Changeset 96ee548 for multimedia/libdriv/alsa/driver/alsa-driver-inst.xml

Timestamp:

06/04/2004 02:47:01 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, v5_1, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

df98db6

Parents:

e55ba64

Message:

Yet more grammar

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@2265 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• multimedia/libdriv/alsa/driver/alsa-driver-inst.xml (modified) (1 diff)

multimedia/libdriv/alsa/driver/alsa-driver-inst.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 
 <para>Before installing the <application><acronym>ALSA</acronym></application> 
-drivers note that in your 
+drivers, note that in your 
 kernel configuration you should have <userinput>Sound Card Support
 (CONFIG_SOUND)</userinput> enabled but <emphasis>nothing</emphasis> else in
-the Sound menu (with the possible exception of TV Card Mixer support.  In
-particular you should <emphasis>not</emphasis> have <userinput>OSS Sound
+the Sound menu (with the possible exception of TV Card Mixer support.)  In
+particular, you should <emphasis>not</emphasis> have <userinput>OSS Sound
 Modules</userinput> enabled as this will cause problems when loading the
 <application><acronym>ALSA</acronym></application> driver modules.</para>
 
 <note><para>Because <application><acronym>ALSA</acronym></application> drivers 
-are kernel modules, they must be compiled with the same compiler the kernel has
-used.</para></note>
+are kernel modules, they must be compiled with the same compiler used to 
+compile the kernel.</para></note>
 
 <para>Install <application><acronym>ALSA</acronym> Driver</application> using 
-the following commands as a template:</para>
+the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>CC=/opt/gcc-2.95.3/bin/gcc ./configure \