Index: appendices/old/zlib/zlib-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- appendices/old/zlib/zlib-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ appendices/old/zlib/zlib-desc.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
 
 <para>The zlib package contains the zlib library which is used by many
-programs for compression and uncompression functions.</para>
+programs for compression and decompression functions.</para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: basicnet/djb/ucspi-tcp/ucspi-tcp-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/djb/ucspi-tcp/ucspi-tcp-exp.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ basicnet/djb/ucspi-tcp/ucspi-tcp-exp.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
 mv hier.c~ hier.c</command></screen> 
 These commands change the installation directory to
-<filename>/usr/sbin</filename> from the default 
-of <filename>/usr/local/bin</filename>. Since these tools are used in 
-conjunction with daemons, 
-they don't make much sense in general user directories. However, some of the 
-example programs and the tcpclient program might be of use to non-root users. 
+<filename class="directory">/usr/sbin</filename> from the default 
+of <filename class="directory">/usr/local/bin</filename>. Since these tools 
+are used in conjunction with daemons, they don't make much sense in general 
+user directories. However, some of the example programs and the 
+<command>tcpclient</command> program might be of use to non-root users. 
 If you wish to make these available, then we would suggest installing as above, 
 and then executing the following commands: 
Index: basicnet/mailnews/other.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/mailnews/other.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ basicnet/mailnews/other.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -17,5 +17,5 @@
 its installation along with notes for installing <application>Mozilla
 Thunderbird</application>, a mail/news client based on the
-<application>Mozilla</application> codebase.</para>
+<application>Mozilla</application> code base.</para>
 
 <para><xref linkend="evolution"/> includes an <acronym>GTK</acronym>2
Index: basicnet/netprogs/ncpfs/ncpfs-config.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netprogs/ncpfs/ncpfs-config.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/ncpfs/ncpfs-config.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -36,5 +36,5 @@
 
 <para>It should be noted that the ncpmount is not intended to mount
-individual volumes because each mountpoint creates a separate client
+individual volumes because each mount point creates a separate client
 connection to the Novell server.  Mounting each individual volume
 separately would be unwise, as mounting all volumes on a server 
Index: basicnet/textweb/links/links-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/textweb/links/links-exp.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ basicnet/textweb/links/links-exp.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
 <para><option>--enable-graphics</option>: Add this switch if you want to 
 use <application>Links</application> in graphics mode. You will also need to 
-enable framebuffer support in your kernel and install <xref linkend="gpm"/> 
+enable frame buffer support in your kernel and install <xref linkend="gpm"/> 
 or install one of the supported graphics libraries.</para>
 
Index: content/web/apache/apache-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- content/web/apache/apache-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ content/web/apache/apache-desc.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -66,9 +66,9 @@
 <sect3><title>logresolve</title>
 <para><command>logresolve</command> is a post-processing program to
-resolve <acronym>IP</acronym>-addresses in <application>Apache</application>'s access logfiles.</para></sect3>
+resolve <acronym>IP</acronym>-addresses in <application>Apache</application>'s access log files.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>rotatelogs</title>
 <para><command>rotatelogs</command> is a simple program for use in
-conjunction with <application>Apache</application>'s piped logfile feature.</para></sect3>
+conjunction with <application>Apache</application>'s piped log file feature.</para></sect3>
 
 </sect2>
Index: general/graphlib/directfb/directfb-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- general/graphlib/directfb/directfb-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ general/graphlib/directfb/directfb-desc.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -39,5 +39,5 @@
 and abstraction, integrated windowing system with support for 
 translucent windows and multiple display layers on top of the Linux 
-framebuffer device.</para></sect3>
+frame buffer device.</para></sect3>
 
 </sect2>
Index: general/graphlib/directfb/directfb-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- general/graphlib/directfb/directfb-intro.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ general/graphlib/directfb/directfb-intro.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -2,5 +2,5 @@
 <title>Introduction to <application>DirectFB</application></title>
 
-<para><application>DirectFB</application> is a graphics library on top of the Linux framebuffer 
+<para><application>DirectFB</application> is a graphics library on top of the Linux frame buffer 
 device. It offers maximum hardware accelerated performance at a
 minimum of resource usage and overhead.</para>
Index: general/graphlib/lcms/lcms-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- general/graphlib/lcms/lcms-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ general/graphlib/lcms/lcms-desc.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@
 <sect3><title>icclink</title>
 <para><command>icclink</command> links two or more profiles into a
-single devicelink profile.</para></sect3>
+single device link profile.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>icctrans</title>
-<para><command>icctrans</command> is a ColorSpace conversion
+<para><command>icctrans</command> is a Color Space conversion
 calculator.</para></sect3>
 
Index: general/graphlib/libungif/libungif-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- general/graphlib/libungif/libungif-intro.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ general/graphlib/libungif/libungif-intro.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
 
 <para>The libungif package contains libraries for reading all
-<acronym>GIF</acronym>s and writing uncompressed ones as well as programs for 
+<acronym>GIF</acronym>s and writing non-compressed ones as well as programs for 
 converting and working with <acronym>GIF</acronym> files.  The libraries are 
 useful for any graphics program wishing to deal with <acronym>GIF</acronym> 
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@
 up images.</para>
 
-<para>The reason libungif only writes uncompressed <acronym>GIF</acronym>s 
+<para>The reason libungif only writes non-compressed <acronym>GIF</acronym>s 
 is due to a legal issue with <acronym>LZW</acronym> compression (which Unisys 
 claims a patent on). Reading <acronym>GIF</acronym>s is not a problem as the 
-uncompression routines do not seem to be limited in this way.  Note that this 
+decompression routines do not seem to be limited in this way.  Note that this 
 has in the past been disputed.  The best way to avoid this whole mess is to 
 simply use libungif for looking at <acronym>GIF</acronym> images on the web, 
Index: general/graphlib/svgalib/svgalib-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- general/graphlib/svgalib/svgalib-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ general/graphlib/svgalib/svgalib-desc.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -19,5 +19,5 @@
 <sect3><title>libvgagl library</title>
 <para><filename class="libraryfile">libvgagl</filename> is a fast 
-framebuffer-level graphics library based on libvga.</para></sect3>
+frame buffer level graphics library based on libvga.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>dumpreg</title>
Index: general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-exp.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-exp.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -13,5 +13,5 @@
 The first test will be whether to install a boot script in the <filename
 class="directory">/etc/rc.d/init.d</filename> directory with the 
-appropriate symbolic links in runlevels 2, 3, 4, and 5. The second is to 
+appropriate symbolic links in run levels 2, 3, 4, and 5. The second is to 
 stop any current fcron processes and start a new one. Since this is
 probably your first install and we want a boot script based upon the
Index: general/sysutils/hdparm/hdparm-inst.xml
===================================================================
--- general/sysutils/hdparm/hdparm-inst.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ general/sysutils/hdparm/hdparm-inst.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -8,8 +8,9 @@
 
 <para>Note that by default, <command>hdparm</command> is installed in
-<filename>/sbin</filename> as some systems may require it on bootup
-before <filename>/usr</filename> is mounted.  If you wish to install
-<command>hdparm</command> under the <filename>/usr</filename> hierarchy, then replace the
-above commands with the following:</para>
+<filename class="directory">/sbin</filename> as some systems may require it 
+during the boot process before <filename class="directory">/usr</filename> 
+is mounted.  If you wish to install <command>hdparm</command> under the 
+<filename class="directory">/usr</filename> hierarchy, then replace the above 
+commands with the following:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>make &amp;&amp;
Index: gnome/lib/gnomelib/libart_lgpl-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- gnome/lib/gnomelib/libart_lgpl-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ gnome/lib/gnomelib/libart_lgpl-desc.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -11,5 +11,5 @@
 <sect3><title>libart_lgpl libraries</title>
 <para><filename class="libraryfile">libart_lgpl</filename> library is
-used as the antialiased rendering engine for
+used as the anti-aliased render engine for
 <application>libgnomecanvas</application>.</para></sect3>
 
Index: introduction/welcome/conventions.xml
===================================================================
--- introduction/welcome/conventions.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ introduction/welcome/conventions.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -28,6 +28,6 @@
 <para><ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/">http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/</ulink></para>
 
-<blockquote><para>This form of text is used for hyperlinks, both within the 
-book and to external pages such as HowTo's, download locations,
+<blockquote><para>This form of text is used for hypertext links, both within 
+the book and to external pages such as HowTo's, download locations,
 websites, etc.</para></blockquote>
 
Index: multimedia/libdriv/libmpeg3/libmpeg3-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/libdriv/libmpeg3/libmpeg3-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ multimedia/libdriv/libmpeg3/libmpeg3-desc.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -17,6 +17,6 @@
 
 <sect3><title>mpeg3cat</title>
-<para><command>mpeg3cat</command> concatenates elementary streams or demultiplexes a program
-stream.</para></sect3>
+<para><command>mpeg3cat</command> concatenates elementary streams or
+demultiplexes a program stream (separates components of the stream).</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>mpeg3dump</title>
Index: multimedia/libdriv/libogg/libogg-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/libdriv/libogg/libogg-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ multimedia/libdriv/libogg/libogg-desc.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
 
 <sect3><title>ogg libraries</title>
-<para><filename class="libraryfile">libogg</filename> libraries provide the functions for programs 
-wishing to read or write <filename>OGG</filename> formatted bitstreams.</para>
+<para><filename class="libraryfile">libogg</filename> libraries provide the 
+functions for programs wishing to read or write <filename>OGG</filename> 
+formatted bit streams.</para>
 </sect3>
 
Index: multimedia/libdriv/libogg/libogg-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/libdriv/libogg/libogg-intro.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ multimedia/libdriv/libogg/libogg-intro.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
 <para>The <application>libogg</application> package contains the Ogg file 
 structure. This is useful for creating (encoding) or playing (decoding) a 
-single physical bitstream.</para>
+single physical bit stream.</para>
 
 <sect3><title>Package information</title>
Index: multimedia/libdriv/sdl/sdl-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/libdriv/sdl/sdl-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ multimedia/libdriv/sdl/sdl-desc.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -12,5 +12,5 @@
 <para>The Simple DirectMedia Layer is a generic <acronym>API</acronym> that 
 provides low level access to audio, keyboard, mouse, joystick, 3D hardware via 
-OpenGL, and 2D framebuffer across multiple platforms.</para></sect3>
+OpenGL, and 2D frame buffer across multiple platforms.</para></sect3>
 
 </sect2>
Index: multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-desc.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-desc.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -31,6 +31,6 @@
 
 <sect3><title>tcdemux</title>
-<para><command>tcdemux</command> demultiplexes audio/video input that contains 
-multiple streams, e.g. <acronym>VOB</acronym> files.</para></sect3>
+<para><command>tcdemux</command> demultiplexes (separates)  audio/video input 
+that contains multiple streams, e.g. <acronym>VOB</acronym> files..</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>tcextract</title>
@@ -77,5 +77,5 @@
 <filename>RAW</filename> format, process <filename>RAW</filename> video and 
 audio and convert <filename>RAW</filename> audio and video to other formats to 
-be written into a filetype of choice. Read the documentation.</para></sect3>
+be written into a file type of choice. Read the documentation.</para></sect3>
 
 </sect2>
Index: postlfs/filesystems/ext3.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/filesystems/ext3.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ postlfs/filesystems/ext3.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -23,9 +23,11 @@
 <para>In the above line, replace 
 <filename>/dev/hd<replaceable>XX</replaceable></filename> by the
-partition (e.g. <filename>/dev/hda2</filename>), <filename class="directory">
-/mnt_point</filename> by the mount point (e.g. <filename>/home</filename>). The 
-<option>0</option> in the last field ensures that the partition will not be checked for 
-consistency during bootup by the checkfs script. You may replace the ext3 fs 
-type in the above by auto if you want to ensure that the partition is mounted 
+partition (e.g. <filename>/dev/hda2</filename>), 
+<filename class="directory">/mnt_point</filename> by the mount point (e.g. 
+<filename class="directory">/home</filename>). The <option>0</option> in the 
+last field ensures that the partition will not be checked for 
+consistency during the boot process  by the <command>checkfs</command> script. 
+You may replace the <option>ext3</option> fs type in the above by
+<option>auto</option> if you want to ensure that the partition is mounted 
 if you accidentally skip enabling the ext3 support in the kernel.</para>
 
Index: postlfs/security/firewalling/busybox.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/security/firewalling/busybox.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ postlfs/security/firewalling/busybox.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -98,9 +98,9 @@
 
 <para>These are only examples to show you some of the capabilities of the new 
-firewalling-code in Linux-Kernel 2.4. Have a look at the man page of
+firewall code in Linux-Kernel 2.4. Have a look at the man page of
 iptables.
 There you will find more of them. The port-numbers you'll need for this
 can be found in <filename>/etc/services</filename>, in case you didn't
-find them by trial and error in your logfile.</para>
+find them by trial and error in your log file.</para>
 
 <para>If you add any of your offered or accessed services such as the above,
Index: postlfs/security/firewalling/disclaimer.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/security/firewalling/disclaimer.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ postlfs/security/firewalling/disclaimer.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -10,13 +10,13 @@
 is a complex issue that requires careful configuration.
 The scripts quoted here are simply intended to give examples as to how
-firewalling works, they are not intended to fit into any imaginable 
+a firewall works, they are not intended to fit into any imaginable 
 configuration and may not prevent any imaginable attack.</para>
 
 <para>The purpose of this text is simply to give you a hint on how to get
-started with firewalling.</para>
+started with a firewall.</para>
 
 <para>Customization of these scripts for your specific situation will
 be necessary for an optimal configuration, but you should make a serious
-study of the iptables documentation and firewalling in general before hacking
+study of the iptables documentation and creating firewalls in general before hacking
 away.  Have a look at the list of <xref linkend="postlfs-security-fw-library"/> at the end 
 of this section for more details.  Here you will find a list of URLs that 
Index: postlfs/security/firewalling/intro.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/security/firewalling/intro.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ postlfs/security/firewalling/intro.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -11,5 +11,5 @@
 buffer-overflows and any other imaginable problem regarding its 
 security, and where you trusted every user accessing your services 
-to aim no harm, you wouldn't need to do firewalling!  
+to aim no harm, you wouldn't need to do have a firewall!  
 In the real world however, daemons may be misconfigured, 
 exploits against essential services are freely available, you 
@@ -49,5 +49,5 @@
 To minimize the risk of compromising the firewall itself it
 should generally have only one role, that of protecting the intranet.
-Although not completely riskless, the tasks of doing the routing 
+Although not completely risk free, the tasks of doing the routing 
 and eventually IP masquerading (rewriting IP-headers 
 of the packets it routes from clients with private IP-addresses onto 
Index: postlfs/security/firewalling/kernel.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/security/firewalling/kernel.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ postlfs/security/firewalling/kernel.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 <sect2 id="postlfs-security-fw-kernel" xreflabel="getting a firewalling-enabled Kernel">
-<title>Getting a firewalling-enabled Kernel</title>
+<title>Getting a firewall enabled Kernel</title>
 
-<para>If you want your Linux-Box to do firewalling you must first ensure 
+<para>If you want your Linux-Box to have a firewall, you must first ensure 
 that your kernel has been compiled with the relevant options turned on
-<!-- <footnote><para>If you needed assistance howto configure, compile and install 
+<!-- <footnote><para>If you needed assistance how to configure, compile and install 
 a new kernel, refer back to chapter VIII of the LinuxFromScratch book, 
 <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/view/3.1/chapter08/kernel.html">Installing a kernel</ulink>
@@ -33,5 +33,5 @@
 <!--
 <table frame='none'>
-<title>Essential config-options for a firewalling-enabled Kernel</title>
+<title>Essential config-options for a firewall enabled Kernel</title>
 
 <tgroup cols='5'>
@@ -122,5 +122,5 @@
 <entry><userinput>Fast switching</userinput></entry>
 <entry>Make sure to disable it because it would setup a bypass around
-your firewalling-rules.</entry>
+your firewall rules.</entry>
 <entry>w\</entry>
 <entry>CONFIG_NET_FASTROUTE</entry>
Index: postlfs/security/firewalling/library.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/security/firewalling/library.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ postlfs/security/firewalling/library.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 <sect3 id="postlfs-security-fw-library" xreflabel="Links for further reading">
-<title>Where to start with further reading on firewalling.</title>
+<title>Where to start with further reading on firewalls.</title>
 
 <para><blockquote><literallayout>
Index: postlfs/security/firewalling/masqrouter.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/security/firewalling/masqrouter.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ postlfs/security/firewalling/masqrouter.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -26,6 +26,6 @@
 echo "of the quoted configuration rules."
 echo "You can find some quite comprehensive information"
-echo "about firewalling in Chapter 4 of the BLFS book."
-echo "http://beyond.linuxfromscratch.org/"
+echo "about firewalls in Chapter 4 of the BLFS book."
+echo "http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/blfs"
 echo
 
Index: postlfs/security/firewalling/stop.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/security/firewalling/stop.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ postlfs/security/firewalling/stop.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -2,5 +2,5 @@
 <title>firewall.stop</title>
 
-<para>If you need to turn firewalling off, this script will do it:</para>
+<para>If you need to turn the firewall off, this script will do it:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>cat &gt; /etc/rc.d/init.d/firewall.stop &lt;&lt; "EOF"</command>
Index: postlfs/security/iptables.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/security/iptables.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ postlfs/security/iptables.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -3,11 +3,11 @@
 <title>iptables-&iptables-version;</title>
 
-<para>The next part of this chapter deals with firewalling.  The
-principle firewalling tool for Linux, as of the 2.4 kernel series, is
+<para>The next part of this chapter deals with firewalls.  The
+principle firewall tool for Linux, as of the 2.4 kernel series, is
 <application>iptables</application>.  It replaces
 <application>ipchains</application> from the 2.2 series and
 <application>ipfwadm</application> from the
 2.0 series. You will need to install <application>iptables</application> if 
-you intend on using any form of firewalling.</para>
+you intend on using any form of a firewall.</para>
 
 &iptables-intro;
Index: postlfs/security/iptables/iptables-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- postlfs/security/iptables/iptables-intro.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ postlfs/security/iptables/iptables-intro.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -2,5 +2,5 @@
 <title>Introduction to <application>iptables</application></title>
 
-<para>To use firewalling, as well as installing
+<para>To use a firewall, as well as installing
 <application>iptables</application>, you will need
 to configure the relevant options into your kernel.  This is discussed
Index: server/other/openldap/openldap-exp.xml
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--- server/other/openldap/openldap-exp.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ server/other/openldap/openldap-exp.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -10,5 +10,5 @@
 
 <para><option>--enable-ldbm</option>: Build <command>slapd</command>
-with primary database backend using either <application>Berkeley
+with primary database back end using either <application>Berkeley
 DB</application> or
 <application><acronym>GNU</acronym> Database Manager</application>.</para> 
Index: x/installing/xfree86-setup.xml
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--- x/installing/xfree86-setup.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ x/installing/xfree86-setup.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -147,7 +147,5 @@
 normally set up in <filename>/etc/inittab</filename>.  Most of the information 
 you need to customize <command>xdm</command> is found in its man page.  To 
-execute <command>xdm</command> during bootup, change the initdefault level to 5 and 
-add the following lines to 
-<filename>/etc/inittab</filename>:</para>
+execute <command>xdm</command> during bootup, change the initdefault level to 5 and add the following lines to <filename>/etc/inittab</filename>:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput># Run xdm as a separate service
Index: xsoft/suites/openoffice/openoffice-inst.xml
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--- xsoft/suites/openoffice/openoffice-inst.xml	(revision 5e18c49cdd45ab6dc9ac0ddf47f5f52f8b5885a1)
+++ xsoft/suites/openoffice/openoffice-inst.xml	(revision c2ee009c742ff365bb2dc66a72cfaaadae6992d4)
@@ -36,5 +36,5 @@
 bash -c "source LinuxIntelEnv.Set.sh; dmake"</command></userinput></screen>
 
-<para>If you have downloaded localized helpcontent zip files, you will need
+<para>If you have downloaded localized help content zip files, you will need
 to unzip them to the appropriate directory as mentioned below and then recreate
 the installation set.</para>
