Changeset 98078a6

Timestamp:

10/16/2007 11:56:37 AM (16 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/inkscape-core-mods, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/python-mods, qt5new, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

c3c4467

Parents:

d59bdd1b

Message:

Fixed numerous typos, ommisions and corrections by applying patches provided by Chris Staub - Thanks, Chris

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@7114 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Files:

• book/organization.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• general/genlib/libgsf.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• general/sysutils/pciutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• gnome/add/gnome-audio.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• gnome/add/gnome-media.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• gnome/add/libgnomeprint.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• introduction/important/beyond.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• introduction/welcome/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• introduction/welcome/credits.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• kde/add/kdeutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• kde/core/kdebase.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• kde/core/kdelibs.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• postlfs/editors/vim.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• postlfs/shells/zsh.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• x/installing/x-config.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• x/installing/x7server.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• xsoft/office/gnucash.xml (modified) (1 diff)

book/organization.xml

@@ -67 +67 @@
   <para><application>GNOME</application> is the main alternative to
   <application>KDE</application> in the Desktop Environment arena and
-  we cover both <application>GNOME</application>-1.4
-  and <application>GNOME</application>-&gnome-version; here.</para>
+  we cover <application>GNOME</application>-&gnome-version; here.</para>
 
   <bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part X - X Software</bridgehead>

general/genlib/libgsf.xml

@@ -126 +126 @@
 
       <seglistitem>
-        <seg>gsf-office-thumbnailer (optional)</seg>
+        <seg>gsf, gsf-office-thumbnailer (optional), and gsf-vba-dump</seg>
         <seg>libgsf-1.{so,a} and optionally, libgsf-gnome-1.{so,a}</seg>
         <seg>/usr/include/libgsf-1 and /usr/share/gtk-doc/html/gsf</seg>

general/sysutils/pciutils.xml

@@ -92 +92 @@
     update-pciids.sh</command>: This command suppresses some unneeded screen
     output from the <command>update-pciids</command> command if you don't have
-    either <application>Lynx</application> or <application>Wget</application>
-    installed by redirecting the stderr output of the embedded
-    <command>which</command> command to <filename>/dev/null</filename>.</para>
+    either <application>Lynx</application>, <application>Wget</application>,
+    or <application>Curl</application> installed by redirecting the stderr
+    output of the embedded <command>which</command> command to
+    <filename>/dev/null</filename>.</para>
 
   </sect2>

gnome/add/gnome-audio.xml

@@ -33 +33 @@
     of default sounds for the <application>GNOME</application> GUI desktop.
     Sound files for startup, shutdown and many GTK+ events are included.
-    These sounds compliment the <application>GNOME Media</application>
+    These sounds complement the <application>GNOME Media</application>
     package.</para>
 

gnome/add/gnome-media.xml

@@ -58 +58 @@
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
-    <para role="required"><xref linkend="perl-xml-parser"/>,
-    <xref linkend="scrollkeeper"/>,
+    <para role="required"><xref linkend="scrollkeeper"/>,
     <xref linkend="esound"/>, and
     <xref linkend="libgnomeui"/></para>

gnome/add/libgnomeprint.xml

@@ -59 +59 @@
     <para role="required"><xref linkend="pango"/>,
     <xref linkend="libart_lgpl"/>,
-    <xref linkend="fontconfig"/>,
     <xref linkend="popt"/>,
     <xref linkend="libxml2"/>, and

introduction/important/beyond.xml

@@ -114 +114 @@
       <para>If you are having a problem compiling the package, try
       searching the LFS archives at
-      <ulink url="http://search.&lfs-domainname;/"/> for the error or if
+      <ulink url="http://www.&lfs-domainname;/search.html"/> for the error or if
       that fails, try searching Google. If everything else fails,
       try the blfs-support mailing-list.</para>

introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml

@@ -65 +65 @@
     <listitem>
       <para><ulink url="mailto:highos@&lfs-domainname;">Jesse
-      Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> &lt;higho &lt;at&gt; @&lfs-domainname;&gt; for
+      Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> &lt;higho &lt;at&gt; &lfs-domainname;&gt; for
       answering many questions on IRC, having a great deal of patience and for
       not killing the former editor for the joke in the original BLFS

introduction/welcome/changelog.xml

@@ -46 +46 @@
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[name] - Updated the Evince instructions to reflect the
+          <para>[randy] - Fixed numerous typos, ommisions and corrections
+          by applying patches provided by Chris Staub. Thanks, Chris.</para>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[randy] - Updated the Evince instructions to reflect the
           GNOME-2.18.3 update.</para>
         </listitem>

introduction/welcome/credits.xml

@@ -141 +141 @@
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Chapters 28 and 29: KDE:
+        <para>Chapters 28, 29, and 30: KDE:
         <emphasis>Bruce Dubbs</emphasis>.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Chapters 30, 31, and 32: GNOME:
+        <para>Chapters 31 and 32: GNOME:
         <emphasis>Larry Lawrence</emphasis>.</para>
       </listitem>

kde/add/kdeutils.xml

@@ -103 +103 @@
 
       <seglistitem>
-        <seg>ark, irkick, kcalc, kcharselect, kdf, kedit, kfloppy,
-        kgpg, khexedit, kjots, kregexpeditor, ktimer, kwalletmanager,
-        and superkaramba</seg>
+        <seg>ark, irkick, kcalc, kcharselect, kdessh, kdf, kedit, kfloppy,
+        kgpg, khexedit, kjots, klaptop_acpi_helper, klaptop_check,
+        kregexpeditor, ktimer, kwalletmanager, kwikdisk, and superkaramba</seg>
         <seg>Several kdeutils specific libraries</seg>
         <seg>Several subdirectories in $KDE_PREFIX/share</seg>

kde/core/kdebase.xml

@@ -170 +170 @@
         <seg>appletproxy, drkonqi, extensionproxy, genkdmconf, kaccess,
         kappfinder, kapplymousetheme, kasbar, kate, kblankscrn.kss,
-        kbookmarkmerger, kcheckpass, kcheckrunning, kcminit, kcontrol,
-        kcontroledit, kdcop, kdebugdialog, kdeeject, kdeinstallktheme,
+        kbookmarkmerger, kcheckpass, kcheckrunning, kcminit, kcminit_startup,
+        kcontrol, kcontroledit, kdcop, kdebugdialog, kdeeject, kdeinstallktheme,
         kdepasswd, kdeprintfax, kdesktop, kdesktop_lock, kdesu, kdesud, kdialog,
         kdm, kdm_config, kdm_greet, kdmctl, keditbookmarks, keditfiletype,
         kfind, kfmclient, kfontinst, kfontview, khc_docbookdig.pl, khc_htdig.pl,
         khc_htsearch.pl, khc_indexbuilder, khc_mansearch.pl, khelpcenter,
-        khotkeys, kicker, kinfocenter, kio_media_mounthelper,
+        khotkeys, kicker, kinfocenter (link to kcontrol), kio_media_mounthelper,
         kio_system_documenthelper, kjobviewer, klipper,
         klocaldomainurifilterhelper, kmenuedit, knetattach, kompmgr, konqueror,

kde/core/kdelibs.xml

@@ -206 +206 @@
         ktradertest, kunittestmodrunner, kwrapper, lnusertemp,
         make_driver_db_cups, make_driver_db_lpr, makekdewidgets, meinproc,
-        and preparetips</seg>
+        preparetips, and start_kdeinit</seg>
         <seg>Numerous <application>KDE</application> libraries and helper
         modules</seg>

postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml

@@ -22 +22 @@
     device.  As the name <emphasis>rescue</emphasis> implies, the host
     system has a problem, often lost partition information or corrupted file
-    systems, that prevent it from booting and/or operating normally.  For
+    systems, that prevents it from booting and/or operating normally.  For
     this reason, you <emphasis>must not</emphasis> depend on resources from
     the host being "rescued".  To presume that any given partition or hard

postlfs/editors/vim.xml

@@ -207 +207 @@
 
       <para><application>Vim-7.0</application> introduced an
-      integrated spell checker that doesn't requires additional libraries to be
+      integrated spell checker that doesn't require additional libraries to be
       installed.  To enable the spell checker you can set the following in
       one of the configuration files: </para>
@@ -225 +225 @@
       them to <filename class="directory"> ~/.vim/spell </filename> or in
       <filename class="directory">
-      /usr/share/vim/vim70/spell/</filename>.</para>
+      /usr/share/vim/vim71/spell/</filename>.</para>
 
       <para>For more information about the spell checker and some other
@@ -249 +249 @@
     descriptions can be found in the <ulink
     url="&lfs-root;/chapter06/vim.html#contents-vim">LFS Vim Installation
-    Instrutions</ulink></para>
+    Instructions</ulink></para>
 
     <segmentedlist>

postlfs/shells/zsh.xml

@@ -94 +94 @@
     <title>Installation of ZSH</title>
 
-    <para>If you downloaded the optional documentation, unpack it the same
-    way you would the source tarball. The documentation will unpack into
-    the <filename class='directory'>Doc</filename> directory of the source
-    tree.</para>
+    <para>If you downloaded the optional documentation, unpack it with
+    the following command:</para>
+
+<screen><userinput>tar --strip-components=1 -xvf ../zsh-&zsh-version;-doc.tar.bz2</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Install <application>ZSH</application> by running the following

x/installing/x-config.xml

@@ -97 +97 @@
       The default <option>HorizSync</option> setting is 28-33kHz which is very
       conservative.  The default  <option>VertRefresh</option> is 43-72Hz.
-      Consult your monitor documentation or search on line for the proper
+      Consult your monitor documentation or search online for the proper
       settings for your monitor.</para>
 
@@ -118 +118 @@
       Control Center.</para>
 
-      <para>A typical monitor sections will normally look like:</para>
+      <para>A typical monitor section will normally look like:</para>
 
 <screen><literal>Section "Monitor"

x/installing/x7server.xml

@@ -91 +91 @@
 
     <para>A <ulink url='http://wiki.x.org/wiki/Development/Security'>security
-    vulnerability</ulink> have been identified in the xorg-server
+    vulnerability</ulink> has been identified in the xorg-server
     package. Apply a patch to fix this vulnerability with the following
     command:</para>

xsoft/office/gnucash.xml

@@ -77 +77 @@
     <para role="required"><xref linkend="guile"/>,
     <xref linkend="slib"/>,
-    <xref linkend="libgnomeui"/>,
     <xref linkend="goffice"/>, and
     <xref linkend="gtkhtml"/></para>