Index: x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-config.xml
===================================================================
--- x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-config.xml	(revision 77b3389d9742513e1bdb04c4d0180d496d463880)
+++ x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-config.xml	(revision c9bc781d7e8885a0b0f6603adc1e6db0370538b6)
@@ -6,17 +6,13 @@
 Run</para> <screen><userinput><command>ldconfig</command></userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Add <filename class='directory'>/usr/X11R6/bin</filename> to your
-<envar>PATH</envar> environment 
-variable in <filename>.bash_profile</filename>.  The statement should
-look something like <parameter>PATH=$PATH:/usr/X11R6/bin</parameter>
-and be placed before the <command>export PATH</command>
-statement.</para>
+<para>Ensure <filename class='directory'>/usr/X11R6/bin</filename> is added to your
+<envar>PATH</envar> environment variable. Instructions for doing this are described
+in the section "<xref linkend='postlfs-config-profile'/>."</para>
+ 
+<para>Expand the <envar>PKG_CONFIG_PATH</envar> so that other packages
+can find <application>X</application> libraries. Procedures for this are also
+described in the section "<xref linkend='postlfs-config-profile'/>."</para>
 
-<para>Expand the <envar>PKG_CONFIG_PATH</envar> so that other packages
-can find <application>XFree86</application> libraries. Add the following line to
-<filename>.bash_profile</filename> for root user:</para>
-<screen><userinput><command>export PKG_CONFIG_PATH=/usr/X11R6/lib/pkgconfig</command></userinput></screen>
-
-<para>Run</para>
+<para>Run:</para>
 <screen><userinput><command>source ~/.bash_profile</command></userinput></screen>
 
@@ -27,5 +23,5 @@
 a serial mouse on the first serial port would be linked to ttyS1.</para>
 
-<para>Create the <filename>XF86Config</filename> file with
+<para>Create the <filename>XF86Config</filename> file with:
 <screen><userinput><command>cd ~
 XFree86 -configure</command></userinput></screen>
@@ -67,5 +63,5 @@
 </itemizedlist>
 
-<para>Test the system with
+<para>Test the system with:
 <screen><userinput><command>XFree86 -xf86config ~/XF86Config.new</command></userinput></screen>
 You will only get a gray background with an X-shaped mouse cursor, but it 
@@ -75,8 +71,8 @@
 wrong.</para>
 
-<para>Move the configuration file to its final location</para>
+<para>Move the configuration file to its final location:</para>
 <screen><userinput><command>mv ~/XF86Config.new /etc/X11/XF86Config</command></userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Create <filename>.xinitrc</filename>
+<para>Create <filename>.xinitrc</filename>:
 <screen><userinput><command>cat &gt; ~/.xinitrc &lt;&lt; "EOF"</command>
 # Begin .xinitrc file
@@ -106,7 +102,7 @@
 </note>
 
-<para>Start <application>X</application> with 
+<para>Start <application>X</application> with: 
 <screen><userinput><command>startx</command></userinput></screen>
-to get basic functional <application>X</application> Window System.</para>
+to get a basic functional <application>X</application> Window System.</para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-desc.xml	(revision 77b3389d9742513e1bdb04c4d0180d496d463880)
+++ x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-desc.xml	(revision c9bc781d7e8885a0b0f6603adc1e6db0370538b6)
@@ -46,5 +46,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>twm</title>
-<para><command>twm</command> is a Tab Window Manager for the
+<para><command>twm</command> (Tab Window Manager) is a window manager included with the 
 <application>X</application> Window System.</para></sect3>
 
Index: x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-exp.xml	(revision 77b3389d9742513e1bdb04c4d0180d496d463880)
+++ x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-exp.xml	(revision c9bc781d7e8885a0b0f6603adc1e6db0370538b6)
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 <envar>WORLDOPTS</envar>="" disables the default setting to continue after 
 encountering an error. <parameter>2&gt;&amp;1</parameter> redirects error messages 
-to the same location as normal output. The <command>tee</command> command 
+to the same location as standard output. The <command>tee</command> command 
 allows viewing of the output while logging the results to a file. The parentheses 
-around the command run the entire comand in a subshell and finally the 
+around the command runs the entire comand in a subshell and finally the 
 <command>exit $PIPESTATUS</command> ensures the result of the <command>make</command>
 is returned as the result and not the result of the <command>tee</command> command.</para>
Index: x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-inst.xml
===================================================================
--- x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-inst.xml	(revision 77b3389d9742513e1bdb04c4d0180d496d463880)
+++ x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-inst.xml	(revision c9bc781d7e8885a0b0f6603adc1e6db0370538b6)
@@ -2,14 +2,14 @@
 <title>Installation of <application>XFree86</application></title>
 
-<sect3>
-<title>Kernel Compilation Settings</title>
-<para>If you have an Intel P6 (Pentium Pro, Pentium II and later), it is recommended 
-that you compile <acronym>MTRR</acronym> (Memory Type Range Registers) support into the kernel.
-The kernel can map Cyrix and AMD <acronym>CPU</acronym>s to the
-<acronym>MTRR</acronym> interface, so selecting this
-option is useful for those processors also.
-This option is found in the 
-"Processor type and features" menu.  It can increase performance of
-image write operations 2.5 times or more on <acronym>PCI</acronym> or
+<sect3> 
+<title>Kernel Compilation Settings</title> 
+
+<para>If you have an Intel P6 (Pentium Pro, Pentium II and later), it is
+recommended that you compile <acronym>MTRR</acronym> (Memory Type Range
+Registers) support into the kernel.  The kernel can map Cyrix and AMD
+<acronym>CPU</acronym>s to the <acronym>MTRR</acronym> interface, so selecting
+this option is useful for those processors also.  This option is found in the
+"Processor type and features" menu.  It can increase performance of image write
+operations 2.5 times or more on <acronym>PCI</acronym> or
 <acronym>AGP</acronym> video cards.</para>
 
Index: x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-intro.xml	(revision 77b3389d9742513e1bdb04c4d0180d496d463880)
+++ x/installing/xfree86/xfree86-intro.xml	(revision c9bc781d7e8885a0b0f6603adc1e6db0370538b6)
@@ -2,11 +2,10 @@
 <title>Introduction to <application>XFree86</application></title>
 
-<para><application>XFree86</application> is a freely redistributable open-source 
-implementation of the 
-<application>X</application> Window System. <application>XFree86</application> provides a client/server 
-interface between display 
-hardware (the mouse, keyboard, and video displays) and the desktop environment, 
-while also providing both the windowing infrastructure and a standardized 
-application interface (<acronym>API</acronym>).</para>
+<para><application>XFree86</application> is a freely redistributable
+open-source implementation of the <application>X</application> Window System.
+<application>XFree86</application> provides a client/server interface between
+display hardware (the mouse, keyboard, and video displays) and the desktop
+environment, while also providing both the windowing infrastructure and a
+standardized application interface (<acronym>API</acronym>).</para>
 
 <sect3><title>Package information</title>
Index: x/xorg/xorg.xml
===================================================================
--- x/xorg/xorg.xml	(revision 77b3389d9742513e1bdb04c4d0180d496d463880)
+++ x/xorg/xorg.xml	(revision c9bc781d7e8885a0b0f6603adc1e6db0370538b6)
@@ -322,5 +322,5 @@
  
 <para>Expand the <envar>PKG_CONFIG_PATH</envar> so that other packages
-can find <application>Xorg</application> libraries. Procedures for this are also
+can find <application>X</application> libraries. Procedures for this are also
 described in the section "<xref linkend='postlfs-config-profile'/>."</para>
 
