Changeset 96ee548 for multimedia/libdriv/alsa/utils/alsa-utils-config.xml

Timestamp:

06/04/2004 02:47:01 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, v5_1, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

df98db6

Parents:

e55ba64

Message:

Yet more grammar

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@2265 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• multimedia/libdriv/alsa/utils/alsa-utils-config.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

multimedia/libdriv/alsa/utils/alsa-utils-config.xml

@@ -19 +19 @@
 installs a script as <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/alsasound</filename>.  While it 
 is possible to use this script, it contains a lot of extraneous detail which 
-isn't needed on an <acronym>LFS</acronym> system and so we install the init
+isn't needed on an <acronym>LFS</acronym> system. Instead, install the init
 script <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/alsa</filename> included in the 
 <xref linkend="intro-important-bootscripts"/> package.</para>
@@ -25 +25 @@
 <screen><userinput><command>make install-alsa</command></userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Note that all channels of your soundcard are muted by default. You can
+<para>Note that all channels of your sound card are muted by default. You can
 use the <command>alsamixer</command> program from
 <application><acronym>ALSA</acronym> Utilities</application> (or any other
 <acronym>OSS</acronym> mixer) to change this.</para>
 
-<para>Also, the first time the above script is run, it will complain that
+<para>The first time the above script is run, it will complain that
 there is no state in <filename>/etc/asound.state</filename>.  You can
 prevent this by running the following commands after installing
@@ -43 +43 @@
 users.  It is designed for loading "sound-fonts" (which are used for
 <acronym>MIDI</acronym> output).  You may wish to delete these lines and add 
-your own or, if you have the relevant soundcard, install <filename>sfxload
+your own or, if you have the relevant sound card, install <filename>sfxload
 </filename> and uncomment them.</para>