Index: template/template.xml
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--- template/template.xml	(revision 8f1699f25995a53acd36f4187f67af6347533ed6)
+++ template/template.xml	(revision 8bf11809043050c79aa21eb28ee0f506b7a575a9)
@@ -97,5 +97,8 @@
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
     <para role="required">
-      <xref linkend="BLFS DEPENDENCY"/>
+      <xref linkend="BLFS DEPENDENCY"/> <!-- notice no period as this is not a sentence
+      If there are more than two, they must be separated by commas with the last
+      member having "and" in front of it. The use of a serial comma is preferred
+      (a comma after the next to last member before the "and"). -->
     </para>
 
@@ -104,5 +107,5 @@
     <para role="recommended">
       <ulink url="http://www.some.url/">EXTERNAL DEPENDENCY</ulink> and
-      <xref linkend="BLFS DEPENDENCY"/>.
+      <xref linkend="BLFS DEPENDENCY"/> <!-- notice no period as this is not a sentence-->
     </para>
 
@@ -110,5 +113,6 @@
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Optional</bridgehead>
     <para role="optional">
-      <ulink url="http://www.some.url/">EXTERNAL DEPENDENCY</ulink>.
+      <ulink url="http://www.some.url/">EXTERNAL DEPENDENCY</ulink>
+      <!-- notice no period as this is not a sentence-->
     </para>
 
@@ -192,11 +196,13 @@
 
     <para>
-      <parameter>--SWITCH=PARAMETER</parameter>: This parameter does something
-      mandatory for BLFS purposes.
+      <parameter>--PARAMETER</parameter>: This parameter does something
+      mandatory for BLFS purposes. It will be in the instructions above. It is
+      not optional and is why it is listed as a parameter and not an option.
     </para>
 
     <para>
       <option>--OPTION</option>: This option does something optionally per the
-      user's desires.
+      user's desires. It is not listed in the instructions above, but instead,
+      is listed here because many (some) readers may want to include it.
     </para>
   </sect2>
@@ -206,5 +212,6 @@
 
     <para>
-      Stuff about how to use TEMPLATE to do something.
+      Stuff about how to use TEMPLATE to do something. This section is rarely
+      used.
     </para>
   </sect2>
@@ -218,5 +225,5 @@
       <para>
         <filename>~/.Configfilename1</filename> and
-        <filename>/etc/path/Configfilename2</filename>.
+        <filename>/etc/path/Configfilename2</filename> <!-- notice no period as this is not a sentence-->
       </para>
 
@@ -262,5 +269,6 @@
         system is rebooted, install the
         <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/TEMPLATE</filename> bootscript from the
-        <xref linkend="bootscripts"/> package.
+        <xref linkend="bootscripts"/> package as the
+        <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:
       </para>
 
@@ -282,4 +290,12 @@
       <segtitle>Installed Director(y,ies)</segtitle>
 
+      <!-- If there were no programs, libraries, or directories created, then
+           we would list the section as "None". However, a decision must have
+           been made to change the "None" to just removing the whole section
+           because I've noticed that many packages have had the "None"
+           removed and the section completely removed as well. The reasoning
+           was that by putting "None", it appears as we know there are none.
+           Without anything it appears as we are not sure. -->
+           
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>
@@ -311,5 +327,5 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            does this .....
+            does this ..... (end the sentence with a period).
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="TEMPLATE PROGRAM1">
@@ -323,5 +339,5 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            does this .....
+            does this ..... (end the sentence with a period).
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="TEMPLATE PROGRAM2">
@@ -335,5 +351,5 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            contains functions that .....
+            contains functions that ..... (end the sentence with a period).
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="TEMPLATE libLIBRARY1">
