Index: connect/connect.xml
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--- connect/connect.xml (revision 36f9a236ceb00ea274d7b1c11fa78b40886ff57e)
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The LFS book covers setting up networking
-with a static IP. There are however, other methods which
-are used to connect to networks and importantly the internet. We cover the
-most popular methods in this chapter.
+by connecting to a LAN with a static
+IP. There are other methods used to connect to
+LAN's and other networks (such as the internet). We cover
+the most popular methods in this chapter.
&connect-dialup;