Index: connect/connect.xml
===================================================================
--- connect/connect.xml	(revision 40d6babf49216765da1f07db2494985e8615cccd)
+++ connect/connect.xml	(revision b1d305edb2aec35a6608c498dcfd8364e4dd9703)
@@ -14,6 +14,6 @@
     <para>The LFS book covers setting up networking by connecting to a LAN
     with a static IP address. There are other methods used to connect to
-    a LAN and other networks (such as the Internet).  We cover
-    the most popular methods in this chapter.</para>
+    a LAN and other networks (such as the Internet). The most popular methods
+    are covered in this chapter.</para>
   </partintro>
 
Index: connect/dhcp/dhcpcd.xml
===================================================================
--- connect/dhcp/dhcpcd.xml	(revision 40d6babf49216765da1f07db2494985e8615cccd)
+++ connect/dhcp/dhcpcd.xml	(revision b1d305edb2aec35a6608c498dcfd8364e4dd9703)
@@ -210,5 +210,5 @@
       <segtitle>Installed Program</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
@@ -241,3 +241,2 @@
 
 </sect1>
-
Index: connect/dialup/wvdial.xml
===================================================================
--- connect/dialup/wvdial.xml	(revision 40d6babf49216765da1f07db2494985e8615cccd)
+++ connect/dialup/wvdial.xml	(revision b1d305edb2aec35a6608c498dcfd8364e4dd9703)
@@ -150,5 +150,5 @@
         <term><command>wvdial</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Starts a PPP connection.</para>
+          <para>starts a PPP connection.</para>
           <indexterm zone="wvdial wvdial-prog">
             <primary sortas="b-wvdial">wvdial</primary>
@@ -173,3 +173,2 @@
 
 </sect1>
-
Index: connect/other/other.xml
===================================================================
--- connect/other/other.xml	(revision 40d6babf49216765da1f07db2494985e8615cccd)
+++ connect/other/other.xml	(revision b1d305edb2aec35a6608c498dcfd8364e4dd9703)
@@ -14,5 +14,6 @@
   and PPPoE interfaces, among others. PPPoE is discussed here.
   Pages written for ISDN (or others as the need arises) are always welcome
-  and will be included in future books, if available.</para>
+  and will be included in future books, if the information becomes
+  available.</para>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="pppoe.xml"/>
Index: connect/other/pppoe.xml
===================================================================
--- connect/other/pppoe.xml	(revision 40d6babf49216765da1f07db2494985e8615cccd)
+++ connect/other/pppoe.xml	(revision b1d305edb2aec35a6608c498dcfd8364e4dd9703)
@@ -65,5 +65,5 @@
     <xref linkend="net-tools"/> (you may omit
     <application>Net-tools</application> by using the following patch to
-    utilize <application>IPRoute2</application>: <ulink
+    utilize <application>IPRoute2</application> instead: <ulink
     url="&patch-root;/rp-pppoe-&pppoe-version;-iproute2-1.patch"/>)</para>
 
@@ -86,5 +86,6 @@
     <para>Fix the location of the logger executable in several ADSL scripts:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput>sed -i s%/usr/bin/logger%/bin/logger% scripts/adsl-{connect,setup,stop}.in</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput>sed -i s%/usr/bin/logger%/bin/logger% \
+    scripts/adsl-{connect,setup,stop}.in</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Install <application>RP-PPPoE</application> by running the following
@@ -106,9 +107,9 @@
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
 
-    <para>These are the standard installation commands that will install into
-    the <filename class="directory">/usr</filename> prefix.  You can optionally use the
-    <command>go</command> script in the root of the source tree, to
-    run the same commands, which are then immediately followed by the
-    <command>adsl-setup</command> script.</para>
+    <para>These are the standard installation commands that will install the
+    package into the <filename class="directory">/usr</filename> prefix.  You
+    can optionally use the <command>go</command> script in the root of the
+    source tree to run the same commands, which are then immediately followed
+    by the <command>adsl-setup</command> script.</para>
 
   </sect2>
