Index: kde/add/kdeartwork/kdeartwork-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- kde/add/kdeartwork/kdeartwork-desc.xml	(revision 0990cf7a8443759dce8cb55482c34284d2cb579e)
+++ kde/add/kdeartwork/kdeartwork-desc.xml	(revision 714882cbe1dd0f20257849bcf2b400234f8bb1f3)
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
 
 <para><application>kdeartwork</application> package contains additional
-themes, screensaver, sounds, wallpapers and widget styles for
+themes, screensavers, sounds, backgrounds, and widget styles for
 <acronym>KDE</acronym>.</para>
 
Index: kde/add/kdeedu/kdeedu-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- kde/add/kdeedu/kdeedu-desc.xml	(revision 0990cf7a8443759dce8cb55482c34284d2cb579e)
+++ kde/add/kdeedu/kdeedu-desc.xml	(revision 714882cbe1dd0f20257849bcf2b400234f8bb1f3)
@@ -74,5 +74,5 @@
 <sect3><title>kverbos</title>
 <para><command>kverbos</command> is an application specially
-designed to study Spanish verbforms.</para></sect3>
+designed to study Spanish verb forms.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>kvoctrain</title>
Index: kde/add/kdemultimedia/kdemultimedia-config.xml
===================================================================
--- kde/add/kdemultimedia/kdemultimedia-config.xml	(revision 0990cf7a8443759dce8cb55482c34284d2cb579e)
+++ kde/add/kdemultimedia/kdemultimedia-config.xml	(revision 714882cbe1dd0f20257849bcf2b400234f8bb1f3)
@@ -9,6 +9,5 @@
 
 <screen><userinput><command>cd /dev &amp;&amp;
-ln -s <replaceable>[CD Drive]</replaceable>
-/dev/cdrom</command></userinput></screen>
+ln -s <replaceable>[CD Drive]</replaceable> /dev/cdrom</command></userinput></screen>
 
 </para>
Index: kde/add/kdenetwork/kdenetwork-config.xml
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--- kde/add/kdenetwork/kdenetwork-config.xml	(revision 0990cf7a8443759dce8cb55482c34284d2cb579e)
+++ kde/add/kdenetwork/kdenetwork-config.xml	(revision 714882cbe1dd0f20257849bcf2b400234f8bb1f3)
@@ -2,5 +2,5 @@
 <title>Configuring kdenetwork</title>
 
-<para>Install <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/lisa</filename> init script
+<para>Install the <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/lisa</filename> init script
 included in the <xref linkend="intro-important-bootscripts"/>
 package.</para>
Index: kde/add/kdenetwork/kdenetwork-desc.xml
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--- kde/add/kdenetwork/kdenetwork-desc.xml	(revision 0990cf7a8443759dce8cb55482c34284d2cb579e)
+++ kde/add/kdenetwork/kdenetwork-desc.xml	(revision 714882cbe1dd0f20257849bcf2b400234f8bb1f3)
@@ -60,5 +60,5 @@
 <sect3><title>ktalkd</title>
 <para><command>ktalkd</command> is an enhanced <command>talk</command>
-daemon - a program to handle incoming <command>talk</command> requests,
+daemon&mdash;a program to handle incoming <command>talk</command> requests,
 announce them and allow you to respond to them using a talk
 client.</para></sect3>
Index: kde/add/kdepim/kdepim-desc.xml
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--- kde/add/kdepim/kdepim-desc.xml	(revision 0990cf7a8443759dce8cb55482c34284d2cb579e)
+++ kde/add/kdepim/kdepim-desc.xml	(revision 714882cbe1dd0f20257849bcf2b400234f8bb1f3)
@@ -32,5 +32,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>kandy</title>
-<para><command>kandy</command>is a program to synchronize mobile phone
+<para><command>kandy</command> is a program to synchronize mobile phone
 numbers.</para></sect3>
 
Index: kde/add/kdesdk/kdesdk-inst.xml
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--- kde/add/kdesdk/kdesdk-inst.xml	(revision 0990cf7a8443759dce8cb55482c34284d2cb579e)
+++ kde/add/kdesdk/kdesdk-inst.xml	(revision 714882cbe1dd0f20257849bcf2b400234f8bb1f3)
@@ -9,5 +9,5 @@
 <para>
 The <command>make</command> command will error out two times. On the
-first occurrence enter the following sed command and continue with the
+first occurrence, enter the following sed command and continue with the
 compilation:
 </para>
Index: kde/add/kdeutils/kdeutils-desc.xml
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--- kde/add/kdeutils/kdeutils-desc.xml	(revision 0990cf7a8443759dce8cb55482c34284d2cb579e)
+++ kde/add/kdeutils/kdeutils-desc.xml	(revision 714882cbe1dd0f20257849bcf2b400234f8bb1f3)
@@ -29,5 +29,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>irkick</title>
-<para><command>irkick</command> is the infrastructure for the
+<para><command>irkick</command> is the infrastructure for 
 <acronym>KDE</acronym>'s Infrared Remote Control functionality;
 <command>irkick</command> is the server component of that
Index: kde/add/quanta/quanta-desc.xml
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--- kde/add/quanta/quanta-desc.xml	(revision 0990cf7a8443759dce8cb55482c34284d2cb579e)
+++ kde/add/quanta/quanta-desc.xml	(revision 714882cbe1dd0f20257849bcf2b400234f8bb1f3)
@@ -17,5 +17,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>quanta</title>
-<para><command>quanta</command> is a Web <acronym>IDE</acronym> that
+<para><command>quanta</command> is a web development tool that
 strives to be neutral and transparent to all markup languages, while
 supporting popular web-based scripting languages,
