Changeset d5cc78a for postlfs/filesystems/uefi-bootloaders/efivar.xml

Timestamp:

03/23/2021 07:24:51 PM (3 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, lazarus, lxqt, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

5910991c

Parents:

a2c3f1d3

Message:

Editorial changes to new evi pages.

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@24395 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• postlfs/filesystems/uefi-bootloaders/efivar.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

postlfs/filesystems/uefi-bootloaders/efivar.xml

@@ -90 +90 @@
 
     <para>
-      At first, apply a patch to fix an issue breaking the build with GCC 9
-      or later:
+      First, apply a patch to fix an issue building with GCC 9 or later:
     </para>
 
@@ -97 +96 @@
 
     <para>
-      Build <application>efivar</application> with the following
-      commands:
+      Build <application>efivar</application> with the following commands:
     </para>
 
@@ -132 +130 @@
     <para>
       <parameter>CFLAGS="-O2 -Wno-stringop-truncation"</parameter>:
-      This option overrides the compiler flags defaulted by this package,
-      to avoid build failure.
+      This option overrides the default compiler flags to avoid a build failure.
     </para>