Changeset 9d6565bf for postlfs

Timestamp:

05/10/2021 01:52:29 AM (3 years ago)

Author:

Douglas R. Reno <renodr@…>

Branches:

11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, lazarus, lxqt, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

f2c59545

Parents:

fefc5d54

Message:

Qemu: Minor text tweaks.

File:

• postlfs/virtualization/qemu.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

postlfs/virtualization/qemu.xml

@@ -343 +343 @@
 
     <para>
-      The virtual disk size and filename should be ajusted as desired. The
+      The virtual disk size and filename should be adjusted as desired. The
       actual size of the file will be less than specified, but will expand as
       needed, so it is safe to put a high value.
@@ -512 +512 @@
     <bridgehead renderas="sect3">Networking</bridgehead>
     <para>
-      The above solution for networking allows the guest to access the local
+      The below solution for networking allows the guest to access the local
       network through the host (and possibly to access internet through the
       local routers), but the converse is not true. Not even the host can
@@ -665 +665 @@
           <para>
             is a diagnostic and manipulation program for (virtual) memory
-            media.  It is still at an early stage of development
+            media. It is still at an early stage of development
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="qemu qemu-io">
@@ -702 +702 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            creates a socket pair or a named socket. QEMU and proxy helper
-            communicate using this socket. QEMU proxy fs driver sends
-            filesystem request to proxy helper and receives the response
+            creates a socket pair or a named socket. QEMU and the proxy helper
+            communicate using this socket. The QEMU proxy fs driver sends
+            filesystem requests to the proxy helper and receives the response
             from it
           </para>