Changeset af2b317 for introduction

Timestamp:

06/22/2024 03:39:23 AM (4 weeks ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

gimp3, trunk

Children:

89b9739

Parents:

f911e63

git-author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…> (06/22/2024 03:23:50 AM)

git-committer:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…> (06/22/2024 03:39:23 AM)

Message:

Punctuation/comma vs. quote clean up

We've done this several times but there are still remaining cases.

Location:

introduction

Files:

• important/building-notes.xml (modified) (5 diffs)
• welcome/conventions.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

introduction/important/building-notes.xml

@@ -429 +429 @@
       When the <command>nproc</command> or <command>ninja</command> command
       runs in a cgroup, it will use the number of logical cores assigned to
-      the cgroup as the <quote>system logical core count</quote>.  For
+      the cgroup as the <quote>system logical core count.</quote>  For
       example, in a cgroup with logical cores 0-3 assigned,
       <command>nproc</command> will print
@@ -588 +588 @@
     could be used in instances when otherwise you would have to page through
     the output of a file (such as a license agreement) and then answer the
-    question of <quote>do you accept the above?</quote>. For this example,
+    question of <computeroutput>do you accept the above?</computeroutput>.
+    For this example,
     another short <application>Bash</application> script is required:</para>
 
@@ -641 +642 @@
         cannot be correctly built without the dependency having first been
         installed, except if the dependency is said to be
-        <quote>runtime</quote>, which means the target package can be built but
+        <quote>runtime</quote> which means the target package can be built but
         cannot function without it.</para>
         <para>
@@ -660 +661 @@
         <para><emphasis>Recommended</emphasis> means that BLFS strongly
         suggests this package is installed first (except if said to be
-        <quote>runtime</quote>, see below) for a clean and trouble-free
+        <quote>runtime,</quote> see below) for a clean and trouble-free
         build, that won't have issues either during the build process, or at
         run-time.  The instructions in the book assume these packages are
         installed.  Some changes or workarounds may be required if these
         packages are not installed. If a recommended dependency is said
-        to be <quote>runtime</quote>, it means that BLFS strongly suggests
+        to be <quote>runtime,</quote> it means that BLFS strongly suggests
         that this dependency is installed before using the package, for
         getting full functionality.</para>
@@ -678 +679 @@
         them when the target package is built.  Such additional options are
         often documented in the BLFS book.  If an optional dependency is
-        said to be <quote>runtime</quote>, it means you may install
+        said to be <quote>runtime,</quote> it means you may install
         the dependency after installing the target package to support some
         optional features of the target package if you need these

introduction/welcome/conventions.xml

@@ -110 +110 @@
     dependencies of these required packages, are omitted from this list.
     Always remember to check for nested dependencies. If a dependency is
-    said to be <quote>runtime</quote>, then it is not needed for building
+    said to be <quote>runtime,</quote> it is not needed for building
     the package, but only to use it after installation.</para>
 
@@ -117 +117 @@
     <para>These are dependencies the BLFS editors have determined
     are important to give the package reasonable capabilities.  If a
-    recommended dependency is not said to be <quote>runtime</quote>, package
+    recommended dependency is not said to be <quote>runtime,</quote> package
     installation instructions assume it is installed.  If it
     is not installed, the instructions may require modification, to