Changeset d5cc78a for postlfs/filesystems/uefi-bootloaders/grub-efi.xml

Timestamp:

03/23/2021 07:24:51 PM (3 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, lazarus, lxqt, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

5910991c

Parents:

a2c3f1d3

Message:

Editorial changes to new evi pages.

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@24395 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• postlfs/filesystems/uefi-bootloaders/grub-efi.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

postlfs/filesystems/uefi-bootloaders/grub-efi.xml

@@ -123 +123 @@
 
     <para>
-      At first, install font data as the
+      First, install font data as the
       <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:
     </para>
@@ -152 +152 @@
             --with-platform=efi  \
             --disable-werror     &amp;&amp;
-
 make</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>
-      This package does not have a test suite providing meaningful result.
+      This package does not have a test suite providing meaningful results.
     </para>
 
@@ -172 +171 @@
 
     <para>
-      <parameter>--enable-grub-mkfont</parameter>: Built the tool named
-      <command>grub-mkfont</command> to generate font file for the boot
-      loader, from the font data we've installed.
+      <parameter>--enable-grub-mkfont</parameter>: Build the tool named
+      <command>grub-mkfont</command> to generate the font file for the boot
+      loader from the font data we've installed.
     </para>
 
     <warning>
       <para>If the recommended dependency <xref linkend="freetype2"/> is not
-      installed, it's possible to omit this option and build GRUB.  However,
+      installed, it is possible to omit this option and build GRUB.  However,
       if <command>grub-mkfont</command> is not built, or the unicode font
       data is not avaliable at the time GRUB is built, GRUB won't install
       any font for the boot loader.  The GRUB boot menu will be displayed
-      in an ugly way, and the early stage of kernel initialization will be
-      in <quote>blind mode</quote> - you can't see any kernel message before
+      using a coarse font and the early stage of kernel initialization will be
+      in <quote>blind mode</quote> &mdash; you can't see any kernel messages before
       the graphics card driver is initialized.  It will be very difficult to
-      diagnostic some boot issue (especially, if the graphics driver is
-      built as module).</para>
+      diagnose some boot issues, especially if the graphics driver is
+      built as module.</para>
     </warning>
 
     <para>
-      <parameter>--with-platform=efi</parameter>: Ensures to build GRUB with
-      for EFI.
+      <parameter>--with-platform=efi</parameter>: Ensures building GRUB with
+      EFI enabled.
     </para>