Index: gnome/add/epiphany.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/epiphany.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/epiphany.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -42,5 +42,5 @@
 &epiphany-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
 </sect3>
-                                                                                
+
 <sect3><title><application>Epiphany</application> dependencies</title>
 <sect4><title>Required</title>
Index: gnome/add/file-roller.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/file-roller.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/file-roller.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -39,5 +39,5 @@
 <listitem><para>Download size: 
 &file-roller-size;</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>Estimated Disk space required: 
+<listitem><para>Estimated disk space required: 
 &file-roller-buildsize;</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Estimated build time: 
Index: gnome/add/gal.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/gal.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/gal.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -38,5 +38,5 @@
 <listitem><para>Download MD5 sum: &gal-md5sum;</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Download size: &gal-size;</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>Estimated Disk space required: 
+<listitem><para>Estimated disk space required: 
 &gal-buildsize;</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Estimated build time: 
Index: gnome/add/gcalctool.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/gcalctool.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/gcalctool.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -42,5 +42,5 @@
 &gcalctool-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
 </sect3>
-                                                                                
+
 <sect3><title><application>gcalctool</application> dependencies</title>
 <sect4><title>Required</title>
Index: gnome/add/gconf-editor.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/gconf-editor.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/gconf-editor.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -41,5 +41,5 @@
 &gconf-editor-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
 </sect3>
-                                                                                
+
 <sect3><title><application>GConf Editor</application> dependencies</title>
 <sect4><title>Required</title>
Index: gnome/add/gdm.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/gdm.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/gdm.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@
 <!ENTITY gdm-download-http "http://ftp.gnome.org/pub/GNOME/sources/gdm/2.6/gdm-&gdm-version;.tar.bz2">
 <!ENTITY gdm-download-ftp "ftp://ftp.gnome.org/pub/GNOME/sources/gdm/2.6/gdm-&gdm-version;.tar.bz2">
-<!ENTITY gdm-size "2.9 MB">
-<!ENTITY gdm-buildsize "54 MB">
-<!ENTITY gdm-time "0.65 SBU">
-
+<!ENTITY gdm-md5sum "8dca7cb1f28d81f60f6e07b3c24288c5">
+<!ENTITY gdm-size "3.2 MB">
+<!ENTITY gdm-buildsize "44 MB">
+<!ENTITY gdm-time "0.48 SBU">
 ]>
 
@@ -25,6 +25,6 @@
 
 <para>The <application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> package
-contains <application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application>'s Display Manager daemon. This is
-useful for allowing configurable graphical logins.</para>
+contains <application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application>'s Display Manager 
+daemon. This is useful for allowing configurable graphical logins.</para>
 
 <sect3><title>Package information</title>
@@ -34,24 +34,25 @@
 <listitem><para>Download (FTP): <ulink
 url="&gdm-download-ftp;"/></para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>Download MD5 sum: &gdm-md5sum;</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Download size: &gdm-size;</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>Estimated Disk space required:
+<listitem><para>Estimated disk space required:
 &gdm-buildsize;</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Estimated build time:
 &gdm-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
 </sect3>
-                                                                                
-<sect3><title><application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> dependencies</title>
+
+<sect3><title><application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> 
+dependencies</title>
 <sect4><title>Required</title>
-<para>
-<xref linkend="libgnomeui"/>,
-<xref linkend="scrollkeeper"/> and
-<xref linkend="librsvg"/>
-</para></sect4>
+<para><xref linkend="libgnomeui"/>, 
+<xref linkend="scrollkeeper"/> and 
+<xref linkend="librsvg"/></para>
+</sect4>
+
 <sect4><title>Optional</title>
-<para>
-<xref linkend="Linux_PAM"/>,
-<xref linkend="tcpwrappers"/> and
-<ulink url="http://www.nsa.gov/selinux/">SELinux</ulink>
-</para></sect4>
+<para><xref linkend="Linux_PAM"/>, 
+<xref linkend="tcpwrappers"/> and 
+<ulink url="http://www.nsa.gov/selinux/">SELinux</ulink></para>
+</sect4>
 </sect3>
 
@@ -61,8 +62,9 @@
 <title>Installation of <application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application></title>
 
-<para>Install <application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> by running the following commands:</para>
+<para>Install <application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> by running 
+the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>groupadd gdm &amp;&amp;
-useradd -c gdm -d /dev/null -g gdm -s /bin/bash gdm &amp;&amp;
+useradd -c "GDM Daemon Owner" -d /dev/null -g gdm -s /bin/bash gdm &amp;&amp;
 ./configure --prefix=`pkg-config --variable=prefix ORBit-2.0` \
     --libexecdir=`pkg-config --variable=prefix ORBit-2.0`/sbin \
@@ -77,15 +79,15 @@
 <title>Command explanations</title>
 
-<para><parameter>--sysconfdir=/etc/gnome</parameter>: This command puts
-configuration files in <filename class="directory">/etc/gnome</filename> instead of
-<filename class="directory">/opt/gnome2/etc</filename>.</para>
-
-<para><parameter>--localstatedir=/var/lib</parameter>: This command
-puts files in <filename class="directory">/var/lib</filename> instead of
-<filename class="directory">/opt/gnome2/var</filename>.</para>
-
-<para><parameter>--with-pam-prefix=/etc</parameter>: This command puts
-<application><acronym>PAM</acronym></application>
-configuration files in <filename class="directory">/etc/pam.d</filename> instead of
+<para><parameter>--sysconfdir=/etc/gnome</parameter>: This command puts 
+configuration files in <filename class="directory">/etc/gnome</filename> 
+instead of <filename class="directory">$GNOME_PREFIX/etc</filename>.</para>
+
+<para><parameter>--localstatedir=/var/lib</parameter>: This command 
+puts files in <filename class="directory">/var/lib</filename> instead of 
+<filename class="directory">$GNOME_PREFIX/var</filename>.</para>
+
+<para><parameter>--with-pam-prefix=/etc</parameter>: This command puts 
+<application><acronym>PAM</acronym></application> configuration files in 
+<filename class="directory">/etc/pam.d</filename> instead of 
 <filename class="directory">/etc/gnome</filename>.</para>
 
@@ -96,5 +98,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>Config files</title>
-<para><filename>gdm.conf</filename></para>
+<para><filename>/etc/gnome/gdm/gdm.conf</filename></para>
 </sect3>
 
@@ -104,4 +106,5 @@
 config files contain modules not present in a <acronym>BLFS</acronym>
 installation.  The following commands will replace those files:</para>
+
 <screen><userinput><command>cat &gt; /etc/pam.d/gdm &lt;&lt; "EOF"</command>
 auth        required    pam_unix.so
@@ -122,6 +125,7 @@
 <para><command>gdm</command> can be tested by executing it from a root console.</para>
 
-<para>To start a graphical login at boot, install the <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/gdm</filename>
-init script included in the <xref linkend="intro-important-bootscripts"/> package.</para>
+<para>To start a graphical login at boot, install the 
+<filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/gdm</filename> init script included in the 
+<xref linkend="intro-important-bootscripts"/> package.</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>make install-gdm</command></userinput></screen>
@@ -129,6 +133,9 @@
 <para>To autostart with a graphical login, edit
 <filename>/etc/inittab</filename> so that the line containing:</para>
+
 <screen>id:3:initdefault:</screen>
+
 <para>is changed to:</para>
+
 <screen>id:5:initdefault:</screen>
 
@@ -140,5 +147,5 @@
 <title>Contents</title>
 
-<para>The <application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> package contains
+<para>The <application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> package contains 
 <command>gdm</command>,
 <command>gdm-binary</command>,
@@ -166,5 +173,6 @@
 <para><command>gdm</command> is a wrapper script to execute the
 <application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> binary, the configurable
-<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> based login prompt.</para></sect3>
+<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> based login 
+prompt.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>gdmchooser</title>
@@ -175,5 +183,5 @@
 <sect3><title>gdmsetup</title>
 <para><command>gdmsetup</command> is a graphical interface to edit the
-<filename>gdm.conf</filename>.</para></sect3>
+<filename>gdm.conf</filename> file.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>gdm-restart and gdm-safe-restart</title>
@@ -181,11 +189,12 @@
 signal and <command>gdm-safe-restart</command> sends the
 <acronym>USR</acronym>1 signal to the
-<application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application>daemon so that it restarts. They are used after the
-config file is edited.</para></sect3>
+<application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application>daemon so that it restarts. 
+They are used after the config file is edited.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>gdmconfig</title>
-<para><command>gdmconfig</command> is an application for managing the configuration of the
-entire <application>GDM</application> applications suite.  It handles look and feel, security,
-<acronym>XDMCP</acronym>, GDMchooser and more.</para></sect3>
+<para><command>gdmconfig</command> is an application for managing the 
+configuration of the entire <application>GDM</application> applications 
+suite.  It handles look and feel, security, <acronym>XDMCP</acronym>, 
+GDMchooser and more.</para></sect3>
 
 </sect2>
Index: gnome/add/gedit.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/gedit.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/gedit.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -41,5 +41,5 @@
 &gedit-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
 </sect3>
-                                                                                
+
 <sect3><title><application>gedit</application> dependencies</title>
 <sect4><title>Required</title>
Index: gnome/add/ggv.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/ggv.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/ggv.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -35,5 +35,5 @@
 <listitem><para>Download MD5 sum: &ggv-md5sum;</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Download size: &ggv-size;</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>Estimated Disk space required: 
+<listitem><para>Estimated disk space required: 
 &ggv-buildsize;</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Estimated build time: 
Index: gnome/add/gnome-speech.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/gnome-speech.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/gnome-speech.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -41,10 +41,10 @@
 url="&gnome-speech-download-ftp;"/></para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Download size: &gnome-speech-size;</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>Estimated Disk space required:
+<listitem><para>Estimated disk space required:
 &gnome-speech-buildsize;</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Estimated build time:
 &gnome-speech-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
 </sect3>
-                                                                                
+
 <sect3><title><application><acronym>GNOME</acronym> Speech</application> 
 dependencies</title>
Index: gnome/add/gnome-system-monitor.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/gnome-system-monitor.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/gnome-system-monitor.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -45,5 +45,5 @@
 &gnome-system-monitor-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
 </sect3>
-                                                                                
+
 <sect3><title><application><acronym>GNOME</acronym> System 
 Monitor</application> dependencies</title>
Index: gnome/add/gpdf.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/gpdf.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/gpdf.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -42,5 +42,5 @@
 &gpdf-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
 </sect3>
-                                                                                
+
 <sect3><title><application>GPdf</application> dependencies</title>
 <sect4><title>Required</title>
Index: gnome/add/gucharmap.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/gucharmap.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/gucharmap.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -40,5 +40,5 @@
 <listitem><para>Download MD5 sum: &gucharmap-md5sum;</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Download size: &gucharmap-size;</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>Estimated Disk space required:
+<listitem><para>Estimated disk space required:
 &gucharmap-buildsize;</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Estimated build time:
Index: gnome/add/libgnomeprintui.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/libgnomeprintui.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/libgnomeprintui.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -36,5 +36,5 @@
 <listitem><para>Download MD5sum: &libgnomeprintui-md5sum;</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Download size: &libgnomeprintui-size;</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>Estimated Disk space required:
+<listitem><para>Estimated disk space required:
 &libgnomeprintui-buildsize;</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Estimated build time:
Index: gnome/add/nautilus-cd-burner.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/nautilus-cd-burner.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/nautilus-cd-burner.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -43,10 +43,10 @@
 <listitem><para>Download size: 
 &nautilus-cd-burner-size;</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>Estimated Disk space required:
+<listitem><para>Estimated disk space required:
 &nautilus-cd-burner-buildsize;</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>Estimated build time:
 &nautilus-cd-burner-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
 </sect3>
-                                                                                
+
 <sect3><title><application>Nautilus <acronym>CD</acronym> Burner</application> 
 dependencies</title>
Index: gnome/add/nautilus-media.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/nautilus-media.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/nautilus-media.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -41,5 +41,5 @@
 &nautilus-media-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
 </sect3>
-                                                                                
+
 <sect3><title><application>Nautilus Media</application> dependencies</title>
 <sect4><title>Required</title>
Index: gnome/add/zenity.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/add/zenity.xml	(revision b06ee7e594d61baecaf7a93f02bbb5a83772572e)
+++ gnome/add/zenity.xml	(revision bd0a1b0fc6fe9c195744e5a4eb346bee204fe263)
@@ -44,5 +44,5 @@
 &zenity-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
 </sect3>
-                                                                                
+
 <sect3><title><application>Zenity</application> dependencies</title>
 <sect4><title>Required</title>
