-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- general/sysutils/zip/zip-exp.xml	(revision 83ea068c62f127f8473980bbc1c53f57a49b5974)
+++ general/sysutils/zip/zip-exp.xml	(revision 70b65ddffb75ed8d719396594c7fd1f676a110a6)
@@ -7,5 +7,5 @@
 <filename>Makefile</filename>
 and builds the executables for a linux system.  The alternatives to
-'generic_gcc' can be seen with a 'make list' command.</para>
+'generic_gcc' can be seen with a <command>make list</command> command.</para>
 
 </sect2>
