Changeset 714882c for xsoft

Timestamp:

06/04/2004 03:55:54 AM (20 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, v5_1, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

88714208

Parents:

fdb8f2c9

Message:

Grammar

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@2262 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

xsoft

Files:

• office/office.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• suites/openoffice/openoffice-exp.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• suites/openoffice/openoffice-inst.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• suites/openoffice/openoffice-intro.xml (modified) (1 diff)

xsoft/office/office.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 <title>Individual Office Programs</title>
 
-<para>This chapter is a collection of independant projects that can be
-installed based on specific needs.  Together, they create a respectible
+<para>This chapter is a collection of independent projects that can be
+installed based on specific needs.  Together, they create a respectable
 office suite. While they may be lacking in user interface consistency,
 they excel in doing one thing and doing it well.</para>

xsoft/suites/openoffice/openoffice-exp.xml

@@ -25 +25 @@
 
 <para><command>sed -i "s:^oo_home=...</command>: Remove version specific
-installation directory</para>
+installation directory.</para>
 
 <para><command>for appl in swriter scalc sdraw simpress smath soffice;

xsoft/suites/openoffice/openoffice-inst.xml

@@ -11 +11 @@
 <para>If you want to optimize the build, edit
 <filename>solenv/inc/unxlngi4.mk</filename> and add the desired optimization
-flags to <envar>CFLAGSOPT</envar> variable. Some users have reported problems with
+flags to the <envar>CFLAGSOPT</envar> variable. Some users have reported problems with
 -fomit-frame-pointer. The best option is to not use any custom optimizations.
 The following command removes an incorrect -mcpu option in the above file.</para>
@@ -23 +23 @@
 in the language of your choice, the default will be English.
 The following option
-compiles all available languages. BTW, if you restrict the languages, be sure to
-add ENUS to the list, without it the build fails. Also, the build fails when
+compiles all available languages. If you restrict the languages, be sure to
+add ENUS to the list; otherwise the build fails. Also, the build fails when
 the environment variable <envar>LANG</envar> is
-set, unset it before compiling.</para>
+set. Unset it before compiling.</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>cd config_office/ &amp;&amp;
@@ -57 +57 @@
 bash -c "source LinuxIntelEnv.Set.sh ; dmake"</command></userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Install <application>OpenOffice</application> using the following 
-commands. The following commands install the English language set. To install a localized version, replace the
-01 by the international telephone country code for your country. Note that when
-installing, it needs a <application>X</application> Display, even though there 
-is no visible <application>X</application> window. You
-can use <application>Xvfb</application> if you are compiling on a console.</para>
+<para>Install <application>OpenOffice</application> using the following
+commands to install the English language set. To install a localized version,
+replace the 01 with the international telephone country code for your country.
+Note that when installing, <application>OpenOffice</application> needs an
+<application>X</application> display, even though there is no visible
+<application>X</application> window. You can use
+<application>Xvfb</application> if you are compiling on a console.</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>cd instsetoo/unxlngi4.pro/01/normal &amp;&amp;

xsoft/suites/openoffice/openoffice-intro.xml

@@ -2 +2 @@
 <title>Introduction to <application>OpenOffice</application></title>
 
-<para>The <application>OpenOffice</application> is a office suite, the 
+<para>The <application>OpenOffice</application> is an office suite, the 
 Open Source sibling of <application>StarOffice</application>.</para>