Changeset af8a78d for general/sysutils

Timestamp:

01/10/2018 10:44:47 AM (6 years ago)

Author:

Pierre Labastie <pieere@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, lazarus, lxqt, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

aa79220

Parents:

c9d977e8

Message:

Fix various typos/wordings

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@19660 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

general/sysutils

Files:

• acpid.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• hdparm.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• pm-utils.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

general/sysutils/acpid.xml

@@ -140 +140 @@
       Unfortunately, not every computer labels ACPI events in the same way. To
       determine how your buttons are recognized, use the
-      <command>acpi_listen</command> tool. Also, look in package documentation's
-      samples directory for more examples.
+      <command>acpi_listen</command> tool. Also, look in the <filename
+      class="directory">samples</filename> directory under <filename
+      class="directory">/usr/share/doc/acpid-&acpid-version;</filename>
+      for more examples.
     </para>
 

general/sysutils/hdparm.xml

@@ -32 +32 @@
     <para>
       The <application>Hdparm</application> package contains a utility that
-      is useful for controlling ATA/IDE controllers and hard drives both to
+      is useful for obtaining information about, and controlling ATA/IDE
+      controllers and hard drives. It allows to
       increase performance and sometimes to increase stability.
     </para>

general/sysutils/pm-utils.xml

@@ -31 +31 @@
 
     <para>
-      The <application>Power Management Utilities</application> is a small
-      collection of scripts to suspend and hibernate a computer that can be used
-      to run user supplied scripts on suspend and resume.
+      The <application>Power Management Utilities</application> provide
+      simple shell command line tools to suspend and hibernate the computer.
+      They can be used to run user supplied scripts on suspend and resume.
     </para>
 
@@ -191 +191 @@
       In order to use hibernation with <application>GRUB</application> and a
       swap partition, you need to add kernel parameter
-      <literal>resume=<replaceable>swap_partition</replaceable></literal> (i.e.
+      <literal>resume=<replaceable>swap_partition</replaceable></literal> (e.g.
       <literal>resume=/dev/sda1</literal>) to the kernel line in the
       <filename>/boot/grub/grub.cfg</filename> configuration file.