Changeset 802f7211 for postlfs/filesystems

Timestamp:

10/26/2012 06:42:37 AM (11 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

6fcb1b9

Parents:

321434c

Message:

Text updates to RAID page

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@10791 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• postlfs/filesystems/aboutraid.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

postlfs/filesystems/aboutraid.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
   down the system.</para>
 
-  <para>The types of RAID organization are descrbed in the <ulink
-  url="https://raid.wiki.kernel.org/articles/i/n/t/Introduction.html#The_RAID_levels">
+  <para>The types of RAID organization are described in the <ulink
+  url="https://raid.wiki.kernel.org/index.php/Overview#The_RAID_levels">
   RAID Wiki</ulink>.</para>
 
@@ -44 +44 @@
     generally supplied via a PCI card, although there are some 
     instances of RAID components integrated in to the motherboard.
-    Hardware RAID may also be available ina sthand-alone enclosure.</para>
+    Hardware RAID may also be available in a stand-alone enclosure.</para>
 
-    <para>One advantage of hardware based RAID is that the drives
+    <para>One advantage of hardware-based RAID is that the drives
     are offered to the operating system as a logical drive and no
     operating system dependent configuration is needed.</para>
@@ -166 +166 @@
    <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> ifile can use the devices created for mounting at
    boot time and the linux command line in
-   <filename>/boot/grub/grub.conf</filename> can specify
+   <filename>/boot/grub/grub.cfg</filename> can specify
    <option>root=/dev/md1</option>.</para>
 
    <note><para>The swap devices should be specified in the <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>
-   file as normal.  The kernel normally stripes swap data accross multiple swap 
+   file as normal.  The kernel normally stripes swap data across multiple swap 
    files and should not be made part of a RAID array.</para></note>
 
@@ -178 +178 @@
    <para>Additional details for monitoring RAID arrays and dealing with
    problems can be found at the <ulink
-   url="https://raid.wiki.kernel.org/index.html">Linux RAID
+   url="https://raid.wiki.kernel.org/index.php/Linux_Raid">Linux RAID
    Wiki</ulink>.</para>