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Timestamp:
09/21/2003 04:44:58 PM (21 years ago)
Author:
Larry Lawrence <larry@…>
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  • introduction/welcome/credits.xml

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    1 <sect1 id="intro-welcome-credits">
     1<sect1 id="intro-welcome-credits" xreflabel="Credits">
    22<?dbhtml filename="credits.html" dir="introduction"?>
    33<title>Credits</title>
    … …  
    3030<itemizedlist>
    3131
    32 <listitem><para>Chapter 01.  Based on the LFS introductory text by <emphasis>
    33 Gerard Beekmans</emphasis>, modified by <emphasis>Mark Hymers</emphasis>
    34 for <acronym>BLFS</acronym>.</para></listitem>
     32<listitem><para>Chapter 01.  Based on the <acronym>LFS</acronym> introductory
     33text by <emphasis> Gerard Beekmans</emphasis>, modified by <emphasis>
     34Mark Hymers</emphasis> for <acronym>BLFS</acronym>.</para></listitem>
    3535
    3636<listitem><para>Chapter 02: The /usr versus /usr/local debate: <emphasis>Andrew
    3737McMurry</emphasis>.</para></listitem>
    3838
    39 <listitem><para>Chapter 02: Going beyond BLFS: <emphasis>Tushar Teredesai
    40 </emphasis>.</para></listitem>
     39<listitem><para>Chapter 02: Going beyond <acronym>BLFS</acronym>: <emphasis>
     40Tushar Teredesai</emphasis>.</para></listitem>
    4141
    4242<listitem><para>Chapter 03: /etc/inputrc: <emphasis>Chris Lynn</emphasis>.
    … …  
    5959Peres</emphasis>.</para></listitem>
    6060
    61 <listitem><para>Chapter 04: <!--<xref linkend="ch06-firewall"/>-->Firewalling:
    62 <emphasis>Henning Rohde with thanks to Jeff Bauman</emphasis>.</para></listitem>
     61<listitem><para>Chapter 04: Firewalling: <emphasis>Henning Rohde with thanks to
     62Jeff Bauman</emphasis>.</para></listitem>
    6363
    6464<listitem><para>Chapter 11: Which <emphasis>Mark Hymers</emphasis> with
    … …  
    191191<listitem><para><emphasis>Scot Mc Pherson</emphasis> for writing the
    192192gnome-1.4.txt hint from which was gathered useful information and for
    193 warning us that Gnome Version 2.0 may not be ready to put in the book.</para>
     193warning us that GNOME Version 2.0 may not be ready to put in the book.</para>
    194194</listitem>
    195195
    … …  
    202202
    203203<listitem><para><emphasis>DJ Lucas</emphasis> for contributing to dhcpcd
    204 patch and many contributions while dhcp section was being developed.</para>
    205 </listitem>
     204patch and many contributions while <acronym>DHCP</acronym> section was being
     205developed.</para></listitem>
    206206
    207207<listitem><para><emphasis>Billy O'Connor</emphasis> for building GNOME
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