Index: basicnet/mailnews/other.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/mailnews/other.xml	(revision b731204a0d81fb1e7aa9c0f3ffef5d192bc8be63)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/other.xml	(revision 8d82b1773391c61e7d25d3087bc047b84c2fef77)
@@ -15,6 +15,7 @@
 
 <para><xref linkend="mozilla"/> includes both a mail client and newsreader in 
-its installation along with notes for installing <application>Mozilla
-Thunderbird</application>, a mail/news client based on the
+its installation.</para>
+
+<para><xref linkend="thunderbird"/> is a mail/news client based on the
 <application>Mozilla</application> code base.</para>
 
Index: basicnet/netprogs/ncpfs/ncpfs-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netprogs/ncpfs/ncpfs-desc.xml	(revision b731204a0d81fb1e7aa9c0f3ffef5d192bc8be63)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/ncpfs/ncpfs-desc.xml	(revision 8d82b1773391c61e7d25d3087bc047b84c2fef77)
@@ -4,20 +4,32 @@
 <itemizedlist>
 
-<listitem><para><emphasis>Client Utilities:</emphasis> <filename> 
-ncpmount, ncpumount, nprint, nsend, nwpasswd, nwsfind, pqlist, pqrm, 
-pqstat, and slist</filename>.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para><emphasis>Client Utilities:</emphasis> <command> 
+ncpmount</command>, <command>ncpumountt</command>,
+<command>nprintt</command>, <command>nsendt</command>,
+<command>nwpasswdt</command>, <command>nwsfindt</command>,
+<command>pqlistt</command>, <command>pqrmt</command>, <command> 
+pqstatt</command> and <command>slist</command>.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><emphasis>Server Admin Utilities:</emphasis> 
-<filename> ncopy, nwbocreate, nwbols, nwboprops, nwborm, nwbpadd, 
-nwbpcreate, nwbprm, nwbpset, nwbpvalues, nwdir, nwdpvalues, nwfsctrl, 
-nwfsinfo, nwfstime, nwgrant, nwpurge, nwrevoke, nwrights, nwtrustee, 
-nwtrustee2, nwuserlist, amd nwvolinfo</filename>.</para></listitem>
+<command>ncopyt</command>, <command>nwbocreatet</command>,
+<command>nwbolst</command>, <command>nwbopropst</command>,
+<command>nwbormt</command>, <command>nwbpaddt</command>,
+<command>nwbpcreatet</command>, <command>nwbprmt</command>,
+<command>nwbpsett</command>, <command>nwbpvaluest</command>,
+<command>nwdirt</command>, <command>nwdpvaluest</command>,
+<command>nwfsctrlt</command>, <command>nwfsinfot</command>,
+<command>nwfstimet</command>, <command>nwgrantt</command>,
+<command>nwpurget</command>, <command>nwrevoket</command>,
+<command>nwrightst</command>, <command>nwtrusteet</command>,
+<command>nwtrustee2t</command>, <command>nwuserlistt</command>,
+ and <command>nwvolinfo</command>.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><emphasis><acronym>IPX</acronym> Interface Utilities:</emphasis> 
-<filename> ipx_cmd, ipx_configure, ipx_interface, ipx_internal_net, 
-and ipx_route</filename>.</para></listitem>
+<command>ipx_cmdt</command>, <command>ipx_configuret</command>,
+<command>ipx_interfacet</command>, <command>ipx_internal_nett</command>
+and <command>ipx_route</command>.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><emphasis>Other Utilities:</emphasis> 
-<filename> ncpmap and nwauth</filename>.</para></listitem>
+<command>ncpmap</command> and <command>nwauth</command>.</para></listitem>
 
 </itemizedlist>
Index: basicnet/netprogs/nfs-utils/nfs-utils-desc.xml
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--- basicnet/netprogs/nfs-utils/nfs-utils-desc.xml	(revision b731204a0d81fb1e7aa9c0f3ffef5d192bc8be63)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/nfs-utils/nfs-utils-desc.xml	(revision 8d82b1773391c61e7d25d3087bc047b84c2fef77)
@@ -23,37 +23,30 @@
 <sect2><title>Description</title>
 
-<sect3><title>getiversion</title><para><command>getiversion</command>
-tbd</para></sect3>
-<sect3><title>getkversion</title><para><command>getkversion</command>
-tbd</para></sect3>
-<sect3><title>locktest</title><para><command>locktest</command>
-tbd</para></sect3>
-<sect3><title>nlmtest</title><para><command>nlmtest</command>
-tbd</para></sect3>
-<sect3><title>rpcdebug</title><para><command>rpcdebug</command>
-tbd</para></sect3>
-<sect3><title>rpcgen</title><para><command>rpcgen</command>
-tbd</para></sect3>
+<sect3><title>getiversion</title><para>No description available.</para></sect3>
+<sect3><title>getkversion</title><para>No description available.</para></sect3>
+<sect3><title>locktest</title><para>No description available.</para></sect3>
+<sect3><title>nlmtest</title><para>No description available.</para></sect3>
+<sect3><title>rpcdebug</title><para>No description available.</para></sect3>
+<sect3><title>rpcgen</title><para>No description available.</para></sect3>
 <sect3><title>exportfs</title><para><command>exportfs</command>
-Maintains a list of NFS exported directories. 
-Works together with the kernel.</para></sect3>
+maintains a list of <acronym>NFS</acronym> exported directories.</para></sect3>
 <sect3><title>lockd</title><para><command>lockd</command>
-The nfs lock manager</para></sect3>
+is the <acronym>NFS</acronym> lock manager.</para></sect3>
 <sect3><title>mountd</title><para><command>mountd</command>
-The nfs mount daemon. Checks client-permissions.</para></sect3>
+is the <acronym>NFS</acronym> mount daemon which checks client-permissions.</para></sect3>
 <sect3><title>nfsd</title><para><command>nfsd</command>
-The user-level part of the NFS service. Main part of the work
-is done by the kernel.</para></sect3>
+is the user-space daemon of the <acronym>NFS</acronym> service.</para></sect3>
 <sect3><title>nfsstat</title><para><command>nfsstat</command>
-Print NFS statistics.</para></sect3>
+prints <acronym>NFS</acronym> statistics.</para></sect3>
 <sect3><title>nhfsstone</title><para><command>nhfsstone</command>
-NFS benchmark program</para></sect3>
+is the <acronym>NFS</acronym> benchmark program.</para></sect3>
 <sect3><title>rquotad</title><para><command>rquotad</command>
-The remote quota server. Works together with <command>quota(1)</command>
-</para></sect3>
+is the remote quota server communicating with the
+<command>quota</command> client.</para></sect3>
 <sect3><title>showmount</title><para><command>showmount</command>
-Shows mount information for an NFS server.</para></sect3>
+shows mount information for an <acronym>NFS</acronym> server.</para></sect3>
 <sect3><title>statd</title><para><command>statd</command>
-The NFS status monitor. Implements the NSM (Network Status Monitor) RPC protocol.
+is the <acronym>NFS</acronym> status monitor which implements the
+<acronym>NSM</acronym> (Network Status Monitor) <acronym>RPC</acronym> protocol.
 </para></sect3>
 
Index: basicnet/netprogs/rsync-client.xml
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--- basicnet/netprogs/rsync-client.xml	(revision b731204a0d81fb1e7aa9c0f3ffef5d192bc8be63)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/rsync-client.xml	(revision 8d82b1773391c61e7d25d3087bc047b84c2fef77)
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
 
 <para>rsync is a utility for fast incremental file transfers. If you want to
-install it, the instructions can be found in Chapter 23 -
+install it, the instructions can be found in Chapter 22 -
 <xref linkend="rsync"/>.  Note that if you only want to use the client, you do
 <emphasis>not</emphasis> need to run the server and so do not need the startup
Index: introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
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--- introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	(revision b731204a0d81fb1e7aa9c0f3ffef5d192bc8be63)
+++ introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	(revision 8d82b1773391c61e7d25d3087bc047b84c2fef77)
@@ -11,4 +11,7 @@
 
 <itemizedlist>
+
+<listitem><para>May 18th, 2004 [larry]: Editorial review, chapters 16,
+17, 18, 19 and 20.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>May 18th, 2004 [larry]: updated to
