Changeset b1d305ed for connect

Timestamp:

07/27/2005 09:24:52 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

d0e741f

Parents:

40d6bab

Message:

Typo fixes and minor rewording to package and introductory text in Section IV

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@4807 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

connect

Files:

• connect.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• dhcp/dhcpcd.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• dialup/wvdial.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• other/other.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• other/pppoe.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

connect/connect.xml

@@ -14 +14 @@
     <para>The LFS book covers setting up networking by connecting to a LAN
     with a static IP address. There are other methods used to connect to
-    a LAN and other networks (such as the Internet).  We cover
-    the most popular methods in this chapter.</para>
+    a LAN and other networks (such as the Internet). The most popular methods
+    are covered in this chapter.</para>
   </partintro>
 

connect/dhcp/dhcpcd.xml

@@ -210 +210 @@
       <segtitle>Installed Program</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
@@ -241 +241 @@
 
 </sect1>
-

connect/dialup/wvdial.xml

@@ -150 +150 @@
         <term><command>wvdial</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Starts a PPP connection.</para>
+          <para>starts a PPP connection.</para>
           <indexterm zone="wvdial wvdial-prog">
             <primary sortas="b-wvdial">wvdial</primary>
@@ -173 +173 @@
 
 </sect1>
-

connect/other/other.xml

@@ -14 +14 @@
   and PPPoE interfaces, among others. PPPoE is discussed here.
   Pages written for ISDN (or others as the need arises) are always welcome
-  and will be included in future books, if available.</para>
+  and will be included in future books, if the information becomes
+  available.</para>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="pppoe.xml"/>

connect/other/pppoe.xml

@@ -65 +65 @@
     <xref linkend="net-tools"/> (you may omit
     <application>Net-tools</application> by using the following patch to
-    utilize <application>IPRoute2</application>: <ulink
+    utilize <application>IPRoute2</application> instead: <ulink
     url="&patch-root;/rp-pppoe-&pppoe-version;-iproute2-1.patch"/>)</para>
 
@@ -86 +86 @@
     <para>Fix the location of the logger executable in several ADSL scripts:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput>sed -i s%/usr/bin/logger%/bin/logger% scripts/adsl-{connect,setup,stop}.in</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput>sed -i s%/usr/bin/logger%/bin/logger% \
+    scripts/adsl-{connect,setup,stop}.in</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Install <application>RP-PPPoE</application> by running the following
@@ -106 +107 @@
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
 
-    <para>These are the standard installation commands that will install into
-    the <filename class="directory">/usr</filename> prefix.  You can optionally use the
-    <command>go</command> script in the root of the source tree, to
-    run the same commands, which are then immediately followed by the
-    <command>adsl-setup</command> script.</para>
+    <para>These are the standard installation commands that will install the
+    package into the <filename class="directory">/usr</filename> prefix.  You
+    can optionally use the <command>go</command> script in the root of the
+    source tree to run the same commands, which are then immediately followed
+    by the <command>adsl-setup</command> script.</para>
 
   </sect2>