Changeset af373d35 for general/sysutils

Timestamp:

03/03/2013 05:01:06 PM (11 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

66b86c90

Parents:

d3970e1

Message:

Minor cleanup and tweaks to various packages

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@11051 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• general/sysutils/lm_sensors.xml (modified) (13 diffs)

general/sysutils/lm_sensors.xml

@@ -30 +30 @@
 
   <sect2 role="package">
-    <title>Introduction to Lm Sensors</title>
-
-    <para>
-      The <application>Lm Sensors</application> package provides user-space
+    <title>Introduction to lm_sensors</title>
+
+    <para>
+      The <application>lm_sensors</application> package provides user-space
       support for the hardware monitoring drivers in the Linux kernel.
       This is useful for monitoring the temperature of the CPU and adjusting the
@@ -75 +75 @@
     </itemizedlist>
 
-    <bridgehead renderas="sect3">Lm Sensors Dependencies</bridgehead>
+    <bridgehead renderas="sect3">lm_sensors Dependencies</bridgehead>
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
@@ -84 +84 @@
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Optional</bridgehead>
     <para role="optional">
-      <ulink url="http://oss.oetiker.ch/rrdtool/">RRDtool</ulink>
+      <ulink url="http://oss.oetiker.ch/rrdtool/">RRDtool (required to build the
+      <command>sensord</command> program)</ulink>
     </para>
 
@@ -134 +135 @@
 
   <sect2 role="installation">
-    <title>Installation of Lm Sensors</title>
-
-    <para>
-      Install <application>Lm Sensors</application> by running the following
+    <title>Installation of lm_sensors</title>
+
+    <para>
+      Install <application>lm_sensors</application> by running the following
       commands:
     </para>
 
-<screen><userinput>make PREFIX=/usr BUILD_STATIC_LIB=0 \
+<screen><userinput>make PREFIX=/usr        \
+     BUILD_STATIC_LIB=0 \
      MANDIR=/usr/share/man</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -152 +154 @@
     </para>
 
-<screen role="root"><userinput>make PREFIX=/usr BUILD_STATIC_LIB=0 \
+<screen role="root"><userinput>make PREFIX=/usr        \
+     BUILD_STATIC_LIB=0 \
      MANDIR=/usr/share/man install &amp;&amp;
-mkdir -pv /usr/share/doc/lm_sensors-&lm_sensors-version; &amp;&amp;
-cp -rfv doc/* /usr/share/doc/lm_sensors-&lm_sensors-version;</userinput></screen>
+install -v -m755 -d /usr/share/doc/lm_sensors-&lm_sensors-version; &amp;&amp;
+cp -rv              README INSTALL doc/* \
+                    /usr/share/doc/lm_sensors-&lm_sensors-version;</userinput></screen>
   </sect2>
 
@@ -163 +167 @@
     <para>
       <parameter>BUILD_STATIC_LIB=0</parameter>: This parameter disables
-      compiling and installing the static version of libsensors.
+      compiling and installing the static version of
+      <filename class="libraryfile">libsensors</filename>.
     </para>
 
     <para>
       <parameter>PROG_EXTRA=sensord</parameter>: This parameter enables
-      compiling sensord, a daemon that can monitor your system at regular
-      intervals. Compiling <command>sensord</command> requires
+      compiling <command>sensord</command>, a daemon that can monitor your
+      system at regular intervals. Compiling <command>sensord</command> requires
       <ulink url="http://oss.oetiker.ch/rrdtool/">RRDtool</ulink>. Compiling
       RRDtool 1.4.6 requires a sed: <command>sed -i '/ sv_undef/d'
@@ -197 +202 @@
 
       <para>
-        To find out what hardware sensors your system has, as the
-        <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:
+        To find out what hardware sensors your system has, issue the following
+        command as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:
       </para>
 
@@ -204 +209 @@
 
       <para>
-        Hopefully it will load the appropriate modules and give you a summary
-        at the end. Now you know what is needed you can recompile your kernel
-        and just enable the options you need (ie, don't enable the modules you
-        can't use).
+        The appropriate modules should have been loaded and a summary is
+        displayed at the end. Now you know what is needed and you can recompile
+        your kernel to enable just the options you need (i.e., don't enable the
+        modules you cannot use).
       </para>
 
@@ -224 +229 @@
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>
-          fancontrol, isadump, isaset, pwmconfig,
-          sensors, sensors-conf-convert and
-          sensors-detect
+          fancontrol, isadump, isaset, pwmconfig, sensors, sensors-conf-convert,
+          sensors-detect, and optionally, sensord
         </seg>
         <seg>
@@ -247 +251 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a shell script for use with lm_sensors. It reads its
-            configuration from a file, then calculates fan speeds from
-            temperatures and sets the corresponding PWM outputs to the computed
-            values.
+            is a shell script for use with <application>lm_sensors</application>.
+            It reads its configuration from a file<!--what file?-->, then
+            calculates fan speeds from temperatures and sets the corresponding
+            PWM outputs to the computed values.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="lm_sensors fancontrol">
@@ -315 +319 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a Perl script to convert lm-sensors version 2 configuration files
+            is a <application>Perl</application> script to convert
+            <application>lm-sensors</application> version 2 configuration files
             to work with version 3.
           </para>
@@ -328 +333 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a Perl script that will walk you through the process of scanning
-            your system for various hardware monitoring chips, or sensors,
-            supported by libsensors(3), or more generally by the lm_sensors
-            tool suite.
+            is a <application>Perl</application> script that will walk you
+            through the process of scanning your system for various hardware
+            monitoring chips (sensors) supported by
+            <filename class="libraryfile">libsensors</filename>, or more
+            generally by the <application>lm_sensors</application> tool suite.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="lm_sensors sensors-detect">
@@ -343 +349 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            contains the lm_sensors API functions.
+            contains the <application>lm_sensors</application> API functions.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="lm_sensors libsensors">