Changeset d8a77b2

Timestamp:

10/02/2024 04:36:45 PM (5 days ago)

Author:

Douglas R. Reno <renodr@…>

Branches:

trunk

Children:

1f568d14

Parents:

51d2a43

Message:

Cargo-c: minor rewords on the new text added to the page.

I like the way this was handled. :)

File:

• general/prog/cargo-c.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

general/prog/cargo-c.xml

@@ -106 +106 @@
 
     <para>
-      At first, download a file to ensure <command>cargo</command> to
-      use the dependency versions specified by the upstream developers
+      First, download a file to ensure that <command>cargo</command> uses
+      the dependency versions specified by the upstream developers
       when this cargo-c version (&cargo-c-version;) was released.
-      Otherwise the latest versions of the dependencies would be used and
+      Without this, the latest versions of the dependencies would be used and
       they might cause breakages:
     </para>
@@ -118 +118 @@
       <para>
         Normally we would put such a download into an
-        <quote>Additional Download</quote> section.  But in this case we
+        <quote>Additional Downloads</quote> section. But in this case we
         cannot tell the package name and version from the file name
         <filename>Cargo.lock</filename>, so it's better not to put the