Index: basicnet/netprogs/cvs/cvs-config.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netprogs/cvs/cvs-config.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/cvs/cvs-config.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -17,5 +17,8 @@
 <para><filename>~/.cvswrappers</filename> specifies wrappers to be used in 
 addition to those specified in the <filename>CVSROOT/cvswrappers</filename> 
-file in the repository.</para></sect3>
+file in the repository.</para>
+
+<para><filename>~/.cvspass</filename> can hold passwords to complete
+logins to servers.</para></sect3>
 
 </sect2>
Index: basicnet/netprogs/inetutils/inetutils-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netprogs/inetutils/inetutils-desc.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/inetutils/inetutils-desc.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -38,5 +38,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>tftp</title>
-<para><command>tftp</command> is a trivial file transfer program.</para></sect3>
+<para><command>tftp</command> is an Internet Trivial File Transfer Protocol.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>whois</title>
@@ -68,5 +68,6 @@
 
 <sect3><title>uucpd</title>
-<para>No description available.</para></sect3>
+<para><command>uucpd</command> is the server for supporting
+<acronym>UUCP</acronym> connections over networks.</para></sect3>
 
 </sect2>
Index: basicnet/netprogs/inetutils/inetutils-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netprogs/inetutils/inetutils-exp.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/inetutils/inetutils-exp.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -12,10 +12,10 @@
 
 <para><option>--disable-whois</option>: This switch will prevent
-<application>Inetutils</application> installing a WhoIs client, since the
+<application>Inetutils</application> installing a whois client, since the
 included whois client is out of date. Add this option if you plan on installing
 <xref linkend="whois"/>.</para>
 
 <para><option>--with-pam</option>: This switch makes <application>Inetutils
-</application> compile against for <application>Linux-<acronym>PAM</acronym></application>.
+</application> link against <application>Linux-<acronym>PAM</acronym></application> libraries.
 Add this option if you want to utilize <acronym>PAM</acronym>.
 </para>
@@ -23,6 +23,6 @@
 <para><option>--disable-servers</option>: Some of the servers included with
 <application>Inetutils</application> are insecure in nature and in some cases
-better alternative exist. You can choose this switch and enable only the servers
-you want to avoid installing unneeded servers.</para>
+better alternatives exist. You can choose this switch to enable only the
+servers you need, avoiding the  installation of unneeded servers.</para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: basicnet/netprogs/ncftp/ncftp-config.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netprogs/ncftp/ncftp-config.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/ncftp/ncftp-config.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -10,5 +10,5 @@
 
 <para>Most <application>Nc<acronym>FTP</acronym></application> configuration is done while in the 
-program and the configuration files are dealt with automatically.  One 
+program, and the configuration files are dealt with automatically.  One 
 exception to this is <filename>~/.ncftp/prefs_v3</filename>.  There are various 
 options to alter in there, including:</para>
Index: basicnet/netprogs/ncftp/ncftp-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netprogs/ncftp/ncftp-exp.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/ncftp/ncftp-exp.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -2,5 +2,5 @@
 <title>Command explanations</title>
 
-<para><screen><command>make -C libncftp shared &amp;&amp; 
+<para><screen><command>make -C libncftp shared  
 make -C libncftp soinstall</command></screen>
 These commands make and install the dynamic library <filename
Index: basicnet/netprogs/ncpfs/ncpfs-config.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netprogs/ncpfs/ncpfs-config.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/ncpfs/ncpfs-config.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -9,6 +9,5 @@
 
 <para>A config file <filename>~/.nwclient</filename> should be placed
-in the home directory of each user that intends to use <application>ncpfs
-</application>. The permissions on this file should be set to 600, for obvious 
+in the home directory of each user that intends to use <application>ncpfs</application>. The permissions on this file should be set to 600, for obvious 
 security reasons.  The configuration file should contain a single line
 per server that the user will use.  Each line should contain
Index: basicnet/netprogs/nfs-utils/nfs-utils-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netprogs/nfs-utils/nfs-utils-intro.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/nfs-utils/nfs-utils-intro.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
 <para>The <application>nfs-utils</application> package contains the userspace server and client
 tools necessary to use the kernel's nfs-abilities. <acronym>NFS</acronym> is a protocol that
-allows sharing disk partitions over the network.</para>
+allows sharing file systems over the network.</para>
 
 <sect3><title>Package information</title>
Index: basicnet/netprogs/ntp/ntp-config.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netprogs/ntp/ntp-config.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netprogs/ntp/ntp-config.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -37,10 +37,10 @@
 <sect3><title>Synchronizing the time</title>
 
-<para>There are two options. Option one is to use run <command>ntpd</command>
+<para>There are two options. Option one is to run <command>ntpd</command>
 continuously and allow it to synchronize the time in a gradual manner. The other
 option is to run <command>ntpd</command> periodically (using cron)
 and update the time each time <command>ntpd</command> is scheduled.</para>
 
-<para>If you choose Option one, then install
+<para>If you choose Option one, then install the 
 <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/ntp</filename>
 init script included in the
@@ -49,6 +49,6 @@
 <screen><userinput><command>make install-ntp</command></userinput></screen>
 
-<para>If you prefer to start ntpd periodically, add the following command to
-the root's <filename>crontab</filename>:</para>
+<para>If you prefer to run ntpd periodically, add the following command to
+root's <filename>crontab</filename>:</para>
 <screen><userinput>ntpd -q</userinput></screen>
 
Index: basicnet/netutils/bind-utils/bind-utils-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netutils/bind-utils/bind-utils-exp.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netutils/bind-utils/bind-utils-exp.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -2,9 +2,7 @@
 <title>Command explanations</title>
 
-<para><screen><userinput>make -C lib/...</userinput></screen>
-Build the libs that are needed for the client programs.</para>
+<para><command>make -C lib/...</command>: This command  builds the librariess that are needed for the client programs.</para>
 
-<para><screen><userinput>make -C bin/dig</userinput></screen>
-Build the client programs.</para>
+<para><command>make -C bin/dig</command>: This command  builds the client programs.</para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: basicnet/netutils/netutils.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netutils/netutils.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netutils/netutils.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
 
 <para>This chapter contains some tools that come in handy when the
-network need some investigating.</para>
+network needs investigating.</para>
 
 &traceroute;
Index: basicnet/netutils/nmap/nmap-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netutils/nmap/nmap-desc.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netutils/nmap/nmap-desc.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
 
 <para>The <application>Nmap</application> package contains
-<command>nmap</command>.</para>
+<command>nmap</command> and optionally <command>nmapfe</command>.</para>
 
 </sect2>
@@ -14,3 +14,6 @@
 <acronym>TCP</acronym>/<acronym>IP</acronym> fingerprinting.</para></sect3>
 
+<sect3><title>nmapfe</title>
+<para><command>nmapfe</command> is the graphical front end for
+nmap.</para></sect3>
 </sect2>
Index: basicnet/netutils/nmap/nmap-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netutils/nmap/nmap-intro.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netutils/nmap/nmap-intro.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -19,5 +19,5 @@
 <sect4><title>Optional</title>
 <para><xref linkend="openssl"/>, <xref linkend="pcre"/>,
-<xref linkend="GTK"/> (for building the front-end) and
+<xref linkend="GTK"/> (for building the graphical front-end) and
 <xref linkend="libpcap"/></para></sect4>
 </sect3>
Index: basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute-desc.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute-desc.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -11,5 +11,5 @@
 <para><command>traceroute</command> does basically what it says: it traces the 
 route your packets take from the host you are working on to another host on a 
-network, showing all the intermediate steps (routers) along the way.</para>
+network, showing all the intermediate steps (gateways) along the way.</para>
 </sect3>
 
Index: basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute-exp.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute-exp.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -8,5 +8,5 @@
 
 <para><command>make install</command>: Installs <command>traceroute</command> 
-with <acronym>UID</acronym> set to  root in the <filename>/usr/sbin</filename> directory. This makes it 
+with <acronym>SUID</acronym> set to  root in the <filename>/usr/sbin</filename> directory. This makes it 
 possible for all users to execute <command>traceroute</command>. For absolute 
 security, turn off the <acronym>SUID</acronym> bit in <command>traceroute</command>'s file 
@@ -14,13 +14,13 @@
 <screen><command>chmod 0755 /usr/sbin/traceroute</command></screen>
 
-<para>The risk is that if a security problem such as a buffer overflow were 
+<para>The risk is that if a security problem such as a buffer overflow was 
 ever found in the <application>Traceroute</application> code, a regular user 
 on your system could gain root access if the program is
-<acronym>SUID</acronym> root. Removing 
-the <acronym>SUID</acronym> permission of course also makes it impossible for users other than 
+<acronym>SUID</acronym> root. Of course, removing 
+the <acronym>SUID</acronym> permission also makes it impossible for users other than 
 root to utilize <command>traceroute</command>, so decide what's right for your 
 individual situation.</para>
 
-<para>Now, to be completely <acronym>FHS</acronym> compliant, as is our aim, if 
+<para>Our aim is to be completely <acronym>FHS</acronym> compliant, so if 
 you do leave the <command>traceroute</command> binary
 <acronym>SUID</acronym> root, then you 
Index: basicnet/netutils/whois/whois-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- basicnet/netutils/whois/whois-desc.xml	(revision 62e9283bab054aa37e34ad77797809ca3b80c85c)
+++ basicnet/netutils/whois/whois-desc.xml	(revision c76806a9680ba2996348f7eada063b18cf39df7e)
@@ -2,6 +2,5 @@
 <title>Contents</title>
 
-<para>The <application>Whois</application> package contains <command>whois
-</command>.</para>
+<para>The <application>Whois</application> package contains <command>whois</command>.</para>
 
 </sect2>
