Changeset aa15d3e for introduction/welcome/askhelp.xml

Timestamp:

05/29/2004 08:25:12 AM (20 years ago)

Author:

Igor Živković <igor@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, v5_1, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

3b7081ba

Parents:

bb0d842b

Message:

applied Randy's grammar and spelling fixes

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@2232 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• introduction/welcome/askhelp.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

introduction/welcome/askhelp.xml

@@ -20 +20 @@
 <itemizedlist>
 <listitem><para>Is the hardware support compiled into the kernel or
-available as a module to the kernel.  If it is a module, is it configured
-properly in <filename>modules.conf</filename> and has it been loaded.  You
+available as a module to the kernel?  If it is a module, is it configured
+properly in <filename>modules.conf</filename> and has it been loaded?  You
 should use <command>lsmod</command> as root to see if it's loaded. Check the
 <filename>sys.log</filename> or run <command>modprobe &lt;driver&gt;
@@ -28 +28 @@
 
 <listitem><para>Are your permissions properly set, especially for
-devices. <acronym>LFS</acronym> uses groups to make these settings easier, but 
+devices? <acronym>LFS</acronym> uses groups to make these settings easier, but 
 it also adds the step of adding users to groups to allow access. A simple
 <command>moduser -G audio &lt;user&gt;</command> may be all that's necessary 
 for that user to have access to the sound system.  Any question that starts 
-out with "It works as root, but not as ..." should review permissions
-thoroughly
-prior to asking.</para></listitem>
+out with "It works as root, but not as ..." requires a thorough review
+of permissions prior to asking.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><acronym>BLFS</acronym> liberally uses <filename>
@@ -40 +39 @@
 need to expand your environment variables for each package placed there (e.g.
 PATH=$PATH:/opt/kde/bin).  In some cases, the package will walk you
-through the changes, but some will not.  <xref linkend="intro-important-beyond"/> 
-is available to help you check.</para></listitem>
+through the changes, but some will not.  The section called "<ulink
+url="beyond.html">Going Beyond BLFS</ulink>" is available to help you check.</para></listitem>
 </itemizedlist></sect2>